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The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
All the other stories were good... This is my fave! @Wesley8890 -
The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
Now the serious. Breaks my heart about Carter's sister. That was hard for him to relive. Shows he trusts Riley. Even after telling him he is the only one who could break his heart. I'm so glad that Cy was honest about his past. You can't build a relationship on lies and secrets... Cy is showing he wants to be Riley. As much as Carter wants it. -
The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
FormerMember4 commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly
Awww, I knew that Carter was wearing the pants. That was a fun date scene. I love the term "Extra Friendly " friends. I laughed when Carter said he was on a date with Eminem! You have to just love Nancy... I truly believe she understands Cy. She knows when to push him, and when to back off. She wants better for him.... However, she isn't really trying to change him. -
Beautiful little tale M!!
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Beautiful sentiment throughout! However I'm partial to "That's why I cry " and "Portrait ". Such heartfelt and genuine words! JP ❤️
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I hope their will be a long future for this pair. The Queen Mary would be a trip of a lifetime. I'm glad to see you get back to this story. I'm sure it wasn't easy. I hope you can find some solace in your writing.
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While I could never do a threesome in a relationship. This situation was handled with maturity. They most certainly should have had discussion first. However, discussing their relationship as "we"is important. As long as their on the same page... No one will get hurt!
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I was thinking this too. Carter could find out things through his father.
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I meant in general... However, you are correct. He wants Riley. Carter sees what he can be, not what he was.
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I didn't mean it to be offensive. I also don't think that someone lacks intelligence when it's used. Just one of those annoying things. That's very interesting history you provided. Something I didn't know.
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Oh, I sure hope that Cy doesn't listen to Aaron. I think he will find life easier if he's upfront. I also think he will find an ally in Carter. I can't wait to see how this date goes down. Carter is hilarious. Telling Cy they have a date... Its not Cy who is going to wear the pants in that relationship. Its clear Carter gets what he wants... That's clearly Cy!
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"Back in the bosom". You have a way with your dialogue too! @Rndmrunner ?
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I absolutely loved this chapter Carlos! I love the testicle line.... CJ deserves a fricken medal. I love the sermon he gave Sen. Rubio. Then to have Brett enjoy the moment so much. Who wouldn't love the proposal moment. Very funny, one brother waving to the camera, while the other has a meltdown watching the moment.
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Your assessments are correct. Corey did initiate. My feelings about Brett are because he didn't stop Corey. Sure, he didn't want to upset Corey. However, I also think easy way for him to get off.
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I found Will taking care of Liam absolutely adorable... Yeah, I'm a romantic... So, Sue Me!! Its the simple gestures like those, that make a good relationship. These two compliment each other very well. What I find refreshing about this story... While they are teenagers. They show caring and concern for those around them.
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Its nice to see liam get away and regroup. Friends always have a way of centering you. The hell with the Alec /Nathan debate. I'm team Marty all the way... Who the hell cares that he's straight. That connection is undeniable. Make your move Marty! LOL! Good Job @LitLover
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It is quite clear, Brett gave Corey all the clues. He can't be blamed for that. However, I feel he certainly was a user. Now he sees that karma can be a real bitch! I like Adrian... I cant help but feel for him. He certainly seems to be the typical PK, preachers kid. They are often shunned. Especially in smaller towns. I hope that he and Corey can rescue each other at least form a friendship. I absolutely love Charlie. The screw the world attitude. Even with the rebel side, she shows that she is a caring person.
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It was nice to see the coach loosen up a little. Hoping that he'll give Cy a fair chance. Without throwing his past in his face. Although, this chapter had Cy reliving his past. Every time this kid tries to move ahead, his old life is their to remind him. Will Cy ever really be given a second chance. It only seems like his new family and Carter are on his side.
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FormerMember4 commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Perfect description of his characters... Exactly what I wanted to convey! -
Acrophobia, Bull Riding, and the Three Cs
FormerMember4 commented on Wesley8890's story chapter in Acrophobia, Bull Riding, and the Three Cs
Who doesn't love a man on a bull... Even if it is mechanical.... Yeehaaw! A very welcome moment in the church give those holier than thou parisioners a dose of humble pie! -
Theirs a special place in hell for those type of parents. The brother is a loser who won't amount to anything... Peeked in high school. Gabe hasn't had the ideal life. However, his accomplishments were attributed to his own merits. Something to be proud of. I hope that those accomplishments eventually pay off for him. I see the potential of a good story. So far, the main character is likable. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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FormerMember4 commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Dirty Pool is an absolute favorite of mine. I love Gary's writing style. All his stories make you center stage. No matter the size of the story. He has a real knack in bringing out a character's personality. Which in turn, really allows the reader to be involved. More importantly, allows readers to care about his characters. I always look forward to what Gary shares of himself. Wishing you good health and inspiration @Headstall -
Cy took a very big step. He is allowing the walls to be taken down. Not only by Carter... His family as well. Carter is a very good influence on Cy. The ultimate question... Will Cy be able to break down Carter's walls. Their definitely seems to be a story about his mother. Has she abandoned him over being gay. These two are two peas in a pod. They both use walls to protect their hearts. I look forward to the next chapter @Aceinthehole
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Chapter 65 The Longest Day
FormerMember4 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 65 The Longest Day
Better not be the case... Until recently, I liked Daniel! -
Chapter 65 The Longest Day
FormerMember4 commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 65 The Longest Day
Wow, what a chapter! I am happy to see Rory is ok... That was a really sweet thing he said to Robbie. I have a suspicion that Daniel does know. If he is bothered by it. Is it because of his friendship with Nathan, or is he bothered by Robbie being gay. It was nice to see a likable side to Nicola... Will this be the event to change her relationship with Robbie. For the better! I really love Nathan's family. His sister is an awesome support system for the boys. Nathan's father buying the HUGE assortment of rubbers was just hilarious. So was the moment when Nathan's dad caught him sitting in Robbie's lap. Who is the bully going to be? Good Job @Dodger
