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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Thanks for the short epilog. I would love more story about Chet and Tony, but that helped complete the story for me. Although short, your story was well written, and your characters were well-rounded. This is a great Christmas gift to your readers! Thanks.
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    Five

    JeffreyL commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Five

    You have an interesting duo in Seth and Noah! I really like them both! Talk about opposites attract, they make an intriguing couple. I also like Ophelia and Lilith! They are terrific supporting characters! I read chapters one through five in basically one sitting and loved every minute! I can't wait to see what happens after their night at the club. Thanks.
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    Chapter 58

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 58

    Once again you have written and shared a story full of memorable characters! I appreciate the message that there are good people trying, and succeeding, to make a positive difference in the world. Carleton's story was a pleasure to read, even with the boys' backgrounds and the problems that he encountered trying to rescue them! Thank you. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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    Hhhmmmm. Not gonna wait until New York for stuff hitting the fan? I can't wait to see what's next! Thanks.
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    What a pleasant interlude! I am guessing this is the calm before the storm that will be NYC. I continue to enjoy your characters and their story! I wish you and your husband a long life of happiness together! Congratulations!
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    Vincent's Mage's Dance was even better than I imagined it would be! Your fine writing skills were totally on display, and you did yourself proud!! Thank you.
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    I am behind and reading to catch up. I can't begin to tell you how much I am enjoying this story! I love Vincent and Mason! You have created these two amazing characters, and your supporting cast is interesting and well written too! I am excited for the Mage's Dance, and the best part is no waiting since I am behind! Thanks.
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    Chapter 16

    JeffreyL commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Essell's adventures, to borrow a line from Alice, are getting curiouser and curiouser! I am intrigued by the aliens and can't wait to find out what they are up to! Thanks.
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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on Aditus's story chapter in Chapter 2

    This chapter is sweet in the best meaning of the word! It just increases my interest in these characters and their story! I loved all the speculation by other readers, a few of their ideas crossed my mind as well. I think I will withhold speculating for now and see what's next. Thanks.
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on Aditus's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This first chapter is well-written! I liked Tristan right away! I even liked cheating Pete in a cool villain sort of way. I am on to chapter two already totally intrigued! Thanks.
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    Chapter 28

    JeffreyL commented on Katya Dee's story chapter in Chapter 28

    I just read several chapters to catch up. Things are moving from weird to almost bizarre! I still love Gem and Stratos, and I have really enjoyed Leon in the last few chapters! Now Max's secrets are what have ramped things up! I am beyond intrigued and can't wait for more! Thanks.
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    After beating the crap out of Boone with the storm and the river, I am glad you had Coy wise up and follow so he could care for him! This story is so easy to read and enjoy! Thanks.
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    Autumn

    JeffreyL commented on dianjin's story chapter in Autumn

    I like the idea of a word prompt a day. I think you were smart to skip words that did not inspire. You can try them again later. Thanks.
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    Scary

    JeffreyL commented on dianjin's story chapter in Scary

    Great story! I didn't see the ending coming until the last minute! Your English is excellent! I'm curious why you wrote in English and not French. Thank you.
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    Chapter 7

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 7

    You do a great job writing stories about helping others and taking kids off the streets. It could have been longer, but I enjoyed every chapter! Thanks.
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    Chapter 24

    JeffreyL commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Chapter 24

    This great, sexy as he'll chapter was worth the wait! I am looking forward to more in the next chapter! Then Jimmy and Sawyer can figure out how to deal with Fregus and the pack. Thanks. Thanks. Thanks!
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    Two

    JeffreyL commented on Demiurge's story chapter in Two

    I'm not certain about reading a story that features depression, abuse, and anxiety. I do really like both Seth and Noah. Maybe they will help each other with the depression, etc. and end up HEA. In any event, your story is very readable, and I intend to read on to see what happens. Also I like Lia and sister Lilith. They are going to be great supporting characters, I can tell! Thanks.
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    Chapter 6

    JeffreyL commented on Andre Delport's story chapter in Chapter 6

    I enjoyed all the details about the resort and their wedding! Maybe if I win the lottery I could experience the same type of vacation! 😆😆😆 I am still enjoying your characters and their story! Thanks.
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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on Andre Delport's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Two chapters in, and I am really enjoying this story! Andrew and Ryan are terrific characters, and I can't wait to know them better! A little glimpse of some supporting characters was interesting. And I love your location! I have a special place in my heart for South Africa, and especially Cape Town. It has been almost fifty years since I visited, but I hope to visit again before I am too old to travel. Thanks.
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    Wotan

    JeffreyL commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Wotan

    Although I find it sad, I have been enjoying reading Rick's story. Once again I wonder why he doesn't quit working for his dad. I think without dad's meddling Rick would be much happier. But the devil you know... Now it is about time for him to have a little romance and happiness in his life. Thanks.
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    Great chapter! Amazing dialogue! Thank you! ❤
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    Chapter 22

    JeffreyL commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Oops! I am certain it was a simple oversight, but you forgot to identify the rogue. And it must be time for Fergus to show up and complicate things even more. Because I am pretty sure, based on comments from other readers, you are withholding pertinent information on purpose, I almost hate to say how much I am still enjoying this story. And the flow of the plot; and the dialogue; and especially Jimmy and Sawyer! What a great story! There I said it. And thanks.
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    The End

    JeffreyL commented on zanoGreen's story chapter in The End

    This has been a great story! Ryan, Elliott, and the team were great characters! I enjoyed your writing style, and I look forward to more stories about these guys! Thanks.
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    This was a great chapter! I really enjoyed meeting Mason's parents, and I hope we get to learn more about them later in the story. I am glad Mason told Vincent about their bond. Now that they have passed that hurdle, we can get on to the next part of their adventure! Thanks, and congratulations on wedding!
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    Life Goes On

    JeffreyL commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Life Goes On

    Thanks for sharing this enjoyable story! I liked the message about changing your lifestyle to make your life better (and probably longer). As I said near the beginning of this story, I liked the fact that it is about older gay men.
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