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    Hopeful

    Outstanding chapter! Artie seems to be in control of dealing with his father, I’m not sure everyone else around him believes that, but they are allowing him the space to handle Ezra in his own way. Adam and Dizzy are supportive and caring about his feelings. Adam has been morphing into a parent while maintaining the arms length Uncle role. He’s completely devoted to Artie and Dizzy’s well being and guiding them forward toward their future. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Birthday

    Excellent chapter! Jeremy’s birthday went reasonably well, despite mom’s bringing out the photo albums and complaining about the break up of Jeremy and Natalie. Alex’s meeting with Brandon was a little disturbing with the inappropriate closeness and hand on Alex’s thigh. Now the phone call about Jeremy’s mom being aware of his sexuality. I wonder who spilled the beans? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
  3. Outstanding chapter! I’m glad that the meeting with the family went well and that the kids accepted their invitation to live with the Curries. Benny’s birthday celebration was a success and everyone had a great time. The new kids coming to the hotel the following Saturday should prove to be interesting. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter 😃❤️
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    A Strange Request

    Excellent chapter! Here we grow again! I can’t imagine a reason that they would reject this desperate families request to care for their children. The gender should not be a defining factor. I don’t recall the family ever rejecting anyone in the past. I’m certain that they have the capacity to take in anyone who is in need, and they’ll adapt to the uniqueness of the situation pretty quickly. Thank you Bill for a new twist that will make the story take turns we can’t anticipate. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  5. Excellent chapter! Such a sweet and loving family celebration of Mother’s Day! The dynamic connection between Noah and David is truly inspiring. The two Mother’s re-establishing their friendship after such a long time and years of drama with their sons set the tone for the future relationship between both families becoming one. The twisted phone calls by the producers added unnecessary stress and anguish to Charlie. Charlie’s reactions to David inviting Beverly and Noah to Long Island were somewhat justified. His parental instincts for protecting Noah from any and all harm is overwhelming his personal feelings about David because he’s not familiar with this new David who is sweet and kind, loving and caring. This David is a complete mystery based up on the self serving, take no prisoners, I will succeed at all costs persona that Charlie knows. I’m uncertain if Charlie will complete the show in order to protect Noah. There’s still a chance that David can find a way to introduce his new and improved persona to Charlie and begin to build the relationship between them both back to what it once was. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 42

    Excellent chapter! Ben coming into the suite with a gun, holding everyone hostage waiting for the mysterious mastermind of the entire sordid mess. Him striking Aria and Amara and threatening Jay is about to push Drew over the edge. Now that the leader is about to be revealed, how will this mess be resolved? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 41

    Amazing chapter! Aria stood up for his friend against his powerful, conservative and seriously behind the times Grandmother, while putting Robert, Drew and Jeff in their place. Lady Jane is formidable but was a bit taken aback by her weaker grandson. Aria put her in her place and left no room for her to defy him. He’s made it clear that they don’t need her or her money and will not see her again unless and until she apologizes to Jay and agrees to treat them with respect and courtesy. To say that Drew is shocked and overwhelmed by the many nuances to his two multifaceted boys is a distinct understatement. The gradual changes and nuances of each of these characters is simply amazing and I am totally impressed with the depth of story and characters. Thank you! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 11

    Outstanding chapter! Logan taking the initiative to tell Leon how he really feels was long overdue. Leon is suspicious of Logan’s motivations. The ultimatum by the Queen is adding additional pressure on Leon’s shoulders. The ultimatum will certainly make whoever is on the inside feel it necessary to speed up their plans to kill Leon before he can be named Crown Prince. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ I’m sorry that you’re feeling under the weather, hopefully your husband’s chicken soup will cure you.
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    Chapter 30

    Excellent chapter! Worthington was able to come up with a plan to rescue the boys. His reluctance to put the boys through the torture and sexual abuse necessary to create the controls needed to protect them from the Demons shows how far he’s come from who he was when he arrived in Arizona. He has matured into a better, wiser and more caring person. I’m very sad to see the comments about the story ending. There’s so much more that could be written about this group of characters and the war they’re fighting! 😢❤️
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    Chapter 29

    Outstanding chapter! The children turning on their rescuers was unexpected, and the few survivors begging to be killed is very sad and very emotional for Worthington. He’s got to make a decision on what to do with these hostages/prisoners, can he just kill them? Can he formulate a plan to save and cure them with no danger to anyone else? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Chapter 28

    Excellent chapter! Worthington is taking to his new job with a vengeance. He is building the new school, developing new programs to identify untrained mages in schools and creating new relationships with creatures who dislike the Demons nearly as much as the humans. He will become more powerful and will be able to negotiate with other adepts to hopefully create a better life for all magical beings and live successfully along side mundanes. The deal with the Ferdun could be quite helpful in the battles with the Demons. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 27

    Outstanding chapter! Promoted to DHS Acting Director at 17, giving the President a guided tour of the Disneyland crime scene. Worthington’s life has taken a direction he couldn’t even imagine. He’s now in it up to his eyeballs. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  13. Interesting chapter! The meeting with Mr. Cohen was nothing short of an ultimatum without time to consider the ramifications. There’s a lot going on behind the scenes with little to no information. The life that Yonatan has undertaken to protect Matan has got to be overwhelming. Matan isn’t being told what’s going on and the international connotations can’t be overlooked. This story has suddenly made a hard left turn into unknown territory. I’m curious where the story is going next! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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    Truth Revealed

    Excellent chapter! The ceremony for the order of the arrow was perfect and the board meeting was priceless. Mason was a force to be reckoned with. He single handedly stopped the plot by Toby and Mr. Higinbotham. The boys made a strong showing with the entire camp staff and made lifelong friends. Jimbo’s mother picking the boys up and taking them to the family farm was the beginning of an extremely uncomfortable and hostile period for both of the boys. Jimbo’s dad is a religious bigot who’s been brainwashed by the baptist church. The future is looking bleak at this moment. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😡❤️
  15. Amazing chapter! You should have put a warning at the start that tissues would be necessary! The care and emotions were exceptionally portrayed in this chapter. I could feel the feelings and emotions in each of characters. You’ve always been extremely talented in delivering the story with all of the emotional depth of reality. You’ve raised the bar significantly with this latest chapter. Thank you for postponing the torpedo. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Avoidance

    Outstanding chapter! The family trip to Penn State was good for the boys who are unsure about college. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Making Plans

    Excellent chapter! The letters between Charlie and David speak to the feelings they each hold for the other. The dinner with Tran and David was sweet. I really love Tran and know that he wanted so much more from David than he could give. Tran and Parker could be a nice pairing. I know that you’re going to put us through the ringer for next few chapters, however, don’t break our spirit by keeping us from the elusive HEA. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  18. Amazing chapter! David becoming a nicer, kinder more relaxed and inspired person and performer. Charlie becoming a more relaxed and less uptight, he’s more confident and happier after the first meet and greet. The both saw and felt the electric shock that proves the love that they’ve both been keeping a secret for ever. The call to Charlie’s mother and inviting her and Noah to Long Island for Mothers Day was a nice move on David’s part. You had me reaching for the tissue box in this chapter. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
  19. Excellent chapter! Thank you for bringing David back, the ending between he and Charlie was caused by an opportunity for David to train in Russia under a legendary pianist. They didn’t exactly agree on the outcome, but they were teenagers and destroyed communications by the Russians had them both leaping to conclusions about each other’s lack of contact. I’m certain that the road to happiness for them both is filled with roadblocks, detours and pitfalls. Usually the characters have to survive these trials to emerge on the other side of them with better understanding and an emotional bond going forward. I really like Eric he should prove to be interesting and entertaining. Charlie needs an ally for emotional support. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    Chapter 9

    Excellent chapter! 😢
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    Chapter 10

    Outstanding chapter! Multiple attempts on Leon’s life inside the safety of his home, car, yacht and hotel. There’s clearly an inside agent or agents operating right under the security agency’s watch. I do believe that the staff should be placed on sabbatical to better secure Leon’s life. Gia is somehow involved in all of the political drama and threats. Dax is less of a suspect after this chapter, he genuinely cares about Leon and his safety. Logan has been given the opportunity to explain why he couldn’t or wouldn’t stay with Leon. His fears about palace life and his insecurities related to the differences in their stations in society. He ran. Now he’s been given the keys to the kingdom where Leon is concerned. Does he have the courage to admit why he left and let Leon know that he wasn’t rejecting him, can he discuss the future with the love of his life or not? Only time will tell! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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    Il Gran Si

    Outstanding chapter! Toby and Mr. Higinbotham most definitely have an agenda, the tryst with Mr. Fish is unusual. Jimbo and Mason along with the rest of the camp staff are aware that something is going on and are also aware that Toby and Ed are behind the drama. The troubles approaching as the last week of camp progresses are going to be difficult but Jimbo, Mason and staff will solve the problems and come out on top together. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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    The Haven

    Excellent chapter! I’m nervous about the weekend at the aunt’s cabin, Trish is setting them up for Jace’s family to catch them together or to hear rumors about them being together. Brody’s parents concern for the safety of their son and Jace, to provide them with safety and security while they figure out their relationship. The garage apartment is brilliant. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ I’m also very happy about the sequel to Between the Shadow and the Soul. The story was difficult to read due to the subject matter, however, it was a truly inspiring story of horror, hope and family working through the issues of an attack together to reach understanding and ultimately happiness, despite the past manipulation and trauma that occurred. I’m really looking forward to reading this new story! ❤️
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    Roadmap

    Excellent chapter! I’m happy to see that Alex is beginning to mature and think of others before himself. Jeremy has been a terrific inspiration for Alex even without knowledge of it. The dinner conversation with his parents was very difficult for Alex but shows that he’s definitely making progress in his level of maturity and responsibility. The fact that he’s made the decision to complete his degree and taken responsibility for his mistakes, as well as speaking up for his sister and studying abroad was inspiring. The hostility between Natalie, Jeremy and Alex will take some time to repair, she probably still believes that she will get Jeremy back once Alex is out of the picture. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️
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    Chapter 40

    Excellent chapter! Amara, Aria and Ceriann were amazingly forceful, resourceful and incredibly supportive of Jay. Drew at last understands that the twins are capable and intuitive enough to take care of themselves completely. Jay has begun the path toward healing from all of the horrors of their past. Aria and Amara have made it clear that Jay is their brother and will not tolerate anyone causing him pain or suffering. Lady Jane should be prepared for a verbal assault from every member of the family members about how they expect her to treat their friends. I’m so very proud of the twins, Ceriann, Drew and even Jeff for how they’ve supported Jay. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😢
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