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As I skimmed through this chapter before going on to the next one, I realized I loved their new "cottage!" I wonder if I could get an invitation to visit, or maybe live there? 😃
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Desire and confusion weave together, and a sorting is needed. I appreciated your comment to Parker about writing things down to help process them. Well written with a clear message. Thank you.
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The Scottish accent adds a nice touch to a lovely poem. Thank you.
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This brings back wonderful memories of my trip to Scotland. Thanks.
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Two very good poems! Like many others, I feel the first poem is a sad comment. Other emotions include confusion and anger. The second poem expresses hope and happiness. Thanks for both.
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Another enjoyable chapter with these excellent characters! I will be sorry to see this story end, but I have enjoyed every minute. Thanks.
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Thank you, James. You have a nice style of writing that is very readable. I really like these characters you've created, and I am really enjoying their story!
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Another great poem! I like the sense of caring and wanting to help in any way however small. Thanks.
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Nicely done! I counted syllables, 😃 and it came out perfect.
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I have really enjoyed both stories about Eric, Andy, and Adam! I am pleased there will be another story at some point. I said it near the beginning of the first story, and I'll say it again. It is a pleasure to read about an older gay man. I am much closer to Eric in age than a lot of the characters I read about. Thanks for these stories and for creating one of my favorite characters!
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I am enjoying how Gianni's and Angelo's friendship continues to grow. I am glad Gianni has learned more about the estrangement between his mother and her parents, even if it wasn't pleasant. Your descriptions of the boys' explorations continue to entertain me! I like the way you get in a lot of description without dragging down the story. Thanks.
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This was a most enjoyable chapter! I am a bit sad to realize the end is near, but this has been a most satisfying story. I look forward to some surprises at the end. Thanks.
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It is fun to be back in the "Chasing the Moon" world again! I look forward to finding out more about Honey and Regan. Thanks.
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You did your usual good job writing this chapter. The pacing, drama, and dialogue were just right where it all could easily gone over the top. Now that the mystery of Adam's death and the "feud" with the uncles are settled, let's build a home, work on improving a farm, and get on with a romance. Thanks.
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OMG! Tyson's plan seems to be working! This was an amazing chapter! You did a great job writing Edith and Chase! She is about to have a breakdown, and he is more evil than I realized. I can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks.
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This was a pleasant and thoroughly enjoyable chapter! Jarren and Mazen have a great family! Sometimes these slice of life chapters between dramas are fun and a nice break. You did a great job using dialogue and descriptions to capture a big family get together! Thanks.
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A three chapter binge has me caught up, and I enjoyed every minute of it! Gianni is a very likeable boy. It will be interesting to see how he settles in with his grandparents and living in Italy. I imagine leaving London for a more rural part of Italy would be a big change. Your descriptions are wonderful! I have been fortunate to visit Italy, and I can picture what the grandparents' town is like from your descriptions. I'm looking forward to more. Thanks.
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I know it is a fictional story, but you write about these amazing characters you've created, and I can't help but fall in love with them. I hurt for all three of them. You capture their sadness so well. I am curious to see how much you will reveal about Grandmother's reasons for wanting Daniel. I must admit I can't guess why. I am still loving this story! Thanks.
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At the very least it seems disrespectful. Your point was well stated. Thanks.
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I can't exactly understand what you are feeling/going through. I would like to think I could be empathetic. I do believe "To your own self be true. Thou canst not then be false to any man." Because it's Mom, that makes it harder. At least it would be for me. Your poem does a good job explains your feelings. I am sure you have people who support you.
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I am really enjoying this mystery! There are a lot of loose threads, and many things still need to be explained. The bad thing about mysteries and me: I follow every red herring and never figure things out until the author reveals true answers. So, I will wait patiently for the next part. Thanks.
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A big reveal and a lot happening in one chapter! It's nice to be back with Wren and Caleb. Thanks.
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I'm not certain what Lex can do for Nash (long distance therapy?), but I have confidence he will be able to help Jarren. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks.
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I like the three line stanzas. I thought first of nightmares; second of anxiety. I also liked the words you chose and the feelings they portray. Thanks.
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