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Thanks for this most enjoyable Christmas story, and Merry Christmas to you and your!
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Plans continue to move forward, and I think the finished product will be pretty amazing! Brad has a good heart and is smart to surround himself with smart, caring people that are helping to make his dream a reality! Is Sanctuary based on a real place, or is it a product of your creative mind?
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Books and kids, you can't do much better as far as I'm concerned! Must be the teacher (retired) in me. 😄 Add in a new car for a struggling Mom and a Covid vaccine for Dad, and you have yet another feel-good Christmas short! Thank you both for making this Christmas a little brighter! 😷❤🎅🧡🤶
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Well, they have made it to Larkspur, and their first impressions seem pretty positive! It sounds like Boone's enthusiasm is catching on with Coy! I imagine Boone will end up with the big parcel at the end of the road, and Coy will get the slightly smaller one next to it. That way they can combine their land and efforts to have one larger farm together. I am anxious to find out what the land is like. Great chapter! Thanks.
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Noah and Seth are going to be the best couple, although it may take awhile. This was a fun chapter! I am loving these characters and their story! Thanks.
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Noah and Seth are going to be the best couple, although it may take awhile. This was a fun chapter! I am loving these characters and their story! Thanks.
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Chapter 27: Shifter Surfacing
JeffreyL commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 27: Shifter Surfacing
With Vincent's wolf about to come out, you're taking this story to a higher level! It is already terrific! Now it will be terrific plus! It is interesting that Vincent is a powerful mage and yet people seem drawn to him and want to help and protect him. I can see why. He is a wonderful character! Thanks. -
Dan and Safe Haven Rescue
JeffreyL commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Dan and Safe Haven Rescue
A guarantee to put a lump in a reader's throat is to write about rescue animals and their condition when they are brought to a shelter. Add to that a character reunited with a lost pet; double whammy! This is a touching story, and a perfect fit for your Christmas count down. Thanks. -
I continue to enjoy Brad's story, and I look forward to reading each new chapter! Thanks.
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How Do You Like Your Eggs? (Two Fists in The Parking Lot)
JeffreyL commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Eggs? (Two Fists in The Parking Lot)
I really liked Keith and Shiro, and their story! I am unfamiliar with them, but since this is fan fiction, I assume they exist in some other format (book, TV, movie?). I am looking forward to reading more about them. Another story with their names on it? Thanks. Oops! I guess if I had read the introduction, I wouldn't have asked the fan fiction question. Sorry. 🙄 -
It is so nice to read your words! It has been a while. I really like Keith! He is an interesting character. Who would ever guess there was so much drama in a cooking contest?! Thanks.
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I binged all these Christmas shorts in one sitting. They were sweet and touching; perfect reading for the holidays! I will be watching for the rest. Thanks.
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Wow! I didn't see that coming! I am surviving Covid much, much better than Simon, but I wish Gabe would stop by my home with a generous check! 😉 Thanks.
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Well, you two are three for three on the great Christmas shorts! Thanks.
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I shed a tear or two of joy for Edith. Another wonderful story! I have not heard of the YouTube videos mentioned in another comment. I will definitely be checking them out. And I agree with Nix. I also want to know Gabe's story. Thanks.
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You're off to a wonderful start! This is a great Christmas story! I do believe in guardian angels. Thanks.
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It is great to see Brad's ideas become reality! I am also impressed with the people he is recruiting to help! Helping kids get off the streets and in to a safe environment leaves you with a good feeling. Do you know of any real-life places like Sanctuary? Thanks.
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Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
JeffreyL commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
What a great story for Christmas 2020! It is a fun story with some sound advice tucked in here and there. It is certainly worth remembering for future holidays and other gatherings when we're forced to be apart! Thanks for sharing this and Merry Christmas to you and your family! Ho Ho Ho! -
Things are going smoothly for Brad and Sanctuary. His parents have been really supportive, and others are coming on board. I hate to ask, but isn't it about time for someone to throw a monkey wrench in the machinery? Thanks.
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Five chapters in one sitting, and this story is off to a great start! I look forward to seeing how Brad continues to complete his project. This is a heartwarming story! Thanks.
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I just finished rereading Kevin's stories! They were every bit as enjoyable as the first time! Thanks.
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I am looking forward to reading more about Paul and Tim. Chapter one has set up the story nicely, but we still have a lot to learn about our two guys. I have to say I like them both already. Thanks.
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What an interesting and enjoyable story! I am curious to know what made you decide to write about reincarnation? I find the idea intriguing. To borrow from Shakespeare, there are more things on Heaven and Earth... Your writing is first rate, and your characters are interesting! I am glad you wrapped things up at the end. Thanks.
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Another wonderful story for Christmas! Thanks.
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