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This might be the biggest WOW!!!! chapter I ever read. Outstanding it kept me up really late reading Damn you C James LOL
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And the Sea shall give up its Dead
weinerdog commented on C James's story chapter in And the Sea shall give up its Dead
As did a lot of the readers I figured this was the case .Now the details as to why things went down this way I can't begin to speculate. I'm eagerly waiting to hear the details. With his Mom alive there is no point in killing Trevor if Bridget finds this out the hit would then be on her but then it would look more suspicious I'm all over the place I'll just see what happens -
And the Sea shall give up its Dead
weinerdog commented on C James's story chapter in And the Sea shall give up its Dead
As did a lot of the readers I figured this was the case .Now the details as to why things went down this way I can't begin to speculate. I'm eagerly waiting to hear the details. With his Mom alive there is no point in killing Trevor if Bridget finds this out the hit would then be on her but then it would look more suspicious -
Well Trey has convinced himself everything is going to be OK.And I suspect it is going to look like that for a few days but if everything is OK then the the story wound end now right?Lets brace ourselves for what's going to happen whatever that is.
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That description had me imagining it very vividly.There is no story if the others don't find out about this so it will be interesting to see how that happens. If Neils band moves up the music ladder and becomes super successful well he already knows who to hire as the group photographer
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Now that they have a possible name associated with AM rape is it in the Doctor's purview to ask AM to confirm the name?I don't know how that works out legally or otherwise. As soon as Tim informed the Doctor of the name the Doctor wanted to have a meeting with them makes me wonder if Bruce Stevens has been accused of other things
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One advantage I thought Trevor might have is his different hair color but Lisa said his hair looked brown in the yearbook picture online so does that cancel each other out?
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The best soap opera writers will probably borrow this from you wow.Tim being a lawyer looks like he's going to be busy again but maybe it should be some other lawyer handling it Tim might be too close to the situation. Three boys on one girl would not be viewed the way you described it in today's world. Are you saying that's what would have happened back then because of the small town mentality .
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I have except for about 5 years of my early childhood when I lived in Boston always liked I. A warm weather city so I can't relate to going to place like Hellzone in the cold I didn't even know places like that did that. If the Stoner recognized them you know others will I wonder what life will be like for them now.
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Chapter 8 - His Royal Musk
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 8 - His Royal Musk
Along the stuff that was mentioned in the above two comments I remember in book 1 there was a big cat in that one. Ian's father? -
Well a calm chapter Tim and Stephen needed some reasonable quiet time computers not withstanding. So while Dad has been allowed to visit AM I'm guessing the Doctor has told him not to discuss the incident that happened with AM. Not only should the Doctor be there when Mom visits AM but maybe the Doctor Mom is seeing should be there to advise her also
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So far sounds like a kick ass vacation even without their extra activities they do. J.J. might be really smart but he has to learn something when he spoke of that Mexican restaurant "Chipotle it wasn't" maybe it's different in the midwest but in San Diego where I live some of your hole in the wall Mexican restaurants are the best places to eat and yes J.J. better then Chipotle.
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Here is something I haven't seen anybody mention Bridget still thinks Trevor has blond hair so I'm sure Sanchez thinks that also so could Sanchez or whoever he gets to try to kill Trevor will make an attempt on Shane instead?
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While it is totally on the Mom for not telling Dad about AM rape he still was unaware of AM behavior and how she dressed he probably was also unaware of the bullying Tim and Donnie received he might chide himself for being too busy with work to know what was going on
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The one thing I keep seeing happening is Sammy might in a future YouTube vid might accidentally upload the unedited video. So if someone asks Sammy how he makes his meals so good he might say well before I start I go in my room watch our video and then I....never mind. ..
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Do you have somebody to try out the flavors with?
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Well Kyle and his Mom have a hard life but it is still a hell of a lot better then Kyle's Mom being abused by that POS and Kyle fearing for his life from Salvatore and they seem to realize it.Good luck to all of them.
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Considering you said you were doing this on the fly you are sure churning out the chapters. It's a good thing this video wasn't live. I'm wrong most of the time when I try to predict but I have it I my head with their Mom's heavy work schedule and barely making ends meet that they will end up on a site that people will pay to watch them
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We know AM hates Tim but she also stayed away from the family for a long time so does some of that also extend to her Mom?
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I'm no law expert but I think the statute of limitations might be up I'm sure someone will correct me if I'm wrong but how about a civil suit?Tim is a lawyer so maybe🤔
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Jakey seems to have no qualms about posting the video. Is it because his Jock friends are of similar minds? If YouTube bans Sammy then just go to twitter it's unbelievable how far you can go before they ban you there.
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As soon as I heard the doctors talking about AM memory of her senior year being blocked out I immediately thought the worst.It certainly puts a different perspective on things doesn't it.And I guess Mom wanted it to stay a secret but keeping things status quo wasn't working .Im surprised Dad got Mom to see a shrink On a more pleasant side I'm glad Randy is in Eva's wedding party that shows Eva thinks of him as a little brother also.
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Nice chapter.Judging from Franklin's big brother comment it sounds like he's going to be around from time to time.
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Chapter 7 - Demons of the Past
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Demons of the Past
Okay I wasn't sure the Wolf was Alex when the Wolf was described as small it threw me off I know Alex in wolf form would not be full grown but I didn't think he would be small also. So Ian saying "he's mine now" does that mean Ian knows who the Wolf is? -
The Great Australian Blight
weinerdog commented on C James's story chapter in The Great Australian Blight
After hearing so many readers rave about this story I finally got around to reading it and it has lived up to everything I heard about it but that's not surprising everything this author writes has been great. I had no plans to comment of the story being completed for a while now but I'll now make an occasional prediction now and then and and I'll probably be wrong 99% of the time. My first one may not be so tough since Shane entered the story he's been a big part of it I don't think the author has him here just to be another buddy to Trevor other readers probably thought this also.
