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These boys are having adventures and making memories to last a lifetime! Even if it was just the smaller day to day adventures they would be blessed! Especially the way Glen and Kevin are teaching them life skills and a positive work ethic. The big trips are icing on the cake! I am glad Kevin and Glen have the financial resources to make the trips happen. Did you know you were actually writing a story not just about a boat, but about guardian angels? 😉 Thanks.
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As several others have commented, this is a powerful piece of writing! You have expressed so much with such a few words. My emotional problem is mostly melancholy. It is pretty well controlled with medication. It can be tough for me, but I can hardly imagine what you go through in a depressive episode. Reading this poem I get a feeling for how you feel, and my heart goes out to you. Thank you for sharing.
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I am writing this a lot lately, but I binged several chapters to get caught up. I am really enjoying the way this story is progressing! Freddy and Rick are great! It's amazing what some lust can accomplish, including a complete turn around in Freddy's opinion of Rick! Some steamy sex (very well written!) certainly helped things along. So now we have a strange phenomenon, an ex-boyfriend, and a budding romance. How will they all fit together? I vote for Rick and Freddy to start a committed relationship in Beckett and live HEA. Anyway, I am looking forward to reading more and seeing what you have planned next. Thanks.
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I will say it again. I love these guys and their story! Thanks.
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I am certain I am past due for a check-in and a comment. I am still reading about as fast as you post chapters. I still love Kevin and Glen and the boys. Your writing is so readable and enjoyable! Thank you!
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Mike Is Introduced to 1950s Muscle Magazines
JeffreyL commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Mike Is Introduced to 1950s Muscle Magazines
After being a few chapters behind, I got caught up this morning. I continue to enjoy Mike's journey of self-improvement and self-awareness. I agree with Pvtguy, your pacing of the story is great. I also like that you give us details of the changes in Mike's life, but don't get long winded about it. Mike is an interesting character, and seems like a very realistic person due to your writing talent. I look forward to reading more. Thanks. -
I read chapter one, and I enjoyed it. Then I got sidetracked. I realized today that I was seriously behind, so I went on a binge. As of this evening I am caught up and having a grand time! You have created some really interesting characters. Tristan and Keisha are a hoot! I really like Finn, Nick and Andy, and the theater class! Of course I am trying to figure out what Finn is up to. I really hope he and Tristan end up a couple! And the "girl drama" between Keisha and Tristan makes me laugh! I love her "take no prisoners" atttude. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks.
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Chapter 80 Sea of Candles
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 80 Sea of Candles
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The boys are showing terrific teamwork! It is also great to see how much they care about and help each other! I think I would enjoy a weekend on the Peter Charles. Thanks.
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Chapter 12 - Confessions
JeffreyL commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Confessions
Hooray for Penn and Nash! I was so excited to see them finally admit their feelings! I am really enjoying this story! Thanks.- 40 comments
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I am happy to read about someone with money who uses it for the good of others. Even better Kevin has never acted "rich." Love these guys; love this story! Thanks.
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This story is so sad but so true. You did an excellent job of writing Alfie's frustration! Depression can be a sneaky thing for the depressed person and their caregiver. You are so right when you say most people don't understand how hard depression can be for the caregiver. Thanks.
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Chapter 11 - Where Penn Arrives
JeffreyL commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Where Penn Arrives
What a great chapter! I would like a travel companion like either or both of these guys. It's about time for Penn to tell what is up, or not up, with Cam. Nash needs to know, and so do I. At the same time Nash needs to tell Penn why he hasn't jumped his bones yet. I love these guys and their story! Thanks.- 47 comments
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I just finished a four chapter binge to get caught up! Even if it isn't all roses, this continues to be a wonderful story! I am anxious to see how the newest boy is doing. Thanks.
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Two new chapters before bed! I will sleep well tonight! Even when there are problems, it makes me feel good to read about these characters. Thanks.
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Thanks for another enjoyable chapter with all these great kids - and some great adults too! I am looking forward to the wedding. Next chapter?
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After reading the other comments, I am left without an original thought or different point of view. These characters are engaging. The dialogue seemed realistic. You brought a different look and feel to the escort falls in love theme. I enjoyed every minute of it! I would enjoy reading more about these two, but I agree this was a good place to end this story. Thanks for making my afternoon a little better!
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What an enjoyable story! I should have guessed the saying, but it caught me by surprise. Two strangers share a few moments, and your writing was great! Both characters were well fleshed out, and their dialogue was realistic! Nicely done. Thanks.
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You did a terrific job writing the dialogue and pacing of this chapter! It was sad, but a necessary thing for Jada and Sawyer, and the story, to move forward. I am anxious for Jimmy and Sawyer to cross paths and see what happens. Looking forward to more. Thanks.
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Kevin and Glen did a good job dealing with Harry. Thank goodness for a friend in the Coast Guard. Doug was a big help. Saved Kevin having to hang a noose from the yardarm (pirate talk?) 😆 I think the boys and the dads will make Travis get over the embarrassment of his dad. More good story! Thanks.
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Maybe Harry will learn a thing or two before the fishing trip is over. What an ass! But the rest of them are terrific! Thanks.
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I agree with the other commenters. It is time for Stratos to get a new manager, in spite of any past relationship. Leon is unbearable. I wonder though. If he is fired will Leon retaliate? That could be ugly. I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks.
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And the plot thickens!!! Wow! I have been really enjoying this story, but it just got even more exciting! Great chapter! Thanks.
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I am guessing this big trip with the dads and the orphanage boys will be a day trip? Or is there enough room on the Peter Charles to sleep everyone? I need to go back a couple chapters and count beds. I am excited to see how the trip goes. I am certain the orphanage boys and Father Damian will have a grand time! It will be interesting to see how Travis' dad responds. I am assuming you will make him part of the trip. I hope you don't get tired of me gushing, but once again, I love these characters and their story! Thanks.
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It's great to see Elliott and Ryan getting closer! I am really enjoying these characters and their story! Thanks.
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