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A fond farewell to my home
FormerMember4 commented on Hunter Thomson's blog entry in Hunter Thomson's Blog
I'm sending all positive vibes to you. I'm sorry it's rough right now. I found moving away was a empowering experience. A fresh start doesn't have to be bad... Make it what you want it! xoxo -
You gave brief premise of game. Looking forward to story unfolding.
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Like I said, Rock Bottom. Will Jesse fall farther down. I agree with Parker. Devan settling relationship with niece. No time, or place for Jesse's self-inflicted drama. The way Jesse treated Nikolai when caught, Cold Hearted Ho!!
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If it's the person I think. He has left 4 other authors stories. Very narrow idea on what world is.
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@Mikiesboy thinks like me. I want real. If you tag everything, its like creating a manufactured fake porno. If you don't like direction/theme of my writing. Then feckin don't read it. I write for myself first and foremost.
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I understand why you ask this question. I only think warning needed on abuse, drugs, violence, rape, suicide. I also put on my D/s lifestyle. I think an author should be sensitive. However; political correctness has gone to the extreme in our society.
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You can post warning! However; not your responsibility. Its a damn story, readers responsibility in the real world.
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The moments that others see with disstain. You show beauty and grace. One is not complete without the other. This poem brings me a smile... Love you! xoxo
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Sir, You show that so much thought and emotion can be captured in very few words.
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The length of a chapter certainly doesn't matter. As long as the flow, consistency, and content are there to support a quality chapter. Personally, the only time I don't like a long chapter... If it revolves around a deep subject matter like suicide. Sometimes you can only take so much on those subjects.
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I am happy to see Devan stand up and play a role in his nieces life. Chris, hope he get what should be coming. Chris and Jesse... perfect for each other... j/k. These two need a little lesson though.
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Little Ms. Jesse needs to hit rock bottom, lose it all. A true life lesson!
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Both beautiful in their imagery. So easily put in moment. The second reminded me of my childhood in Northern N.J. So many mornings awakening to a deer in my yard. Beautiful and fleeting moments.
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I just don't know what to say. Good writing when it produces emotion. Trying to find anything redeeming in Jesse, with nothing. Jesse is selfish, self-involved, and no friend. The nail in coffin was when he happily exclaimed his cheating.
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Good chapter! As someone who has self-harmed their teen and adult life. That self talk happens. Why you should or shouldn't proceed. You find outlets. Cal runs. I write and escape to music. Cal is a character I relate so well. Doubt, unworthy, low self-confidence.
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Happy Birthday Page! Enjoy, one day your young ass is going to say... Where the f*ck did the time go??
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Yes words hurt! They mold who we become. Words leave permanent scars. When negative they break a persons confidence and spirit. Beautifully said honey! xo
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This chapter was frustrating. Well understood though. Being the Alpha, Dom felt he showed his love through sex. Not the touches, kisses, etc. that connect you to your partner. Connection is more cerebral than physical.
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You are beautiful and real. I see and love you. Fight through this moment of doubt lil brother. xo
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Sir, Written and expressed with love.
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Great job Parker. Look forward to the rest. Nice to see these characters interact. Handled with love!
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So much in this chapter. joey and his family skipping town... Good riddance! Brother and sister Amanda and Dustin. Both having their own version of HELL! Can Amanda be the light to give Dustin hope? Thank you for adding a little levity. The scene with the banana was hilarious...
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Sir, I'm happy to see there were people who cared during that time. While I understand the mistrust. They gave brief moments of light. Which allowed you to create your own path. To hear someone say, I'm just a ghost... Sad! Shows how broken the system and humanity can be. jp xo
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I saw that too Lux, about Jackson's mom. Something tells me there's a brother or sister on the way!
