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In spite of a few bumps I'm the road, it looks like school camp is off to a good start. Jarek is leading the boys in a postitve, low-key way that should get them to support him and the camp. Thanks for more story.

I don't think Edmund will be good for Samir. Actually I wonder if Samir will stand up to him, or acquiescence for the comparative safety. Thank you for sharing this story.

Your writing makes it easy for me to see and feel what Greg and Chris are seeing and feeling. Good job! I like the tension that floats under their conversations. It is erotic. I can understand Greg's need to mark Chris as his, even if I am turned off by hickeys. At least he did it in a place where your average person won't see it. Things are heating up! I can't wait for more! Thanks.

Oooo! Coach will be a great person to have on their side! He may be able to help Dad be OK with this, and then Dad could help with Devin. At least in a better world. I also like Cameron's mom. She was smart to talk to Kevin's mom alone. Can't wait for more! Thanks.

What a pleasant turn of events! And there is a lot more to Cowboy than we saw in his earlier trial appearance. Thanks.

Thanks for more fun! This story keeps me chuckling in spite of the serious moments here and there.

Watching characters jump to conclusions is always so frustrating! I was excited at the chance for the Captain and Kohen to get closer. Looks like it's just more frustration for both. I can't decide if the Captain is interested and worried Kohen is liking him for the wrong reasons, or if he is just being kind and worried Kohen is misinterpreting. I am still really enjoying this story. Thanks.

I first read this story on another site. It was a shorter version of this. I really enjoyed it and was very excited when I found it here on G.A., with more chapters! I think this is my third time reading this story. I enjoyed it as much the third time as I did the first. Thanks.

It wouldn't be the first story where young ones became allies or a secret weapon of sorts. I think kids are sometimes overlooked as being "only children." The kits, especially Fran, may be part of a surprise or two that are coming. Thanks.

I haven't commented in awhile, but I am still really enjoying Teddy and Ryder getting back together. I am also enjoying the interactions between Oliver and Teddy, and Oliver and Ryder. I was impressed that Ryder convinced the whole family to go to the beach. It seems it has been healing for all of them. I look forward to whatever is next, and I wonder how long we readers get to enjoy this story before you're done. No need to answer the last part, if you know. I was just thinking as I typed. Thanks.

A good ending to a most enjoyable story! But I agree with Wesley8890. What about Billy and Frank? I am going to assume they remained friends, were at each other's weddings, and still get together regularly. Thanks for sharing this story.

This was rather a sad chapter, with a dismal view of women and marriage. I'm not certain what you're setting up, but part of me wants to laugh at (with?) this chapter. Thanks.

This is a good start. I'm interested already. Thanks.

BHopper2 has written a most enjoyable short story! Adam is thirty-eight and finds out he has a son who is a teenager. An interesting plot, well-drawn characters, and realistic dialogue take us through the joys and fears of meeting your child as a teen. This story is complete in one "chapter," but I hope the author chooses to write more about these characters.

I think I'm going to enjoy reading about how this relationship grows. If this start is typical D/s, I have a lot to learn. It is not what I expected. Thank you.

I think Jarek and Zeno will have a terrible enemy if/when she realizes who invaded her home. I agree with chris191070, they do make a cute couple! Thanks for more fun!

Thanks for writing and sharing. This was a very good story. The characters and conversations felt real. The house is to die for! 😄 Adam and Rob meeting and getting to know each other was touching. Adam's nervousness at finding out he was a father made me chuckle. Your writing really made me feel his nervousness. I, for one, would enjoy another visit with Adam and Rob if you ever feel like writing more about them. And we never got to meet Duncan. A straight butler for a gay man might be good for some funny moments. It might be nice to see a straight man and a gay man have a positive, mutually beneficial relationship. It happens in gay fiction, but maybe not enough? And we have a gay teen coming to terms with his sexuality and bigoted grandparents. Wow! Lots of possibilities! Just saying...

The collar line threw me for a second because I don't know much about collars (what I do know is from reading stories here), but I believe D/s is important to you and your husband, and your relationship. I can feel the joy and love in your poem. As always, thanks for sharing your beautiful poem.

OK time to move to the main event. I can't wait to see Jimmy take on Richard and Bernadette. And isn't it about time for Drake to give Jimmy a second chance? I'm still not entirely clear what was Jimmy's big mistake. Must be time to re-read for details. Thanks so much for sharing this story.

I know that judges are human, just like the rest of us, but it bothers me that this judge seems to be playing favorites a bit. It is also interesting that there doesn't seem to be any hard feelings between the lawyers. I freely admit to not knowing much about courtrooms, but my impression (mostly from stories I've read) is there a lot of tricks and verbal manipulation to "win" more than a desire to get to the truth. I am really enjoying this story! Thank you.

Whew! *fanning myself vigorously* That was pretty steamy! I think I need a cold shower. It is great that Eli's group of mates is complete. I am anxious to see how they sort out the problems with the gods because of being a large diverse group. Oh, and another climax to look forward to. Just don't make the end of the story come too soon. Pun intended. Thanks.

Several interesting developments showed up in this chapter. I think maybe Dad suspects Kevin is gay. The way his reaction was written, it was clearly not his usual pattern, and I got the impression he was irritated; and not just by Kevin's refusal to tell what really happened. I really enjoyed the conversation between Kevin, Stanley, and Charlie. Too bad they were overheard by Paul. Than combined with Devin's confrontation with the coach could cause some real problems. More good story. Thanks.

So, is Paigann pronounced pagan? Zeno's parents are great! You have a knack for creating colorful secondary characters with amusing names. I can't wait to see how things go with the boys at camp. Thanks for sharing this story.

Ah, now I understand who Stephen, from the chapter 2 title, is. I can't wait to see how outdoor school works, and how Jarek and Zeno get along. Thanks.

What a lot of fun! I was very concerned at the story's description. Anything involving a teacher, a student, and sex makes me nervous, but in spite of the rape this has been fun! I also noticed your name game: Nimffo = nympho, Medlar = meddler, the black bastard Mr. Schwartz = black. I am wondering about Zeno, but I can't come up with something. And the chapter is titled "Stephen" but we didn't hear about him unless I missed it. Noble is a good name for a principal (at least this one). Thanks.