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I am at a loss as to how to react to the story after reading the conversation between Edvard and the psychologist. Wow! I am also totally intrigued by Edvard and his family! I have no clue where this story is headed, but I am along for the ride. I can't wait for more! Thanks.
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Cadet Second Class • II
JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • II
It's always great to see what's new with Ritch and the rest of the academy! I enjoyed the time he spent at the fossil dig with his aunt! It sounds like you'll be working overtime to keep up the snappy dialogue between Ritch and Joel! Both the joking/teasing and the serious moments were well done! Thanks.- 56 comments
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As Dale said, Hunter is very lucky. Not about his kidnapping and torture, of course, but because he has the support of loving parents and wonderful friends! With all this support I am hopeful Hunter will be able to put this nightmare aside and get back to enjoying life. Thanks.
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I, for one, am very surprised by Margaret's and Richard's reactions to the dinner conversation. Jason put into words exactly what I've been thinking; Margaret hates Devyn. How can complaining and being negative about everything Devyn does translate into loving him and wanting him to be successful? I can understand Richard supporting his wife, but even he has said and done things to support Devyn and take the sting out of Margaret's sharp tongue - when she is not within earshot. I still really like Jason and Devyn, and I'm looking forward to reading more! Thanks.
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I really enjoyed "Toto!" It will be fun to enjoy the story again from Michele's point of view. Chapter one did not disappoint! Thanks.
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Ooo! A new and intriguing character! And I am guessing the plot thickens once again. Thanks.
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I like Matt a lot! I admire the way he stepped up and took Aiden as his responsibility. I also admire the fact that he seems so concerned about not taking advantage of Seamus. Seamus is an interesting mystery. What is behind his generous offer to babysit? He seems relaxed and able to care for Aiden. Why? Where does he get his baby experience? Is there romance with Matt in his future? Questions trying to wait patiently for answers. I am enjoying Matt's story and all the characters. Thanks.
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This chapter was amazing! It answered a couple of questions, but left so many still unanswered. I really enjoyed all the comments and speculation! It just shows what a great writer you are! You get readers all involved with these great characters, drop some hints, and reveal answers slowly. And look at the results! I plan to remain calm and wait patiently for the next chapter. Yeah, right. 😜
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I love the way you describe the places in the story! I have been fortunate to travel in Italy, although I haven't been to the Amalfi Coast. Even so, I can really see and feel what you describe! Thanks.
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There seems to be a lot going on with few answers and a lot of confusion. I must admit I am intrigued, and I look forward to watching things sort themselves out. It seems like Evan has been on a wild ride, and it feels like it won't be ending soon. Thanks.
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I am excited to see another story written by you! One chapter and I love it already! My first impulse was to say "poor Matt," but he really stepped up and is being more successful than not. Now about Seamus... I am guessing he will be the romantic interest, but the jury is still out. Matt's workplace and coworkers are a lot of fun and add to the feel of the story. Great start! Thanks.
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What a pleasant surprise to start reading and realize I was in a familiar place! I didn't remember Toto from your earlier story, but the minute Gianni showed up I knew where I was! I am looking forward to reading Toto's story, and to catching up with Gianni and Angelo. Thanks.
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Wow! There is a lot more to these powers than I realized! I can't wait to see what Casper learns from the kids at Lewis' place. I also wonder who is the governing body for "supernaturals" and how were they chosen. Also is "The Family" the bad guys or just looking out for each other. This story started a little slowly for me, but now I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Thanks.
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Finally! And it might not have been a perfect moment, but it was absolutely right for Rick and Gus! Your writing really captured the feelings they have for each other! I think Gus is the one to help Rick become his true self. I imagine there are a few more bumps in the road before the story ends. Besides making jobs and lifestyles mesh, there are still Rita and Heinrich to deal with. I am really enjoying Rick's story, and I am happy he is letting romance into his life! I look forward to reading more! Thanks.
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What a great ending to a well-written, at times somewhat mysterious story! I liked the way the story changed points of view and that you gave information in bits, but never enough to give away the story. Nicely done! Thanks for sharing.
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OMG! Not what I expected at all! Thanks.
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Chapter 28- The Interview
JeffreyL commented on Westarcher's story chapter in Chapter 28- The Interview
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That's a new term for me. Thanks for the explanation.
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I am really enjoying Jon and Jason and their quirky relationship! I hope Jon can win Jason over. I am rooting for his success! I don't know what Jason means when he mentions getting a hit from his dart. Is it medicine? Drugs? I never read this story the first time around. I like this story a lot, so I assume your changes are good ones! Looking forward to reading more! Thanks.
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I liked Andrew and Henry, and I liked their story. It is very readable and has a good message. Although I am content and satisfied with the ending, this story could easily be expanded. Thanks.
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This chapter is a perfect example of why many of the boys at the Y want Phillip to be their big brother! It also shows his caring and compassion for the guys. Big Brother is a perfect fit for him! And thank goodness Jeffry convinced Rodney to talk to Phillip. Thanks.
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Phillip has really settled in at the Y. He is a hard worker, and clearly his efforts are appreciated. I have some reservations about his involvement in The Gentlemen's Club, partially because I am not certain of his age. For me, beyond a certain point he is too old to be sexually involved with kids. The flip side is his rapport with all the younger guys. It sounds like a lot of them could use a big brother. Thanks.
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I feel badly for Ethan. I really like him, and yet here he is again acting like he is possessed. At least it doesn't look like he killed Jack. He seemed to realize what was happening. I hope we will eventually find out why he is this way. I also hope he can get some help to deal with his anger issues. That will be tough, because he is a drifter. Maybe Jonathan and Michael can help him. I am anxious see what happens next. Thanks.
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OMG! What a horrible place to stop! That is pure evil! Thanks (I think).
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I am getting a great deal of pleasure reading about Tony, his friends and family, and the farm! I bet he never imagined things would have turned out like they have. Just shows what hard work and support can accomplish. I hope things go smoothly for your move! I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. Thanks.
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