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wow. very emotional. never again, its a prayer, slogan, rallying cry, and a reminder.
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Broken ribs, heal. Collapsed lungs, re-inflate. Dislocated shoulders, realign. Sprain wrist and ankles, mend. Facial swelling, bruising, fade. Just like a river cuts through rocks, and washes everything away, Words will cut and maim your very soul.
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@William King you may not see this but i wanted to respond to this last post. when you said that Mike didn't answer your question, i went back and read the whole thread. the thing is, Mike and tim both answered your question,as did Mac to some degree. it was you who failed to want to understand the answer. to me, your posts read of judgement, even though you say your not. judgmental. i do not like when people assume my reaction to things.
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thank arviana! i hope you found some direction
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i hope you know jp, i'll always support you, even if i'm not a part of your Sirs/sub family
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this was enjoyable story about a boy trying to hide in the shadows and how he grows into a man, to shine in the sun.
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thanks parker. i love dandelions, because no matter what the world throws at them, or tries to kill them, they survive
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i wasn't sure if i'd comment on this. you describe these...(hard pressed to call them humans) well. they see nothing wrong with what they do. and "grooming" is a good word. you write about boys, but sadly, both sexes are groomed. i, too, try hard to see the goodness in people and in the world. to hold on to that and shine lights in to dark corners where these cockroaches live so no child is groomed. thank you tim for your thoughts.
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you did a wonderful thing!
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choices can sometimes root us where we are. very nice duo. and thank god you're continuing your poetry!
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this was a feel good chapter and a fun read. waiting for the next chapter
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i've heard that those mini horses can be train as guide animals
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thanks wolfie. i can call you wolfie, right? i know most don't like 'em but i love them!
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thanks Gary. i'm the strange thing is, i don't go into the sunlight unless i absolutely have to, as i am slightly allergic to it, according to the doctor.
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you may have disappointed a number of people, but there is always room in the heart for forgiveness. you may not agree with me, but to me, its true. i wish you peace
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new life is always a joy to be celebrated
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1. Dandelions. Weeds. Growing everywhere. Even in the pavement cracks. Ascending towards the sky. Green and yellow. Bright spots in desolate cities. Seas of gold in open spaces. Hardy little things. Like plant phoenixes. Rising above things, to shine with their own brilliance. 2. Sunshine, flowing like liquid gold, spills through windows of a life. Friends, like dust motes, dance on shafts of light. Families are all touched by the light
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i'm hooked. mom just seems shocked and left to regain her some of her composure. waiting not so patiently for the next chapter
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another good chapter. mark of a great write is leaving the reader wanting more! cheep, cheep. <feed the little baby reader soon please, daddy writer>
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acckkkk i binged this story today and now the cliff hanger. please, i want to know what happens to caveman!
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both Marcus and Andy have things to work through. Andy needs to see more shades of gray. his world is so black and white. to me the thing lacking for both of them, neither is talking to each other.
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well i thought he was hot tennis/track coach. filled he clothes well. dark hair. full bread. just a little on the short side about 5'8''
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the roller coaster of love, right?
