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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    In addition to that.... "No. That isn't true, although it is a common misconception. Even identical twins have different fingerprints." "Oh. Um, Were the matches you found between the sisters and the evidence exact matches?" Pretty incompetent attorney if you ask me I love a good murder mystery and this checks all the boxes and more
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    Chapter 1

    @Summerabbacat won't be happy to hear that
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    Chapter 6

    The introduction of Joey in the story (I don't remember if he was mentioned before) was nice. He really should tell Ricky about Randy. The reason why I quoted this is because of the mention of going bareback .Ricky has been pretty active with guys and girls on tour I can't say I'm not worried
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    Chapter 6

    I don't think he has any idea of anything
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    King Dick III

    After seeing that picture no wonder Ty went with his mom to welcome the new neighbors I sure would have. I was too busy taking in the boy who was wearing only a pair of denim cut-offs and sneakers...Ty wasn't wearing a shirt? Not that I would have complained of course after the way he was described but still for a first meeting you should wear a shirt. Turns out having Tris in the lead role became a real ASSet. Great story
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    King Dick III

    I haven't started the chapter yet but after seeing the title I remember that was the nickname of one of our football coaches in HS. I thought to myself "The story is about him?"
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    Chapter 27 S2

    Well everything turned out well but wow I don't care how much research Devin did that was still dangerous. With Devin it's a thin line from being brave to reckless. And as far as I know Devin couldn't have transitioned into anything that could help him unless I forgot something. I already purchased plenty of beer. Something tells me Grandpa was a frat boy in his day. Talking about buoys like they were it reminded me of a romantic setting last time I was at the seashore.... buoy meets gull.... My apologies.
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    Chapter 27 S2

    I'm about at the half way point in the chapter as I type this .I have visions of gator trouble hope I'm wrong🤞
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    Chapter 1

    I didn't (And still don't)know what to think at first I thought maybe Nico didn't see people as they really were because of some brain damage but he saw his own reflection in the mirror so I eliminated that. Now I think the accident somehow landed him through a wormhole or some thing and it put Nico in a different universe maybe his vehicle collided with an alien craft disguised as a regular car and thats how he got to this place.....Enough nutty( and probably wrong) theories for you? Nico mentioned something about cold calling in regards to selling insurance. I bet his insurance won't cover a hospital stay at Alltopia
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    Chapter 26

    I think I know what @BentedWreath said in his comment that made you respond like that. Just when you thought that was behind you
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    Chapter 4

    So Ben actually checked underneath Guy's mattress remembering the time with Tim? I guess Ben has some gaydar going. The more I think about the more a rock musical sounds like it won't work .I mean how many rock songs are there that the lyrics won't offend the administration at a private catholic school.It also ends my thoughts of Snowy making it a boy/boy love story.No way would they allow it.
  12. I heard of these guys but I had been unfamiliar with them thanks for sharing I have some YouTube stuff to listen to now Oh and it doesn't hurt that Jack is a hottie but also is a legit musician unlike other past younger performers like the Backstreet Boys(Performers yes ,musicians I don't think so) But I will say Justin Timberlake composed some NSYNC songs so I'll give him credit for that
  13. This alternative ending sadly can happen the exact way you described it.Thank you for writing it To the other readers remember the old TV show Sliders? where the four main characters kept going to an alternate earth every week hoping they will find their way back to their Earth? Well something like that happened here .The @Lee Wilson from that alternative earth came here and posted this On GA unbeknownst to our Lee Wilson. Yeah I'll go with that.That Lee Wilson must be evil huh? Now I'll be wondering which Lee Wilson is posting The Boy On The Porch🤔
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    Chapter 15

    Everybody that gets led astray ends up in your korner
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    Chapter 65

    Ever thought of posting them here? There are some authors as we speak that are putting stories they posted on other sites in the past here.
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    Chapter 15

    It might be Wednesday on one of those different calendars we hear aboutSee even they say so
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    Chapter 19

    Got it. Actually I can picture her saying that much to River's chagrin
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    Chapter 19

    Excuse me for being dumb but I don't understand that reference🤔
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    Chapter 65

    I thought the story was winding down but after what Caleb did allegedly (Way to go Caleb ....I didn't say that) there going to be more chapters to sort that out. “Then I'll have to blister your ass till you do, you little shit, and you're going to get a mouth full of soap for back talking me!” Did you hear the real Calvin actually say something like that? If so then Calvin's piece of shittyness (Is that a word🤔) knows no bounds
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    Chapter 19

    It is interesting to see a situation we already read about in I Hate This Town from a third person perspective which River provided. One while I'm sure River despised Alec's Mom (Who wouldn't) I didn't realize he had such a intense dislike of Henry . Of course I'm certain every reader LOVED the Veronica scene but River thoughts about how Alec and Finn were interacting was also very interesting.I'm looking forward to River's thoughts as that progresses .Heck as we remember Kenji even got involved somewhat. Are we going to have a scene where River introduces Kenji to his Mom. I'm really curious to her reaction to that
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    Chapter 19

    That was my favorite part of the chapter.Right on River❤️
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    Chapter 15

    Not only from his parents but also from Sam and Sy. The first part of what Andy did arranging the meeting with Mr. Black could be looked at this way. A lot of your most successful businesses are started with an unconventional idea no one will say will work but the person with the idea goes on with it anyway because he believes in it.It is called taking a risk or high/risk reward of course the main difference is in one the risk is being broke where in the other it could be your life but to me it's the same kind of thinking.In Andrew's mind he can't write an authentic book without taking that risk
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    Chapter 15

    I guess those feelings Matt developed for Ahmat are valid.I supposed what needs to happen is for Matt to find out Andy is in to him only he isn't saying so. if that happens Matt might have an internal struggle
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    Chapter 1

    These picture challenges that sight does has resulted in a lot of good stories being written. You know that prince/commoner conflict isn't that much different then today when a person from a wealthy family falls for a person from a family of modest means. "And because we love them, we do not deny them that right to leave." Is Cedric the creator of that popular bumper sticker "If you love something set it free......?
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    Chapter 3

    When was this written? Buying a map? How quaint. So this was either written a while ago or Australian teens aren't glued to smartphones like Americans teens are. Excellent chapter. We can all relate to Tim's imagination running wild that is one thing that is timeless. Tim and Guy should play a gag on Ben since Ben does not know about Guy
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