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Will he? It can actually help, if he can rest his mind, or be worse if he enters in paranoia. I know he can't tell the parents, but at least Carter should know. The good thing of this day was their talk, Riley admitted how much he cares and needs Carter.
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Sorry don't agree, he didn't had the best approach, but he just question his position on the team. Riley was more personally aggressive, as usual. Maybe after some games, if they see each other play, they gain respect for each other.
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Chapter 10 It Is What It Is
Sweetlion commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 It Is What It Is
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I just read the available chapters, this is a very good story so far.
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Nice ending to the mystery crime... Sad that it took Waylon some time, but happy that they reconnected.
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Any updates on new chapters?
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Wow, tell me this is all a crazy dream Andy is having...
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Oh man, is it just me or Riley looked more balanced before he went to therapy? I know in the long run it probably helped him, but the coming back had a shaked start, he still cannot control doing stupid things. Hope closer contact to Carter will helping find his balance again.
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OK the father might be unpredictable, and have serious issues caused by the war, but at least we learned that he is not a religious nut. He will still have to deal with ingrained machismo. Jon seems to know whats going on, and while David might not be very nice to him, up to now he also haven't been a great, Simon was hurt and the gun was scary.
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Cool, the leopards are back. Since Mason is going to Sidney, I expect that we will see Neil, Liam, Deon and company mostly, but hope we will still have a bit of Dad and Brat.
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I don't like or follow sports... Have no idea if rugby, american football, or aussie rules... But I binge read these 3 books last week on every free time I got. This was a great story, thank you. And while it could finish like this, had the nice surprise of seeing that you start a 4th book.
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Actually he will... If he is Cristina plus one, I can't wait to see the idiot's face if CJ and Ozzie invited the presidents
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Sweet
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Chapter 97 A Memorable Night to Forget
Sweetlion commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 97 A Memorable Night to Forget
The party was funny, although Robbie should have been more careful, as Sue could have caught him. I feel so sad for Alex, the last part was heartbreaking. I just hope Robbie don't get his feelings mixed, for one I like Nathan and don't want to see them hurt, and Alex needs a stable friend, not sex, even if he thinks otherwise. -
True, young love doesn't survive often. However I do know an example, the older brother (i think he was in college at the time) of a friend of mine (I was 13 or 14 at the time) dated and married his girlfriend from when they were 14 or 15 years old. I'm almost 32 and from my knowledge they are still together, probably close to 40. So knowing @Aceinthehole, I think he could spin their lives either way, he can surprise us with a stable relationship from someone that young, or throw us some expected hard times and new relationships. Because I'm a romantic fool I can't stop wishing they are together, although I expect the media to throw them some unpleasant things. Also curious how Marc game out to his father, although I don't expect much problem. Would also love to see Teddy and Ryder's wedding, and also what made them decide to adopt.
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Fuck! I can't breathe!!! You finished the story! *Experiencing painful withdrawal symptoms* This was a great last chapter to a great story, thank you! I wonder how they all grew up, I guess at least the music is still alive 8 years after. Is Oliver still with Marc? They were very young, so a lot of times those things don't last, but I kind of hope they were, they were good for each other and I liked Marc. But knowing you, they probably aren't, you didn't refer to Marc in the barbecue, so I guess you left the door open. I am also curious about the kids, but Ryder and Teddy look like they were doing great.
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Great chapter. Oli's slip was a bit stupid, but not the worst thing ever, and he is young, 13 (or is 14 already), and in the rest of the interview he was perfect. And I love the Oli's description of Ryder in the beginning of the show, still the music God, but content and not suffering... That's really the peak of his Messiah journey, the story of the sad and lonely boy who wanted to change rock, and it will be a great way to end Messiah. I actually hope that nothing bad happens and that Oli doesn't play, they deserve a good moment.
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WOW, did Kohen and the Captain bonded without having sex (I thought that was required, after Lakshou explanation).
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Great chapter
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Finally, Drake confronted his feelings. Now he has to go look for Jimmy. I just hope he doesn't freak out if a broken heart Jimmy is with a friend, say... Victoria.
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hey, even if i don't like Klaus that much, I didn't lash on him this chapter. I just think that Jake went from being a repressed closet case to being forced to come out by Klaus, and I agree with what he said to Hans, he need to find his own person. Because he didn't had time to go to college and learn, he might not return a rich and powerful man, but maybe achieving something for himself, no Diaz, no Klaus, will giving the confidence in needs in himself, even if in the future he decided to accept Klaus' apologies and come back, it would be because he wanted to and not because it doesn't have any place to go. But of course, this is me hypothesizing, you hold all the secrets
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Good Jake is doing something for himself, no brother, no Klaus. I am just said he probably doesn't have his stuff, clothes and money, so he could have a better headstart.
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Jeff has issues, probably has them for a long time, it does seems like he was also an absent father even when the wife was around. Probably already had the start of the drinking problem (he has to be somewhere if he was not at home), that's increasing with his wife's death. The worrisome part is that he also drinks at home, and as a gun in hand. Hope nothing too tragic comes from it. I feel so sorry about Suzanne, she is the only one trying to hold them together, but she needs to leave for her sake, poor Bobby will be lost without any supervision, being the youngest. David could be more helpful and behaves a bit of a brat with his siblings, but then it might also be very hard to feel fatherless as well, after their mother's death. Jon is still a mystery, he was mean and hurtful, but we still don't know if it was just the heat of the fight, or if he will start to hate David for who he is.
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Nice story... Maybe without rabid dragons and with the lead of Jacob and Liven, the new dragons and dragonkin can develop a better society, a better people to interact with other races (when adults, kids will be to uncontrollable for that). Maybe unite dragonkin again, Golden Wings and Orren will always be family... So do they lay eggs or they just magically appear when appropriate? Since gender was not important for it, Jacob can have eggs too?
