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mogwhy

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  1. mogwhy

    i am who i am

    speak your truth, for it is a beautiful voice! i'm sorry that others can't or refuse to hear it.
  2. these sound very easy, but oh so good. i like the regular Andes, but one year i got thee cherry ones as a gift for Christmas. they did not last the night
  3. mogwhy

    Ebb and Flow

    i'm buckled in, ready for the ride. looking forward to the next chapter how ever long it takes.
  4. mogwhy

    Chapter 13

    wow, oh wow! such a great chapter. ups and downs, but i'm so glad it was Andy who asked. he has grown so much.great job
  5. awww, def it could be nice but they're all under 35 --too young. heck one looked all of 12. babies
  6. mogwhy

    Touching a Cross

    great chapter. my eyes water and the end
  7. wow. i'm glad people nudged you into publishing it. i hope you continue to be inspired. truth is, i hate summer and everything about summer annoys me, however this piece makes me long for picnics under a willow. good job!
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    Alone

    yes caz, it is. being made to feel alone with people you used to call friends, shreds you. you start digging a hole to hide, sometimes you can climb up, but sometimes you just get buried
  9. mogwhy

    September Winds

    besides the memories you leave with us that love you, you'll leave behind you beautiful writings for even more people to be touched by you and your heart and soul. to live in the hearts you leave behind, is a way to live forever. you will live in my heart as a beautiful friend i met on my journey.
  10. mogwhy

    September Winds

    beautifully done. the sadness, and melancholy is very much here in this. for good or bad, we'll never know how many lives we've changed just by our paths crossing.
  11. mogwhy

    Chapter 3

    i hope love wins
  12. i know authors love comments so; nicely done and <chirp, chirp> feed the reader
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    Chapter 7

    i, too, am glad that Harry and Louis refrained from doing anything. i'm still not sure that Harry isn't up to something. Don needs to take a closer look at wheelchair athletes, but he's too depressed to see anything right now. i also think Don needs to broaden his definition of what sex is, especially in a loving, committed relationship. another good chapter tim
  14. yep, good start. washing everything clean, and leaving puddles to jump in. its rain wonderful!. gotta look for rainbows
  15. have faith in yourself.
  16. make this a chance to build a new hunter. be the man you want to be.
  17. change, any change, good or bad is stressful. i think moving is in the top 5 of stressors, so everything you are feeling is normal! plus, aren't you starting grad school? another biggie. Hunter, the thing that struck me is when you state you were alone with people who love you, that has to hurt and hurts more than being alone with strangers. (trust me, i know this ). so good luck and remember, we are only a PM, or post away
  18. ok @BHopper2 i took a look at this because it was you were the author. not my normal reading material. i know nothing (other than what you've shared) about this game. all that being said <cheep, cheep> feed the reader. how often, roughly, will i get another chapter? PS: can Marcus walk around like a human/robot or is he permanently attached to the ship. it wasn't clear to me
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    Care and Attention

    wasn't sure about this story in the beginning but now i look forward to the next chapter, so hurry with the next one
  20. mogwhy

    Alone

    i fear you are right when i was mobile and in the rehab center , i refused to let anyone sit in the corner. drove the staff nuts, because everyone wanted to sit at my table i just kept rearranging the dining room. the best compliment i got was very this very nice women from Germany who told me "i was the ray of sunshine in her life". i still, on occasion went to my room feeling so alone. thanks gary, for the comments
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    Alone

    somehow it worse when it happens online. the days you feel alone, i'll be just a PM away. can't do much from my bed, but i can at least tell you i'm glad you are here.
  22. mogwhy

    Alone

    and strangely, many of the people feeling alone, are afraid to say hello. hello, thanks for reading/commenting
  23. mogwhy

    Alone

    Sorry AC, i know it hurts. when you make the effort and say hello, folks don't say a word to you, but chat with every one else, your heart cries. if you need a friendly hello, i'll be around
  24. mogwhy

    Sir ...

    i see this as a love poem. simply written, beautifully spun words of love. i'm honored to read.
  25. mogwhy

    Alone

    I’m alone. The world is turning. I’m standing still. All around, rushing. Stillness reigns. Earth may rotate but I do not. I’m alone. Trapped within myself. Standing in a room full of people. No one willing to say hello. In world full of folks. I’m alone.
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