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Wow everything was happening while Ghayle was in the ritual... She new, even before some of the things happened, that the world was sick with injustice and destruction.
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Either that or the arm of the Bronx consortium reachs someone on the central planets, and the rescue team is just doing a delivery.
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Connor is still having trouble balancing his new life, but he is slowly getting the grip of it. He just have to keep showing Leon that he loves him. Joel seems a good guy, sovI imagine that soon Leon will like him too.
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Riley and Carter grow strong, Riley might have a hard time saying the words "I'm gay", but he becoming very comfortable with living Carter and admitting to want a life with him. The support Carter giving him is great and a great help to his healing
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Hope Riley get a break in the next chapters, he has been through so much.
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Congratulations, looking forward to the next part of their stories. The entanglement of nodes with compassion is very interesting, now they have to learn how other champions can do it on purpose. Moreover, will their powers grow in time, getting more mixed? Will Ryan start having the special node powers as well, and will their weapons get mixed? I am all up for a winged Chimera for both of them 😁
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TC2 - Chapter 6: Friends in Low Places
Sweetlion commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 6: Friends in Low Places
Cool, they will fight back, and the grandpa's will go down. Hope they get Rob back before he gets to depressed. And I'm curious of Adam and Duncan's first date once all the mess is solved. -
Jeff is reaching a breaking point, even sober he is becoming "delusional", ignoring how the world works. He doesn't seem to understand that he can throw is kids in the street if he loses the house. I don't see David waiting much more without news from Simon. Will he leave to look for him?
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It's so funny, not all elves are super excited and happy, but Tligg has a grumpyness level of his own
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Getting Eric interested in the things around him will help reduce his isolation.
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I know right, he is only one degree from knowing the royals, Harry is friends with the Obamas, and Cj and Ritchie know them too.
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After the chapter, hope Brad is ok, I forgot he was in Afghanistan.
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I really love Nathan, even if he is over the top... They do like sex but I get the feeling that he might be feeling a bit insecure, having both Alex and Tom in Robbie's house. And I do not think Alex and Robbie complete each other romantically, and really hope Robbie doesn't ruin it. Alex might want a boyfriend, but with all his life issues, he would be much better with a true lifelong friends, it seems that he never had one of those. Robbie should try to be a Tom/Rory to Alex.
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This is a great chapter. I'm loving the complex nature of the world. It's interesting to have a perspective of the "pacifist" Fedain that's not benevolent, but embroidered with political moves. They do rule a kingdom with slavery.
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Yeah Connor should try no to overcomplicate and just go ova date with Joel... Nevertheless, he was pretty clear, even if in an "unclear" way, so if Joel is interested he should just go and get it, it is normal from Connor side to feel overwhelmed, he has a kid and no one to help.
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I guess today after binge reading Button I started to explore your stories. Together with Brent, Brody is another character I will think fondly. Hope they will have a great life. Great chapter, very touching.
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Welcome Larry.
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I see that barbed wire heart is a sequel to this story, but are there other stories or shorts with this characters? I curious about little Andy, and if Brent found live again.
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Nice chapter, it was good to see old faces, a a bit of new people. I wish we had more of the party, I am curious to see what is happening to the guys that still didn't appear, and also how the new people interacts with the rest.
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Thank you @Cole Matthews for this story. In the end Button conquered most of his difficulties. I was so sad for Andy, and almost a bit for Kevin, that's a messed up dude. And thank you @BlindAmbitionfor your review that had me binge reading it today. Kind of wish to know how little peanut turned out.
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Thank you Gary, great ending!
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TC2 - Chapter 5: Frantic Friday
Sweetlion commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 5: Frantic Friday
Oh damn, those two don't have a minute of peace... For that pics to be taken someone was trespassing private property... -
The Importance of Discipline
Sweetlion commented on Dodger's story chapter in The Importance of Discipline
This was a very emotional chapter... I am glad David has Suzanne, although she doesn't have (so far) a strong personality. But I am worried about Simon, were did he go? Will he be another homeless gay teen? Although David is grounded, he does have to go to work, maybe his uncle can help them. Jeff is an ignorant bigot, and those types of fathers that don't really love their kids. Yes he "loves" and takes care of them because they are his, but part of it is based on a sense of morality and the "right thing" a man should do, but he doesn't really know them, or care about them as persons. I am not thinking about David, he constantly ignores Jon games, hardly interacts with the young Bobby, and doesn't truly value Suzanne. -
It was sad, but part of life, Abo was very sick for a long time. I love Owen because he is so grounded and caring, he is right, I feel bad for all of them, but Ritchie is in a harder position. He knows CJ dad's love him, but he might think that apart from is brother, all his family are dead. He will need more love and patience.
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