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What a eventful series of actions with no easy solution. The stalemate in space is very uncomfortable and the Admiral is very worried, Elsewhere on earth and space trouble is brewing. The new more powerful disciple in terrifying. Will it find the good guys? This is a fascinating story with imaginative futuristic themes with people tested to their limits and uncommonly evil opponents not giving up.

Bouncer led everyone on an exciting chase and found a person who may be the iniside controller of the assassination devices, He is terrified of bouncer and in his excited state should tell all he knows under Garjah's skilled questioning. Is he a key person who knows the real opposing leaders or is he a low level operative who is just following orders andd does not who is really behind his actions? Garjah was worried about Essell running to Bouncer as he should have been. But how about Ases? He is left behind with a guard. What if he is kidnapped with this diversion taking Essell and Garjah away? A person who appears to know bouncer's species says he is too large and aware to be a normal cerops. Bouncer seems to stare towards him in response. It's time for Essell to look more critically at bouncer. If bouncer is more than he seems, he might be now open to indicating it.

I am surprised there was no intelligence assessment from the other side's space craft. The reuse of the space craft for the Mar's orbiting space station's needs seems wise and economical. The urgent request at the last moment for the crown prince to attend the security council was not backed up with a cogent reason. This information gap is not professional or respectful to him. He was gracious to attend, nevertheless. Now we will find out in the next chapter what was so important.

Ok, Alec has made progress with his dad and Finn. He has gotten River and Ken's advice. Make a plan. stick by it. Stand as an equal to Finn He still is worried about his mother, if he moves back. I hope he can isolate her and not let her bring him down. I want to hear his plan and Finn does first. They should get together, be romantic and have great sex. Being close will help them better connect and mutually agree what to do.

Amazing, you feel right there. I am so glad this story has been renewed. The breaks went for the good guys so far, but the battle us not over yet. I am so happy Albert is enhancing Operation Hammerhead. This is a fascinating battle of people and technology.

So, Mark, you are saying you do not want to be predictable ? rjo was expressing how many think you would work things out given a possible band solution and who Will is? So, we have another reason , besides the foundation cliffie, to look for you to answers any uncertainty in your next chapter.

No problem with promoting a sex room and toys, Loren could get an OnlyFans page

Oh, Loren could stretch Jay sexual horizons and mix pleasure and pain to turn the tables on him and his demand for no sex for such a long time. He could envision the sex room as helping Jay learn what new devices, toys, maybe even thick lube for ass play could add to their sex life and also as payback for the enforced celibacy. Or maybe, he could just scare him and show the room and what is in it and back off and return to vanilla sex.

Well, an extension would be founded on lots of ideas. You cannot get enough of them passionately romancing each other and expressing their fulfilling love in new ways. They are a special couple. Heck, after the honeymoon they may add a sex room with toys to their new home, too. Jay who before was only used to vanilla sex, may learn from Loe that he wants to continue enjoying advanced techniques.

That was a seemingly foolhardy mission and unexpected arrival with no preparation. Can the ship be investigated for data to see if the mission and reasons for the ship landing can be revealed ? The people will be interviewed but they may lie.

Well, I bet the size queens would not expect the longest chapter I have read on this site. Kyle Aarons wrote over 132,000 words in chapter 34 of the Kandric Saga.

Mrsgnomie said---"You make torture sound like a bad thing! I don't think either Loren and Jay were complaining about a sex dungeon..." Any ideas on who will be put in the sling first?

Given Vincent's ease and speed of travel, his location is not an either or. If needed he can spend time with Grumphy and others for a full day and other times be with his mate for a while, too

When Jay was asked about his honeymoon, he replied.... “I’m sure it’s a week-long stay in a sex dungeon or something.” Are you really going to follow through and be that graphic in the next chapter? BTW--more recommendations, please

These guys are priceless. Jay wanted to abstain. Loe did an online poll and found only7% agreed. Finally, Jay could not hold back and wanted to make love to Loe. He said no in turn and held Jay to the same standard. Jay is in pain. Loe has a countdown for the actual event factoring travel, etc. " The title of the countdown is Boner Resuscitation." They are keeping busy with a successful store opening, house move and renovation and ski trip. The scenes with the kids are so charming. Lars and his wife might be moving near Loe and Jay. More uncle time looks certain. Loe is helping is brother and sister-in- law and really wants to do this What a feel good , upbeat chapter. I am not ready to believe they can remain sexless.

Wow, Karl had grown to understand what his feelings for George meant: love. Now he surprisingly meets him at the Hopkins' Christmas celebration. They act awkward and Karl is tormented by his presence and what it means. He flees to his bedroom and George follows. Thier romancing and lovemaking is quite poetic. It lasts a long time. When they wake up, everyone has gone out and given them space to enjoy their reunion. Both Karl and George can now talk and be more supportive of each other. I hope they can now have a zest for life and no longer be depressed. The war is going to last for some years and they face dangers. Karl should have a new confidence and desire to train to his best

Mark said--"Will's like the lawyer teenagers should call when they really want to fuck with their parents. " Is the sham charity charge a red herring ? If there is any substance to Mike's outburst which could be a real legal and public relations disaster, Will should apply his analytic and investigative skills to the charge. Having sex before things are resolved could be messy and an issue that Mike could bring up in an appeal to the foundation. If Mike is just a disgruntled rejected grantee, Will can sooth him and help find out what happened. If Mike thinks the foundation really is aiding the related venture capital firm get business with charitable grants to payoff people and programs to induce them to agree to the firm's offers, then he raises a real issue. Will should now be alerted that when he gets to Harvard, some will connect him to the foundation and probably try to get close to him with ulterior motives. The number of fund raisers in Harvard and Boston are off the charts.

I have added a recommendation--I hope many others recommend the story.

Life in the Owensville pack is moving along with positive steps in an easy atmosphere. The new bear-wolf pair are playing. Dave and Stacy are going on a vacation. Heather has received sanctuary from the pack and is welcomed as a vampire. No problems are seen on the horizon. Has anyone's guard been let down? Vincent traveled to Baltimore to train as an evaluator. His experienced co-worker is a very skilled polar bear and has given Vincent some good advice. Vincent will have to change and use both of his sides. He should let his wolf take the role to be more critical/analytical of people in his new partner's view. Vincent has a nature that will be a powerful investigative tool that his co-worker will find out about soon enough. His shadow affinity will help him especially with his investigations. He can find and hear things without being seen.

Loved the chapter. Lots of energy and back and forth issues made this a full, interesting time. Jake and Brad are seeming to make progress. Bongo returned to his girl for now and he and Will took it in stride. Will gave John some advice on how he could rebel from his parents and join the band, This could be explosive. If John follows through, he will need a drummer and one will be at the party:Bongo. With one exception it sounds like the people are having fun. Will with Brad's help obtained the right staff to put his mind at ease. Mike is the brooding fly in the ointment who has a hard edge and brings the mood of the party. Will being Will has to confront him and find out why he is so nasty. He shocks Will by saying the Schulter Foundation is a sham charity. What a buzz kill to Will's intended seduction of Mike! I sure Will cannot believe it so he will want to know Mike's reasons. Was Mike's grant request denied or did someone not worthy get a grant. Is he bitter he was not funded? Besides, Will is just a new trustee so any public documents would not list him as a decisionmaker. Why give Will grief? I am sure Will will want to find the truth and make any needed corrections.

Hopefully the new chapter will be published soon

Maddox brushed their noses together and kissed him. “Not really. But since you’re sexy ordering me around, if you say so, I’ll obey.” “I had no idea you could be so submissive,” Jonathan said, closing his eyes and enjoying Maddox’s playful kisses. “Maybe you should get it, then Hmm--maybe Jonathan should explore ways Maddox can be submissive and have even greater sex with him

You ended stating after this charming episode So, enjoy the calmness" Oh No, Rough seas ahead for Jonathan and Maddox!

Jonathan took Maddox on a perfect date in his opinion and as it turned out Maddox agreed. They learned more about themselves and their relationship. They became comfortable saying they were boyfriends. The soup kitchen revealed more of Jonathan's good qualities and Maddox loved the place and a key friend endorsed them. It was a feel-good time. Then Jonathan spiced things up by taking Maddox to an indie play with nudity. Maddox was shocked and spoke out so everyone heard him. Walking outside the play they met and talked with three somewhat odd identical looking girls{?} who knew them but the boys could not remember them. I wonder of anything will happen from their meeting-campus gossip, a scandal sheet story, secret photos taken of the car bow job...? The ending with Jonathan giving Maddox a fulfilling blow job was masterful. They are beginning to open up to each other. Jonathan has some surprising fantasies of getting Maddox in chains and acting more dominant. Maddox hinted at a receptivity to Jonathan taking more control. They are going to need to be more open and vulnerable if they want more than vanilla sex. It would be a new path for both. They could be drawn much closer, too.

Thank you for your update and explanation. I am sorry you were not able to convey the ideas that mattered to you. I am glad you have found a solution and intend to restart the story later with an outline. West and Neil are compelling people to me. I am going to want to see how you revise and reform them to fit your voice, Good Luck! BTW, I am reading tour new story and like it.