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    It Feels All Right

    JeffreyL commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in It Feels All Right

    I want to gush on and on about how wonderful this story is! I find it totally enchanting! I am not certain where it is going, but I can't wait to get there. Thank you and your clever brain for sharing this story!
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    January, 2018

    JeffreyL commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in January, 2018

    Chapter two moved me from like to love! Great supporting characters! I still really like Diego. I hope he can get past his feelings about gay stereotypes. Thanks.
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    December, 2017

    JeffreyL commented on AusGlitterati's story chapter in December, 2017

    Well, I don't "love" it yet, but your story is off to a good start! I like Diego, frustrated but professional, and the other characters have promise. I like the professional wrestling setting. I haven't come across it much in my reading. Because of some of the lingo I wonder if you have some experience in professional wrestling, or are you a good researcher? Thanks for this promising start!
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    clay

    JeffreyL commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in clay

    I am having trouble putting my feelings into words. I don't understand D/s on an emotional level, but this poem really appeals to me. Maybe it is the sculptor metaphor like Defiance19 said. Anyway, thank you.
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    Yours

    JeffreyL commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Yours

    So many of the comments express my feelings. I will just say well done and thank you.
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    For Sir

    JeffreyL commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in For Sir

    Thanks for sharing Tim. Both of these poems are wonderful!
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    I agree with Travlbug, everyone deserves a Charlotte. I am glad Artie has found a friend with no romantic complications. Hopefully she can help him sort out his feelings about Ky and Dizzy. Thanks.
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    Waves

    JeffreyL commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Waves

    I'm thinking like Wesley8890. My question: foreshadowing or red herring? I liked meeting Ky's dad and uncle and finding out more about Ky. More interesting characters. Thanks.
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    New Best Friend

    JeffreyL commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in New Best Friend

    Even though there are lots of unanswered questions (I know it's early days... ) I really like the way this story is moving forward. Thanks.
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    The New Kid

    JeffreyL commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The New Kid

    You have created an interesting group of characters, and I'd bet money there are more to come. Artie is a bit like Alice down the rabbit hole or Dorothy in Oz. I can't wait to see where his new life takes him. Thanks for this new story and a great beginning!
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    Chapter 24

    JeffreyL commented on Roe St. Alee's story chapter in Chapter 24

    I'd like to believe Carter did break up with Beth in spite of what she said. A person like Beth will always color things so they are looking good. And here goes Jackson over thinking things. I hope he can keep Beth's comment to himself, remember how much he enjoyed the dance, and see how things go with Carter. Probably not, which means more drama. Thanks!
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    I just finished reading this for the second time, and I enjoyed it just as much as the first time! I reread my comment from the first read, and all I need to say is "ditto!" Thanks.
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    The Barkeep

    JeffreyL commented on Disjecta Membra's story chapter in The Barkeep

    After two chapters, I like Birten, and I can't wait to see what adventures he has. I also like Kep; Daegon not so much. I wonder is romance in store for Birten and Kep? Guess I will just be patient and see.
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    Nicely done. You did a good job fulfilling the challenge! Both stories were well written, with interesting characters and good dialogue. Both stories were a bit sad. It can be hard to read about conflicts in a relationship. I know the old saying "opposites attract," but I wonder what brought Darren and Ethan together in the first place.
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    Chapter 23

    JeffreyL commented on Roe St. Alee's story chapter in Chapter 23

    This is another well written chapter! I especially enjoyed Jackson's time with Carter's friends when Carter wasn't there. I wonder if Matt and Ricky have an inkling to what's going on between Jackson and Carter. I can't wait to see what happens at Winter Dance! Maybe some drama with Beth? Maybe acceptance from the guys? Thanks for more of this good story!
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    The Preacher

    JeffreyL commented on Dodger's story chapter in The Preacher

    Wouldn't it be an interesting twist if David and Simon could help Jeff with his alcoholism. However, I am afraid Jeff is not at rock bottom yet. In spite of the sadness and frustration I feel, I am really enjoying this story. Thank you.
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    This was a good story! Interesting plot, characters to care about, and believable dialogue made it so. I would be happy to read more about these characters. I will be watching for more Tampa Chronicles. Thank you.
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    Chapter 32 - Ian

    JeffreyL commented on Bndmetl's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Ian

    It is sad that Pat was separated and had a hard childhood. I hope he will accept and be happy about being reunited with his brother. Mostly I hope he will remember that in spite of his tough past, he has been adopted into the most wonderful family and that they love him unconditionally. Thanks for sharing this story!
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    Thanks for creating characters I wish were real people I could meet! Your writing really brings them to life! I loved reading about their lives, both the happy and the sad. Vic is a great character, and of course all the Barnstable crowd were terrific supporting characters for his story. I will be watching for David's story in the fall. Thanks again.
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    I had to laugh at your Pessimist's Beatitude! The version I learned is: If you expect nothing, then you are never disappointed, only pleasantly surprised sometimes. Thanks for sharing this story.
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    I just keep liking Finn more and more! I wondered if a romance with Sam was in the works, but after reading this chapter, probably not. Hopefully a good friendship. I would love to get to visit Sanctuary! Is it based on a real place or only your imagination? Everything is wonderful in this story: characters, setting, dialogue, and the slow reveal on the plot! Thank you!
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    Chapter 33

    JeffreyL commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 33

    And the plot thickens! Thanks for more of this really good story!
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    Dec Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on quokka's story chapter in Dec Chapter 2

    Has this story been published before or elsewhere else? Some of it feels familiar.
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    How ever sad this turn of events may be, it is always wonderful to spend time with the Barnstable crowd. I have enjoyed thus story and getting to know Vic and Hayden better. Thank you.
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    Chapter 22

    JeffreyL commented on Roe St. Alee's story chapter in Chapter 22

    I feel a little bad for Carter, but as the old saying goes, "Piss or get off the pot." He needs to man-up and make a choice. Sadly, it may be too late. And Jackson is really hurting, but maybe he shares some of the blame for not being realistic. I guess being in love can mess with your rational self. Thanks.
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