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Constantine & Guapo, Rex & Fee, Desolé & herself
JeffreyL commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Constantine & Guapo, Rex & Fee, Desolé & herself
OK, so I exaggerated a bit on the "R" names. 😉 The other one is Rodney. -
It is nice to see each be more civil to the other. Although I can't imagine a personality like Greg could change quickly to be less domineering. This bodes well for the future, unless you have a bomb or two left to drop. We do still need to know what earlier event hardened his heart. As I remember Chris noticed a big change (for the worse) between his first and second meeting with Greg. Thanks again for sharing this story. I am really enjoying it!
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I am lost. Your error or mine?
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OK. So maybe sex with Greg has moved from "Ew!" to "People can change." Dad was a smart man, but this is a bit of a crazy scheme to humanize his son and help is companion find romance (?).
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So, Dad and Devin versus Kevin, and the jury is still out on Mom. Hmmm. Sound like an uphill battle for our guys. I feel bad for Paul. I hope he can get himself sorted by the end of the story. Thanks.
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Constantine & Guapo, Rex & Fee, Desolé & herself
JeffreyL commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in Constantine & Guapo, Rex & Fee, Desolé & herself
The more crazy and convoluted the plot becomes, the more I love this story! What a great bunch of characters, although you have too many "R" names. 😄 -
From the Frying Pan into the Honey Pot
JeffreyL commented on Rigby Taylor's story chapter in From the Frying Pan into the Honey Pot
I think I like these characters more with each chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Thank you. -
Oh please, no sex of any kind with Jr. Ew! Too bad he didn't turn around and leave again after being assaulted.
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I'd bet a fair amount of money (if I had it) that Jr. had Christopher investigated after he found out his Dad had hired him. He is the type that probably has a file tucked away. I was also glad Christopher got to speak his mind. Especially with the other brothers present.
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Hooray for Christopher! But I worry that Jr. has years of experience getting even, and a pot of money to help him. I hope Christopher watches his back.
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I am bingeing to get caught up, and I doubt I could "put it down" anyway. Good story! Poor Christopher. I'm guessing the craziness is about to start.
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Ooo, a nasty villain, and I bet he has been envious of Christopher because of his closeness to Dad and the other siblings. No more speculation. I'll just read more. Thanks.
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How did I miss this? One prologue and I'm pretty sure I'm hooked! A rich man's will, children, and a loyal butler are promising. Thanks.
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This was a sweet story with good dialogue and descriptions! It is just as enjoyable the day after St. Patrick's Day. And you are correct. Irish people are awesome! I base my agreement on two trips to Ireland. Thanks for sharing your story.
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My comment was intended to be tongue in cheek. I do enjoy your writing. I enjoy Daniel and Raymond. I just missed reading about Paul and Jeff. Please keep writing. I intend to keep reading.
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I was trying to remember the names of the guys this story was about when it started. Since Raymond and Daniel crowded in we haven't heard much from or about them.
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You make Austin sound terrific, and a good fit for you! Texas is on my "want to visit" list.
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I've never been to Austin, but I can't imagine it could be better than Washington or Oregon.
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I will be sorry to see Andy leave the story. I hope his parting with Vic is gentle. I know we do need to get Vic back to Barnstable, but Andy is too interesting a character to leave in a cloud of anger, sadness, or depression.
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Hopefully Amar will become a friend and protector for Samir.
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Over The Rainbow • Part VII
JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part VII
Donned your travel agent hat, didn't you?! I don't know much about tourism in Israel, so I'll need to Google. Thanks for another good chapter. I feel bad for Ozzie and his sister, but not really surprised. You've laid the groundwork for her cancer to come back. I wonder if CJ will cut his trip short. -
Thank you! I am finding this story so interesting and enjoyable! I can't wait to see what surprises you have for us in the civil trial.
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Thank you for the extra information.
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Nicely written! I feel a little sad for Tommy. I hope he will find someone to kiss for real, not just for practice.
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Break Ups and First Dates
JeffreyL commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Break Ups and First Dates
It is moments like the end of the battle of the bands with the teacher that frustrate me. It is a shame when rules don't allow for some "gray." Sadly, in my experience, that is usually how it is at school. This was another good chapter! I liked how Teddy and Ryder tag teamed Oli to a good end. And I chuckled at Teddy's wet dream conversation. Both were well written! Thank you.
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