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Glad you enjoyed it Moggy.
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Thats funny Sir. I totally agree on the talent. Just beautiful. I’m glad you enjoyed for a 2nd time Sir.
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While not classical, this The Good, bad and ugly is impressive by Danish symphony.
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I love the interaction between Kirra and Styx. It’s natural and honest. Styx lets down his guard with Kirra. Does Styx have real feelings for Max? Does he feel indebted to Max for helping? The remark by Veil is concerning. She doesn’t seem to hold much faith in Neredos. What has changed over the years Prism was entombed?
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I knew a couple people in news living in NY. Let’s just say that looks are more important than intelligence.
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I absolutely love what Ryder said to Liz about the future. They all took on their childhood roles. Ryder and Liz, Blake and Teddy. Mentally speaking; Ryder is on the mend. Setting a course for Oliver to succeed where he didn’t.
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This is a well written character study. I stop reading here though. No offense to the author. As someone who lives a D/s lifestyle, finding issue. This is starting to border on slavery by threats and intimidation. D/s is a partnership with willing partners. A Dom doesn’t beat a sub.
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Devon is a Grade A butthole. I’m conjuring a karmic spell for him as we speak. Kevin and Cameron are adorable. What an honor, someone painting your portrait. So sweet. I love Cameron’s mom. Paul is a closet case fooling nobody!
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I grew up in NYC region. A very diverse area. I have mixed cousins, and a diverse group of friends. We have many discussions on why certain things are inappropriate. I think it’s important to write diverse stories, the world is diverse. If writing something you don’t know, that can be tricky. Definitely ask and research. Also remember you won’t please everyone. Be aware some people take political correctness to the extreme.
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This was a deep movie. Often heartbreaking and uncomfortable. Well acted. It is thought provoking... One of those that I could only watch once.
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I agree they got off easy. If Jani did more, it might alert Anubis. Attention they don’t need.
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What a confusing way to test the waters. Sure an outsider can see there’s more. The mixed signals would mess with anyone’s head. Especially when more than hormones start showing. Good job Comsi!
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In honor of St. Patrick’s Day. A sweet first kiss story. Two lads from Dublin experience their first kiss. Luck of the Irish and definitely gold at the end of this rainbow.
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A sweet story! First kiss is special. Especially with someone special to you. As for that Irish kiss... Luckily I experience that daily from my partner.
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Holy batshit! Another vampire.... I want to go to the dark side!!
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I’m torn on this chapter. It was wonderful. Eric is where he is supposed to be. Introducing marriage and children brought more questions. Another wonderful story HB. These characters are so real. You can’t help but be attached. We are left with hope and possibilities for Eric and Ryan. Not sure if you’ll ever visit these two again, but I’ll picture their HEA.
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Ryder, You need to use some money to buy a new couch... Eww! I’m happy they are considering a new school for Oliver. The right encouragement would propel him to the stars. A last album is just what Ryder needs. His passion will be healing. Album brings closure for Ryder, group, and fans. Being free of that gives Ryder a fresh start. Thank you for not talking about Liz’s cooch. No offense to the women. I passed out in health class with birth movie.
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Foreshadowing is an important tool for any author. An integral element in propelling not only story, but characters. If not done properly, it has the potential of destroying a story. There’s nothing worse than predicting a story. Especially in mystery, fantasy, and sci-fi genres.
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Great chapter. You can see that Mark is a calming influence on Oliver. Music and love will center Oliver. There are a lot of similarities between these two couples. Just in reverse. Mark is like Teddy. While Oliver is like Ryder. Now that we have a path for Oliver... Get all those useless people fired at the school!
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The Elder and the Alpha
FormerMember4 commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in The Elder and the Alpha
Another great chapter. I love the power surge they felt during their group mating. Bonds are certainly cementing. I love that the deal betweened Henry and Lucian blossomed into more. It might be coincidental, but the description of Pax and Henry have a striking similarity. -
My money is on nan to get even before forgiveness. Giving someone the runs is wrong on soo many levels.
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Over The Rainbow • Part VII
FormerMember4 commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part VII
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Over The Rainbow • Part VII
FormerMember4 commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part VII
Poor Jarhead! Dealing with two stubborn Cuban men. Good luck with that Capt’n. I love the travels with CJ. Could easily picture being in those spots. You didn’t surprise me with one thing. It does sadden me though. Having Owen’s sister cancer return is devastating. It was a blow to hear my moms first, the second was just no words. A recurrence usually has a very low low cure and remission rate. For CJ not to be there. Extremely hard. I’m looking forward to next Friday! Good job papi. ❤️ -
Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive. Billy better man up and tell Brett the truth. Involving that lawyer is not fair, and disaster waiting. I’m happy Billy had enough smarts to stop with Dustin. That would destroy Brett. I also don’t think Dustin and Billy would survive another life altering episode. That was a classic joke Em pulled on Billy. Then Dustin saying (Here’s a toaster for turning me gay). Revelation that won’t surprise anyone. Joey is lost and broken. While an ass, he has nobody to help him. Kind of sad actually. Brett is lucky he grew up without Jack. Who knows how that could have negatively altered Brett.
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I’m going to go crazy until next chapter. Salidar surprised me, by overlooking his sons disobedience. Maybe he is understanding to a man following own path. I love the magic tattoos. Control by power of seduction. That would be useful. Max I feel has only good intentions. He sees what I saw last chapter. Releasing the demons could most definitely bring an apocalypse. Great chapter my friend.
