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    Grant Chapter 11

    I wish you had have them go to Adelaide I have some cousins there it would have Interesting other that described since I never been there.I have other cousins in Mt.Gambier but I understand thats a long way away from where Sebastian is. It wasn't mentioned but were there no adults with them on the flight back? you would think there would be after what happened.
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    Chapter 20

    Up to you BUT!!! Do you really want MY advice?
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    Chapter 20

    Yet you keep sending him the chapters🤔
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    Chapter 20

    You're not suggesting that's what they should do with Huntington do you? 🤔....Don't think it will work
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    Chapter 20

    Now you done it you ticked @Danilo Syrtis off
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    Chapter 20

    Very exciting chapter .So an act of God (lightning) helped Asa escape. Although it wasn't the soldier who open the slot fault I bet Huntington still killed him for "failing" .Huntington also thought Asa was alone so they were unaware of Caleb another miss someone will take the blame for. Huntington can make mistakes that will be the difference when the two sides finally battle. either a sandwich and fruit or another hand-held option such as the burrito he’d been given last time. They were in Russia right? I bet there isn't a burrito anywhere in Russia especially these days
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    Chapter 20

    Well I'm here if Gnomie is not......Because I just HAVE to be on page 1What do I do now?🤔 .....Oh yeah read the chapter see you in a few. BTWAuthors don't count
  8. You called it.
  9. Is there another relative like an Aunt who might cause trouble?Granted Lacey used the f-----t slur under the influence of a tumor but she still used it would a sibling feel the same way.?
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    Chapter 239

    At best I'm guessing the younger priest was thinking the old priest was senile and thought he was saying was nonsense. AT worst he was embezzling donations I guess Armand will find out with more investigation
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    Chapter 40 S1

    A chapter of just being normal everyday people without shifting into anything.And Devin And Mac made a couple of friends in Rory and Jaxson (Not to mention the eye candy treat they got) So why the secrecy from Mac's parents are where they are going tomorrow?
  12. Geez Cindy manages to be a kill joy from states away.
  13. No one in South London would have believed me, but I couldn’t tell anyone anyway. It made me wonder why Tristian had insisted on bringing me along in the first place. I was a loose cannon and prone to making mistakes. With so much for him to lose, it seemed like an unnecessary risk to take. I was thinking the same thing so the only explanation for this is Tristian is really into James.Besides there would no point to this story otherwise “There you are. We were getting worried; I thought the hounds had got you.” When I read that line I immediately thought of a female Mr. Burns
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    Chapter 7

    I have heard stories of a triplet finding his brothers later in life that would have kept the story going but then there would be a third Franklin we already had two too many. great story
  15. The title of the next chapter suggests somebody is going to some how try to mess with Derek and Jeremy legally what else would set off Judge Ridge ire. $14 a head? No way you can find that In California. I hope the dreams are not an ongoing thing with Adam
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    Thirst

    Very interesting first chapter to say the least.It was all because of @kbois editing right? (But we know better)
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    Thorns

    I am in no way qualified to speak on this topic so as far as I know what I'm about to write may be nonsense. I would think having somebody who had been through the same thing Orson is going through would made sense.That person could tell Orson that he/she made the very same mistake at the beginning and that it will get better but perhaps I am being too simplistic. BTW unlessI missed it are you going to tell us how Jeremy got his guitar back?
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    Scars

    @chris191070 and @Danilo Syrtis said it right when they said it was only a matter of when Jermy's Dad was going to die because of the bottle and it just as easily could of happen he Jeremy was at work or shopping he couldn't be there 24/7. Clay is almost as hard on himself as Jeremy is on himself perhaps they are more alike then they think
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    Chapter 8

    Oh of course that's exactly what I was thinking
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    Chapter 8

    "You actually have a spell for instant lube." Well I guess that can come in handy
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    Wounded

    There is still a lot to learn about Jeremy so I'll reserve comment until then. This incident may have oddly found what Orson should do next as the previous commenter said he would make a great psychologist he already took some Psych classes in college he could go back and finish them am I'm sure he'll get some assistance from Police benefits to pay for them.Camp Refuge is the perfect place for him to use those skills
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    Chapter 13

    So what evidence did they find to finally pull the trigger on Micco's arrest? I have a feeling the hurricane will play a part in Micco being able to escape perhaps even with Chase help because Chase will know the animals will need Micco
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    Chapter 19

    on page 5 You think that's why posted it?🤐
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    Chapter 19

    That reminds me I got to clean my fan blades
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    Chapter 30

    I was thinking Bryan exchanging texts with Calvin . If Bryan says the right thing Calvin could be stupid enough to respond and then incriminate himself
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