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    President's Day

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in President's Day

    This story was a great start to the Dads' life as empty nesters! As I said a couple of other times, with no disrespect meant to CJ and Ozzie, it was fun to read a story focused on Cesar and Brett! Your gift for interesting characters and realistic dialogue was evident! I look forward to whatever you are writing next! Thanks.
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    By and By

    JeffreyL commented on Ron's story chapter in By and By

    This is both sad and sweet. I realized what was happening somewhere near the middle, but it didn't detract from the impact at the end one bit. Very well written and a pleasure to read, even as it plucked my heartstrings. Thanks.
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    This was very cleverly written! It made me chuckle several times! The best part is my math knowledge was enough to understand without being lost! 😷🤩😃 Thanks.
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    No I But Me

    JeffreyL commented on Ron's story chapter in No I But Me

    You have done a great job with the prompt! Since you have given us no real clues, I see the narrator as a younger man, maybe mid- to late twenties. His "werewolf" is maybe ten years older. They strike up an interesting and somewhat flirtatious conversation. Before parting ways, they agree to meet for dinner in a couple of days. I rather like the idea that the werewolf is in fact a shifter of some sort! This was fun to read and interpret! Thanks.
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    Chapter 7

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 7

    I am enjoying this new story about Billy, his boat, and the boys he is taking under his wing. I look forward to the adventures they will have as they leave the island! Thanks.
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    This is a very thoughtful and thought provoking letter. You did an amazing job saying so much in such a few words! Thanks.
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    Chapter 21

    JeffreyL commented on RichEisbrouch's story chapter in Chapter 21

    Great dialogue! Thanks.
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on drsawzall's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This was a most enjoyable story! I loved Ezra and the voice you gave him! His thoughts and narration were well written. He is the kind of character that would make a longer story worth reading! And did you hear him say he really likes Tommy Banks?! 😷🤩😉 Thanks for sharing this story.
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on Ivor Slipper's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This was a fun little story, and a good use of the prompt! Nicely written! Thanks.
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    Noah's story is another great one to add to your author's book list! It fits in beautifully with the many other books you have posted here. You have a knack for creating these wonderful characters that readers quickly come to love! Thanks.
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    PS Ch 1

    JeffreyL commented on quokka's story chapter in PS Ch 1

    This first chapter is a promising start to another good story! I think your writing gets better with each story! I have enjoyed everything I have read that you have written, but it seems to me your more recent stories put a lot more emphasis on the characters and a little less on the descriptions. Anyway I am looking forward to reading more about Edwin. Thanks.
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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I wonder if Billy is about to gain a travelling companion? Good beginning to this story! Thanks.
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    Chapter 15

    JeffreyL commented on imperfect _pisces's story chapter in Chapter 15

    So, Tristan and Finn talked about their relationship, and it went well, including a hug! I really like these two more and more! I can't wait to see what is next for them. Thanks.
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    Silvio

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Silvio

    I continue to enjoy this story focusing on Brett and Cesar! I understand the focus of your many stories is CJ and Ozzie, but I have missed the dads. Yes they make regular appearances, but they are mostly secondary characters these days. Although they are both young enough to be my children, their interests and experiences are closer to mine than CJ's are. Thanks.
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    An interesting variety of poems and a lot of food for thought. Thanks for sharing and stay safe.
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    Chapter 7

    JeffreyL commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 7

    What a great turn around for TJ! The truth is revealed and TJ listened, Beau and Lucas can quit hiding, and Sebastian is revealed as the villain he is! More good story! Thanks.
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    Chapter 57

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 57

    OMG! I had the same book as a kid! I hadn't thought of it in years. I wonder if it is still in the attic at my mom's? Thanks for a little trip down Memory Lane!
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    Chapter 57

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 57

    The end is a bit sad for me. Not how the story ended, but the loss I will feel with no more chapters to read. I have enjoyed Kevin and his story from the beginning - The Scuffy. I loved the positive messages in the story, and the joy Kevin and Glen received from helping children. I will be looking forward to reading another story by you when you are ready to share. Thanks for a great reading experience!
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    I enjoyed Mike's afternoon with Thomas! The time together was very sensual for both men. Your writing did an excellent job capturing their feelings and arousing mine! I needed a cold shower after reading this chapter. 😷😉❤ Thanks.
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    Friday (Evening)

    JeffreyL commented on Drew Payne's story chapter in Friday (Evening)

    Simon is a terrific character! I am glad he is gaining confidence, and that things seem to be going his way! Now if his relationship with Jeff can get sorted out. I hope there is romance in their future! Thanks.
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    Chapter 54

    JeffreyL commented on CLJobe's story chapter in Chapter 54

    Once again Kevin and Glen put on their guardian angel hats (halos?) and take the village children on a fishing trip! So much goodwill and sharing are wonderful! Love these guys; love their story! Thanks.
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    Chapter 27

    JeffreyL commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 27

    So much boy drama! Jack is a great main character! Life has certainly been a rollercoaster for him since Tracy moved in across the street. It is interesting to see how much Jimmy has changed since the story began. He has certainly become a horn dog! I agree with the other comments. Neither Jimmy nor Jeff seem like good boyfriend material. I am thinking about the advice the counselor at the hospital gave Jack about boy friend versus boyfriend. Maybe you have a new gay boy waiting in the wings to step out and be Jack's boyfriend? In any event, I am enjoying this story more and more! Thanks.
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    Chapter 13

    JeffreyL commented on imperfect _pisces's story chapter in Chapter 13

    What is Finn thinking and feeling about Tristan? I hope he is not going to hurt Tristan, either accidentally or on purpose. Still loving Tristan and his story! Thanks.
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    This chapter upped the drama and my curiosity! I am liking these characters even more, especially Mason! There are still lots of unanswered questions. I can be patient as long as you promise to reveal all by the end. Thanks.
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    God's Plan

    JeffreyL commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in God's Plan

    What a fun end to a great chapter! You continue to impress me with the way you write Dizzy and Artie! Their dialogue is so real, and the way they act together is right on the mark! Mix in Adam and you have a family you'd like to know! Thanks.
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