mogwhy
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for me, it's the extremes that make not want to read. way to detailed of descriptions. i don't want to be able to make architectural plans with description nor do i want the simple, he was a boy. the biggest bug-a-boo that will get me to stop reading, no matter if the story is good, is the line spacing. sentence on top of sentence, is a killer. oh and change the characters names with in the same chapter.
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awww JayT, i could never forget you. you and i had some great late night chats. every time i see my poet banner, i think of you and your hand in me wearing it. you are never far from my thoughts and prayers. you have more people that care about you than you know. i'm never far, even if all you want is a distraction.
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promises, promises
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should we invest in an air conditioner?
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more chapters quickly?
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thank you, thank you, @BlindAmbition ! i have so been looking for the difference between a review and a comment. this was so helpful. i tend not to leave either because mine always sound so pathetic. i'm working on leaving more.
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we better be seeing chapter 3 soon! i hope....please
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congratulations to the 3 winners
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I Wrote a Hot Sex Scene: End of the Road
mogwhy commented on Hudson Bartholomew's blog entry in HB's Blog
i'm sorry you didn't get further, but dang you do write a great scene -
So much to do
mogwhy commented on CarlHoliday's blog entry in Melancholy ... the broken staff of life
i know nothing about the the stuff you mention except for the cataracts. when i had mine done, i was the youngest patient my doctor ever operated on. i had just turned 40. it is very easy and quick! i was so terrified by the surgery, that i had put it off for 2 years. man, i was sorry i did that. so hugs and i hope things settled down for you. the music stuff sounds so cool. -
Reflections on a weekend of curling
mogwhy commented on Hunter Thomson's blog entry in Hunter Thomson's Blog
the courage to try is inspiring. you could have stayed home, but you didn't -
Chapter 7 - I Won't Give Up
mogwhy commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 7 - I Won't Give Up
now i have to go look this up -
Chapter 7 - I Won't Give Up
mogwhy commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 7 - I Won't Give Up
good thing ... just saying is the "Wesley Scale" of how good the story is how much mascara is ruined? -
well done A. great twist and a great story. one wonders if there is another tale to tell? even if there is not. this one is a wonderfully dark tale.
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good start....need more
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and don't forget @hohochan657 he's in Hong Kong i think
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too bad about not being close enough, but picking up the marriage?
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hi @Caz Pedroso ! work? your card shop?
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ok finished with one job. so i be skedaddling off to slumberland. good day rveryone
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can you get a visit in? that could be fun oh and hi Kitt. show today?
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fun work or work work? good morning Tim and Sam
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all you need is a fireplace and a cat? i should be asleep, but i'm busy with an editing job or 3
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do you have a favorite? my favorite was a two pumpkin job. the large pumpkin was an owl sitting on the outside of a window with square window panes. the smaller pumpkin, was of a witch at her caldron, brewing something. i cut the bottom of the large one and slipped it over the lit, smaller one. ~moggy
