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    Chapter 16

    Excruciating chapter! I’ve been binge reading this story for several days and really enjoyed the story and characters. There’s depth to each character, flaws and all. The story had many twists and turns to keep the readers interested. I understand why you have ended the story the way you did, and it’s probably the most realistic ending based on this worlds hatred of anyone who is truly different from everyone else. Intolerance and hatred are the tools used to keep control over the masses. GA usually tends more toward the HEA endings which provides escape and entertainment in a decidedly hostile world. Excellent story telling! Thank you!😃❤️
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    Chapter 49

    Excellent chapter! Drew is accepting of the security suggestions that Jeff has made and he’s realizing that he can’t be Aria’s bodyguard any longer because he’s too closely involved to be objective. New guards will take time to get used to, but they are absolutely necessary. The wake up together with both twins was amazing and heartfelt. They’ve begun to settle into their new relationship and are so much happier for it. Jays commentary about things rising were especially funny. The twins rules about giving Jay ammunition to use against them seems like they were learned from experience. Ceriann and Drew’s relationship has improved dramatically and looks like it will become much stronger in the future. Mam will be ecstatic when she’s able to visit the Villa. The erratic pace of the boys lives in the future will definitely be trying for Drew, but with their support he will come through perfectly. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  3. Outstanding chapter! Jimbo is making progress in dealing with the abuse of his childhood, he’s learning about accepting praise and being grateful for it without fear of being beaten. His difficulties with learning Hebrew are natural, all languages are overwhelming when you are first starting to learn them. The sudden changes in Mr. Jennings outlook on money and costs is a little bit concerning. The friendships that they are making are very much adding normalcy to an eccentric lifestyle. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  4. Outstanding chapter! The puppies have arrived and the entire family is happy to have them. The comments about having to clean up after the puppies is classic child education and shock that they are responsible for playing with, feeding them both, making sure that they have plenty of clean and clear water, as well as taking them out for walks and letting them do their business and cleaning up after they are finished even in winter when it’s raining or snowing. Holly, Hayden and Hunter are becoming aware of how lucky they were that their mother made such amazing arrangements for them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 9

    Excellent chapter! Trenton is clearly not used to being involved in a committed relationship, he’s seriously overreacting to the business card from an unannounced 16 year old who is seriously spoiled. Trenton hasn’t spoken to his husband since snapping at him rudely and sending him to pickup the luggage of the spoiled rich kid. Travis is definitely going to corner Trenton and let him know that his behavior has become rude and self centered. Trenton will need to learn how to be involved with another human being. He’s been alone and self supporting his whole life. There’s hope that Travis will have the patience to show him what loving,caring and being supportive of your spouse. Trenton’s father certainly seems incapable of discussing his plans with his only son, one surprise after another. The caretakers son seems to be completely taken with Xander. It will be interesting to see how all of these characters and issues play out. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  6. Excellent chapter! The family is finally getting a pair of puppies for the boys to have fun with and to teach them about responsibility. Pets have been long overdue in the Currie home. Ryan’s trip to see Owen and then returning home with him will be pleasant for both close friends. Ryan is truly bisexual since he’s currently pursuing Holly but is fine having sex with Owen as well. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 48

    Outstanding chapter! Lady Jane finally comes through for the twins with a spectacular gift of the Villa Britannia. She’s just made it back onto my good list. The Villa is private and secure and will give them all a chance to recover and regain their happiness while being pampered. Drew was a little bit abrupt with Aria about security and obviously scared him deeply. He’s still holding onto the delusion that he can be their bodyguard as well as their husband. I’m afraid that Jeff will have to set him straight about how to handle security for the future. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 15

    Amazing chapter! The plot and its perpetrators is unraveling quickly and they are unaware that the authorities are closely monitoring their activities. Isaak will be imprisoned for the murder of his wife and Constantine will be tried for assassination and treason to the Crown. I’m sure that an executioner is going to carry out his sentence alongside the other conspirators. I’m fairly certain that Gia isn’t involved. The plan that will be revealed in the next chapter should prevent the assassination of the Queen while catching the balance of the conspirators in the act. Petr is shocked by the post that Leon made, but is tactically aware enough not to let anyone know. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 14

    Outstanding chapter! The ruse of Prince Leon’s assassination is going to be difficult for his friends to forgive, however, when the conspirators are all rounded up, and the truth of who in the Royal Family is behind the murders of Prince Kleopas and his wife as well as the assassination attempts on Prince Leon will show that their really was no other way to stop this horrific plot. The knowledge that the Queen herself approved the plan will help placate Leon’s friends over their lying to them all and when she announces that Leon is the Crown Prince. Petr will make Logan suffer for his deceit, but will relent when the Royal Wedding is announced. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  10. Outstanding chapter! Danny and Brandon’s birthday trip for Fathers Day was really special for them. We now know that Noah and Holly are attracted to each other. The conversation between Noah and his Dads was embarrassing for Noah but a trip down memory lane for all of us who’ve been with you on this incredible journey remembering Danny and Brandon’s first time with Josh helping them with the care only a loving parent can provide. Josh started them down the road to taking the Hotel forward into the future. It’s been quite a trip, but we’d not have missed a single moment. I’m hoping that you’ll continue this amazing story and cast of characters long into the future. I’m sorry for getting a bit maudlin, but you’re one of the best Authors I have ever read. Thanks for reminding us why we’ve followed this story for so long. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapters! 😃❤️
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    A New Routine

    Outstanding chapter! Holly and Noah’s visits to the clinic are giving them both a real look at their future careers. Noah’s new car will give him the ability to get to and from university. The new SUV that Dion and Trey purchased will simplify the transportation needs of the family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 7

    Excellent chapter! The Commodore and cadets were happy to get a tour of Aquaria and then an invitation for a 3 day cruise. The public tours went well despite the overwhelming crowds. Travis’ appearance can’t be a good omen. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 6

    Outstanding chapter! Congratulations to Trenton and Travis on their wedding! The expansion of the fleet of submarines is commendable and Trenton being promoted to Director and transferred back to Aquaria where he’s in charge of the new fleet and the new division of Ocean Guardian Enterprises. The new division and fleet will be keeping Trenton busy, now that they are operating under the U.N. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 47

    Excellent chapter! They’ve landed in Greece after causing Amara a great deal of pain with the traveling and seat belt. Aria of course was keenly aware of his twins pain and was determined to get help from the flight attendant during takeoff no less. I surely hope that they will find peace and comfort while recuperating from their trauma and torture at the hands of their mother the evil bitch. Drew really needs to step up and resolve the many issues that have been pushed aside as a result of the ongoing drama and pain. He’s still not realizing just how complicated his new life will be with the twins and the fact that as a family member now he’s not capable of being their bodyguard any longer. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    A Very Busy Weekend

    Outstanding chapter! Noah’s High School Graduation, my how time flies. You always manage to make everyday family life seem so special and your abilities at having us feel every emotion is amazing. I’ve loved this family and story since the beginning and can’t wait for each installment. I truly appreciate the fact that you’ve allowed us to live vicariously through this family for those who weren’t able to experience this type of family life. Thanks, Bill! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 5

    Outstanding chapter! The new assignment to Meredith Atoll with responsibilities for patrolling the oceans east of the International Date Line, will keep Trenton very busy for the forceable future. The new relationship with Travis Peterson will hopefully bring love and joy to them both. I really hope that they will live together in happiness. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  17. Excellent chapter! The Doctors truly put Jimbo through the ringer at the medical center and the clinical psychologist also overwhelmed the poor man further, but then had him bring Mason back in with him after a very short break. She then stressed him even more. Are they trying to break his spirit similar to drill instructors with the military, or are they trying to assess how far he can be pushed before he collapses once again? Mason is turning out to have more inner strengths since he’s lived inside this situation since birth. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Dropping Bombs

    Outstanding chapter! Matty coming out after watching “Boy Erased” with Eddie and his parents. Both parents pledged their unconditional support and love for him. Mr. H hugged him, held him while he cried and reassured him that he’s loved by the entire family without question. This led to Mrs. H visiting the boy’s in their room and getting Eddie to come out to her. This is still the most frightening, painful and emotionally devastating experience any LGBTQ+ person has to face. Today most families are shocked but supportive, however there’s just too many who react horribly with violence and intolerance. Most who react badly are preaching the nonsense planted in their brains by the ultra-conservative religious right. Religions that teach and preach intolerance and hatred should lose their tax exempt status and be forced to pay all past taxes due immediately. I really appreciate how you are telling this story and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Getting Acquainted

    You’re welcome Bill!
  20. Excellent chapter! The Memorial Day gathering went extraordinarily well with Julie and Holly getting to meet many of the local family members as well as getting to tour the Castaway Hotel where her children will be living. She was very happy seeing the depths that the Currie family will go to in caring for and providing a loving family life for them. She’s relieved that the twins are so happy. The graduation celebrations are nexr and the moving day for Holly and the twins. Thanks Bill for another great chapter and for always revealing another nuance of these constantly evolving characters. You’re an expert at making your readers feel and understand what each character is going through and the emotional impact is always felt by each and every one of us. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Getting Acquainted

    Outstanding chapter! Elliot has become more mature as a college graduate, and has stepped up to make the twins feel welcome and younger boys are getting more attention. The rookie comment by his fathers planted the seeds of carrying on the tradition of the family. Elliot and Ian would be wonderful parents. I’m really happy that you’re resurrecting the tree house since the now older generation had so much fun with it. The inclusion of Julie, Holly and Mrs. Rivera into the Memorial Day Barbecue and festivities will allow them to meet the other members of the family and to see how well the twins are fitting into the family. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you Bill! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 46

    Outstanding chapter! Drew is still very reluctant to become fully engaged with his twins, which could be dangerous for them all. This mysterious trip to a remote airfield is interesting and I hope that Lady Jane is taking them somewhere remote where they can rest, relax and recover from their individual horrors. I’m not going to try to guess since there’s so many possibilities. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  23. Excellent chapter! Matty and Eddie having their first kiss was amazing. They’ve taken the first steps toward a future with love, hope and promise. Mom’s perspective is spot on as always, Mom’s always know who their children really are. I’m certain that Dad is aware also and will be protective and completely supportive of them both. I’m impressed that a Baptist Preacher would walk away from his church due to the hatred and intolerance that they’ve always spoken from the pulpit. I’m thrilled that his break away church which is based on the teachings of love, tolerance and compassion is doing well. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 4

    Excellent chapter! The corporate entity has been quite busy during the 12 months on Pitcairn Island. Dad seems to be very busy and will have some new projects for Trenton upon his return to home base on Wake Island. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Oce Chapter 3

    Outstanding chapter! The development and upgrades are well underway and the local residents are pretty happy with their new homes and communities. The technology and science required are certainly advanced, and the costs being funded by a single corporate entity is pretty amazing. I’m still looking for a new relationship for Trenton, he deserves it. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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