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The Tollbooth Operator
FormerMember4 commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in The Tollbooth Operator
Another enjoyable story done by you! You have a very special knack; in your description of characters and their emotions. You also have a way that your reader becomes part of a situation in a scene. -
As an author I follow religiously... Your stories always seem to get an emotional rise out of me. I believe that it is right for Decklan not to show his hand yet. If indeed he does have the video on his phone. Still can't help to want to slap the crap out of him. I certainly hope that karma comes to Chris 100 times over!
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Good chapter Ace... Nice to see that Cy has backing from his new family. Although, I would have thrown out that police officer faster than Walter did. Interested to see how this event might impact the relationship with Carter... Keep up the good writing!
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In a world of change and confusion... Its nice to see the calming effect Carter brings to Cy. Carter already seems to know how far he can go. Also; he seems to understand when he needs to reign it back some. I am really enjoying this new story from the Tales" series.
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No, Leia is not and will never be a Disney Princess! If you try and make her one... She's gonna cut that darn mouse!
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Well; justice was certainly served on that sheriff! I greatly enjoyed this chapter. I very much liked Jubal Harshaw. Quite a character on his own.
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My pleasure! You've created an enjoyable cast of characters! Much better! ?? JP
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sports If, as expected, the Raiders move to Las Vegas…
FormerMember4 replied to Former Member's topic in The Lounge
Funny thing is... They haven't decided on stadium site. However, we got NFL and NHL in one years time! Those players better hope training somewhere else... It gets HOT here!! -
So very sorry for your loss. May your Daniel rest in peace! May your treasured memories bring you strength and comfort in the coming days and months ahead! ❤️ JP
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Good chapter... @Jayt is right, beginning a little disjointed. However, it picked up after that. I look forward to sheriff getting his!
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You Can't Always Get What You Want
FormerMember4 commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in You Can't Always Get What You Want
Billy is dealing with more than any teen should be dealing with. He is showing some maturity by placing some issues aside... Giving Dustin the support and friendship he needs right now. -
LOL!, I found myself chuckling a few times this chapter... Have to love Parker's personality and sarcasm!
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RIP... That symbol has definitely represented Pride in my life!
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Another great chapter Carlos... You made me miss home. Reminders of the Carnegie... Yum!!
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The memories of youth; confusion, doubt... Moments where everything makes sense. Then completely being lost.
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Well written! You put me back in my camp days in the early 80's. LOL!
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A healthy conversation!... Hopefully this will give closure to Liam. Liam now has the complete picture of his previous relationship with Alec. If both guys could have communicated. They might not be where they find themselves! ?
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Good first chapter... Look forward to another enjoyable story by Ronyx!
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The Times They Are a-Changin'
FormerMember4 commented on Headstall's story chapter in The Times They Are a-Changin'
Hey Gary, Another enjoyable chapter. I look forward to how Connor's story will unfold. Nice to see you introduce new characters into the saga! -
Oh Boy!, Robbie sure spends quite a bit of time stressing... Someone needs to give that kid a Xanex. He'll be dead by the age of 16. LOL! Don's reaction to Nathan wasn't too bad. I wonder if Robbie really doesn't have anything to worry about with his sexuality. Another good chapter Dodger!
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What We Did on Our Summer Vacation
FormerMember4 commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in What We Did on Our Summer Vacation
Wow... Depressing! Dustin sure needs all the friends he can get. Not to mention, someone needs to straighten out his loser parents! -
That was so cruel of Cy... No matter if he was joking! However, with Carter... He is going to give it as much as he gets. The perfect person to break down Cy's impenetrable walls.
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I sure like Carter's confidence... He's hilarious!
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Wow... This one was jammed pack Carlos. I like The Squadron ". It was nice to see Aussie let loose. I love his character, but can be so prim and proper. Its nice to see the brothers together. The way it should be. However, very sad to see the deterioration of their grandfather, but a reality of life! Look forward to the next installment!
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Another enjoyable chapter... With main character's who are likable. I look forward to what comes of Raymond and Danny! Clearly the sparks and animosity is there and brewing.
