Gary L
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So much is packed into 2,000 words. This is a jewel. What will his mom say…….? A great read.
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4 yrs later …. Your comments from 2018 are as insightful now as then. This is really good, creative writing. Bravo
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Beautifully written
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I stuck it out for two years raking up huge phone bills and flights London to Valencia… then my amazing mother told me to give up everything and ship out. Been in Spain 19 yrs. my lesson, unless it’s a short-term absence, then decisions/risks have to be taken. story is standing the test of time.
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What You Don’t Know Makes You More Curious
Gary L commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What You Don’t Know Makes You More Curious
Yes he should have, but would we? I fear I’d just get in a deeper mess. Great résumé of another chp that hits all the bases. 🤗 -
Chapter 1 - The First One
Gary L commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The First One
As someone who has had a number of major attacks I can relate to this. Waiting for a tube train, crossing a road. Yes it’s in the mind but try convincing yourself you don’t like your favourite food and see the mind games that can start. great-looking story mr M. 🤗🤗🤗 -
“wide-eyed hero worship” just about sums up my feelings…..
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How did I miss this chp? My security system alerts me to any movement from my favorite author but something went wrong, and there will be consequences should this happen again…. But since it was my error I will be merciful… to myself. great chp, mr A
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As the man says, a GIFT 🎁
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Go for it!!!
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Now I get the reference to coconut milk in your sparring with Mrs G in lowlife. 🤤
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A triumph of a brilliant author creating something I have seen hints of elsewhere but not like this. Reading this story I have felt part of an incredible creative synergy between an author and her readers, and between her loyal readers The great 19th- century authors like Dickens and Trollope wrote in installments and received huge amounts of letters. In our age, IMs allow us to interact at an instant and even receive replies! why do I say all this? It’s simple. This is one great story about a story written by an amazing author whose public react like no other. The rest is just detail. No, seriously, Mrs G has outdone herself. Brava!!!
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Intriguing, to say the least! Another great read, but more than that. I can remember being glued to the election in Georgia but was largely ignorant of so much Black history. I’ve learnt a lot, and much of it humbling. great job, thank you so much 😊
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Ok. Given that I have a large number of multiple personalities, can I recommend on behalf of my “friends” Count Dracula, Mary Poppins and Gary the Snail????? That could SCARE Mrs M as well….
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After a calm(ish) Saturday, I thought Sunday was v special. I love the way you have allowed the complete Jonathan to start being revealed. in awe of your writing ✍️
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Ace chapter. This gap year is already showing how much Will has grown but still keeping his cheeky side. The combination is compelling. Bravo, mr A
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Another 5***** part of a really great series. I have always enjoyed the on-going story, even if not always a fan of the hero, but this is a very good read. The story in Mexico is well-set and our heroes have a roller coaster ride. A must!
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Will is the man 👨!!! great work, again mr A. Thank you so much. The depth you have created in your characters is, for me, the best of your writing, you should give classes!!!!
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Not many of us got a second, or third chance to reconnect. This is a lovely, lovely story. I adore huge sagas a la Mark Arbour or Carlos H but this story shows great things really can come in small packages, and are the better for that. As Carlos says in a succinct comment: Read it. I did and so must you.
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Chapter 2: College and a Fresh Start
Gary L commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 2: College and a Fresh Start
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“Bimbo”???? Tut tut. BTW originally a bimbo was a rich, useless GUY in the 1920’s (I’m listening to PG Wodehouse audio books). Perhaps time to abandon the word….. Forgive me. The story continues beautifully but the word jarred.
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A Boyfriend In Need Is A Boyfriend Indeed
Gary L commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Boyfriend In Need Is A Boyfriend Indeed
Great read - as usual up to our very high expectations!!! I’m imagining how Rusty might entitle his tell- all memoirs …. Any offers, Laura?- 27 comments
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Good dreams and bad nightmares
Gary L commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Good dreams and bad nightmares
Mrs G. The man said No. Listen to him, please……- 132 comments
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Really, really good. What a gap year Will is having! As ever, for me, although the “events” of the story are great, I love even more the way mr A develops the emotional growth, or not (!) of his characters. 5*****
