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Just like with so many of your other characters, I'm going to love Nick and Noah too. Thanks.

Well you certainly know how to stir the pot! I am neither Australian nor military, but this topic is universal in my opinion. I look forward to reading more. I am curious to meet the main characters. I assume our dear Colonel will be the antagonist. Thanks for a great introduction!

The conversations between your characters are so believable and fit whatever is going on between the characters. I enjoyed (pant, pant, pant) the love scene between Adam and Mikeal! Very sexy! Thanks.

This is sadly beautiful. It certainly put a damper on my mood. Your writing created quite a vivid picture. I assume Miguel was the boy in the bedroom with the pictures, and Mason was his suicidal friend. I don't think Miguel came to Tristan's to prevent a suicide, but I guess this event is what made him support Tristan. It is sad to think we get busy with our own lives and don't always think how a moment of time given can impact someone else. Thank you

Gotta love Tristan! I enjoyed this little slice of his life after the event. In case you want to write more about Tristan and Miguel, I'd be happy to read it. And I'd bet I'm not alone. Thanks.

This is an interesting variety. I thought all of them were good. Two really resonated with me, especially the who will remember part. Three was very clever and made me chuckle.Thanks for sharing.

Sounds like one point for Doug's side. Lowe seemed almost cavalier in his approach to this trial, and I'm not certain what his goal was for the meet and greet in the parking lot after.

Finally a read date and some great sex! Like others I am concerned about Sam when Jamie goes off on his adventure.

I am unsure how to explain this story. Quirky is the word that comes to mind. It is about Jarek and his journey from teacher to camp leader and back to teacher. That may sound uninspiring, but along the way he meets a group of supporting characters that are sometimes bizarre: militant feminists, an unconsumated married couple, an assortment of students, and Sebastian Sanspere from the story of the same name. Jarek's journey and this mix of characters make for a story that is both funny and thought provoking. Rigby Taylor has a writing style that I enjoy and a view of life I find interesting. I recommend this story.

I am sad to see this story end. I look forward to your next one. Thanks for sharing. It was a lot of fun!

Mrs. Flores is an unlikable charafter. I may be old fashioned, but she still deserves some respect and courtesy because she is the principal, not to mention a human being. However much I may like him as a character, Oliver would not be an easy student to deal with in a classroom. Sadly the teachers and principal have failed Oliver by not treating him with respect. I do applaud calling them out on their hypocrisy. Treating Oliver differently because he is becoming famous is ridiculous, although not surprising. Oliver was right to challenge the change in their behavior. Maybe without swearing? I doubt a celebrity complaining would be enough to get a principal fired. Contractually their are a lot of steps before termination is possible. I don't think I did a good job of getting my point across. I really like this story and these characters. And if creating a dialogue is one of the purposes of art, you have succeeded. Thank you.

Thank you for continuing this story. It has a nice feel to it without being saccharine.

It seems like we know a lot about Eric. It was nice to get to know Andy and Adam a little better, and see what their relationship is like. Thanks.

The only bad part is having to wait a week. You have created several interesting characters and an interesting set up. Of course Brady "effing" Douglass will be at the reunion. Can't wait to see what happens! Thanks for this good start.

I guess I should feel bad that two people died. But I don't. I'm not certain abduction and murder should be funny, but I am still chuckling! I hope that doesn't say bad things about me (or the author 😉). Thanks.

I will miss Andy as I look forward to Vic being back in Barnstable. Vic is two for two on amicable separations from lovers. Must be part of his aura. I know we are on to Hayden-time in Vic's life, but I hope, like others have suggested, you can find a way to let Vic keep us posted on Andy, Gavin, and Hunter. You created (as usual) these great characters that are hard to leave behind. Thanks.

No question mark needed. It is very enjoyable! Love these guys!

Always a hot time when any of the mates get horny! The writing is so arousing without sounding hard or trashy. Thanks.

Nice descriptions of Mikeal getting drunk! It's been a looong time for me, but I remember those feelings. It is nice to see Adam taking care of him since Mikeal is a novice in many situations. Thanks.

Thanks for the explicit content warning, although I'm not certain in was necessary. Your writing did a great job conveying a sensual, loving act in an erotic, but not over the top, way. Mikeal was lucky Adam did not just give up on him. I bet he will get the third degree from Julie!

Back to chapter two after a couple of hours doing other stuff. Great characters! I like Adam even more now that you have told us more about him. And lucky Mikeal! Everyone should have a friend like Julie. I hope she can help him get past his worries.

If Greg would have let him go for a minute, I imagine Chris would have done a little happy dance! Very erotic and at the same time romantic. Thank you.

Great job with the bantering dialogue! It's one of the many things I like about this bunch. This was a good transition chapter. Just enjoying the character's interactions and the lead up to a big confrontation. Thanks.

I am late to the party. I find this story because you post the last chapter and it catches my eye. Your characters and this first chapter are intriguing. I can tell I will enjoy this! Bonus: no chapters to wait for.

I hope someone can get through to Kevin's mom. She is about to destroy her family if she doesn't change her attitude. It looks like things are ready to explode!