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My very first reaction to that is how the hell did Brian remember those numbers?Well it's safe to say they won't move into that place in Ceres but where will they move?Forgive my choice of words but Sandy is portrayed somewhat different in this timeline it sounds like she gets a wild hair up her ass and runs with the idea hastily.God knows how she'll be now that she has money. There is no reason for Davey to take that job and they don't need his financial help anymore but you have to consider unintended consequences this might start a chain of events of who knows what.If Davey gets mad at Brian I hope Brian reminds him of the Super Bowl bets the other Davey did.Be very interesting where this goes. it sounded like Brian has some follow up plan involving his mom and Davey's mom .
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James and Cody seem to be gradually bonding if only Cody would stop calling James a pretty boy twink Is it really a date when the person you're dating (Casper)lives in the same house?
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Remember when we first met Dr. McMillian ? I said he wasn't the sharpest knife in the drawer and this chapter proved that.He goes to Adam angry that Adam interfered with his responsibility and then in the next sentence shows how irresponsible he is by not having a medical record for Ralph. My high school had a nurse on call I bet Marie a Nurse practitioner is more qualified to handle that at the school than Dr. McMillian was. Just a thought. It would be interesting to find out how many car accidents were caused by sleep apnea.Or any kind of accident .
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So now what so far has been real and what so far has been a dream?Was he really a vampire did the incident in the park really happen? Is he really in a psychiatric hospital? Have we really read the last two chapters🤔
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Whatever works for you is fine with me
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This chapter reminds me so much of a tv show I used to watch called Bar Rescue the premise is a bar is about to go out of business and they call this expert in to fix the problem in the bars that had a kitchen and served food all of them were unbelievably filthy any gross thing you can think of they came across.The host of the show would leave and yell "You better have this place clean when I return tomorrow" A lot like Adam in this chapter. Interesting how the board of directors offices are fancy.Can't wait to hear how their living quarters are described.How much was the tuition?
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The last line of the chapter"'Life was good, damn good" Why does that make me feel so uneasy? I heard about that mostly gay beach in Hawaii a friend of mine who is straight visited friends there and one day he decided to go and kick it on a beach alone and do some reading although he didn't pay much attention to the beach goers he noticed it was mostly guys and bodybuilders his friends told him after the fact that it was a gay beach LOL. So Davey seems to be getting convinced that he and Brian are meant for each other.Will it happen with Sean and Brandon again?And will Todd figure in it some way? Marcie has been quiet but it doesn't feel like its over for some reason.What if Marcie got together with that black guy who called Davey a racist and a dark baby comes out of her
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Nice chapter .Does Miguel remind Phillip of Javier by any chance?
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Your killing me I'm getting hungry
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James thought he looked manly and Cody said he looked Emo wow quite a gap.
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I have cousins in Adelaide and Mt.Gambier are you in that neck of the woods?
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When I was in high school I worked in a navy mess hall they made us pass a food handlers test after being given a lecture and presentation.This "chef" failed the most basic rules especially about the gloves it I wonder how many kids got sick over the years faculty also for that matter
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There is being fanatical about religion and there is being dangerous and I think this church falls into that category. Matt's dad sound likes the late Reverend Phelps the one who would take a group of his flock outside of a funeral of an aids patient and scream"God hates fags".And Pastor Sampson thinks he qualified to convert that other gay kid this is a nightmare. Part of Ricky's overreaction to Matt at school today probably has something to do Matt's parents if Matt can't talk to Ricky for a week for throwing a spitball I bet Ricky shutters at the reaction to a kiss.
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I assume Adam can't just fire Arlene I'm sure there's some kind of procedure and she has a contract etc. but at the same time the very idea of working FOR Adam probably appalls her so I guess she'll resign or maybe try to sue .Will his extra duties make it tougher to do what he does now?
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I had forgotten that Mrs. Jameson put Micheal's luggage in Ethan's car and also she called the Morgans so how the hell could kidnapping stick?🤔 Some random thoughts at first Micheal and Jonathan were vary of each other but Jonathan asked Micheal if he was going to be OK they have come a long way. That cold water and ice cubes in the tub trick would make me forget my problems temporarily also. Huge step talking to Elsie about what happened in the past but it has to be done Those birds are a crack up😆
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I was just asking a rhetorical question when I asked last chapter if Brian should tell the story I didn't think he would do so in this chapter.If I was hearing this story I would be unbelievably skeptical but two things would convince me that its on the level one is that Trevor's dad is a Soviet defector the old Brian couldn't have known that second is the dramatic way Brian has changed since January I'm sure Mr. B is thinking about that.Has Brian picked up any of the Russian language from the other Davey? That would be another thing he could use. Well we now know why Marcie is what she is if the whole family is in on it.Marcie's Dad threaten to burn down their house? He's a bigger moron than Marcie I thought that was impossible.This does remind of something that happened in history the actor Charlie Chaplin was sued for paternity(google it) and although blood tests proved he wasn't the bio-dad the court still considered him the father this case was credited for changing paternity laws.So Brian's strategy of spreading the slut news will come in handy besides the coach overheard the conversation Brian had with Katie.Like what @drpaladin said I feel so bad for that future child
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Interesting chapter. I was going to ask how James knew that Cody was in trouble but as I was typing this I realized he told James he was at the lake I guess James got worried. Didn't Cody hear about the talk that something was out there?I guess he didn't believe shroom Man can you imagine that
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Well we do know this kind of stuff exists. I'm no expert but what I understand is people into all kinds of kink don't just stop.Would this be considered a disorder?I hesitate to ask that because at one time Gay was considered a disorder so there's a who am I judge issue here.If I'm Rob and I love and care for Artem I guess I would try to stay together because I would be so scared that somebody will go overboard and really hurt him maybe fatally.But it might be a losing battle. Interesting story
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The way Arlene was so unprepared maybe she and the board could make use of the test center and take all the time they need before making thier next decision .If Arlene was graded like a student she would have gotten an F
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And another chapter without the board meeting.Kidding😆 My first hope of course is Adam stays and continues with the kids.But he talked about opening his own school Adam might be able to self finance it but if he can't I bet the Ambassador has contacts as do other parents to give him financial backing should it come to that.
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Does he tell the story now?
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OK I'm sure almost all off you had that thought in the back of your mind and I alluded to it last chapter comment and I'm sure none of you believe that it's Brian's baby.Before I get to the reasons I just can't see Marcie continuing being part of this story for 18 more chapter and have almost everything that has happened up to now be wiped out.Marcie address scheme failed thanks to Mr B. he's been awesome in this timeline and all her friends deserted her so she sounds desperate and this may be a desperate move.I don't think even she would fake being pregnant(Well maybe she would)but we know she has slept around the previous Brian she can tell this to and he would believe it but this Brian will insist on a paternity test.I do know DNA is still a couple years away I think it was 1988 so that test isn't available what I don't know is while there were paternity tests were there pre-natal paternity tests in 1986 or do they have to wait until the child is born.What I would like to see happen is Davey noticing that something is off about Marcie's story and when she got pregnant and then tells Brian about it that would be poetic justice. There is another less likely scenario.Sorry for writing so much but I want to get this out there.The eighty year old Sean that Brian left behind might be able to tell something went wrong by looking at the internet.I know it was said that there wasn't enough power but if anybody could come up with a solution it would be that Sean maybe there was enough power and Sean didn't tell Brian that because he didn't want to go.There is a reason for Todd to be introduced in this story as Sean's cousin could it be if Sean returns he would then calls Todd from LA and asks to get him so he could help out Brian? I know that's out there but this is science fiction right? Thanks for indulging me
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Love to see something happen with James and Cody.Yeah he lives in Oregon but WTH James can fly there.What did the shroom taker see? Was it the Whale?
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Ah you're dragging it on I wanted to see the board meeting in this chapter. Threatening Jane with her job how crude I bet Arlene got use to running roughshod over the years.I like the idea of Adam opening his own school but I can't see the board paying him off.But if he does I would love to see ALL 60 students transfer to his school.
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You did a great job describing the sex scene other authors who are otherwise very good tend to go on and on and ON.Surprised that Artem was the instigator given his situation at school it makes sense though. I see a possible red flag when you mentioned Artem bruise last chapter I thought it was from playing sports but now he has a cut I hope that's not from his parents and since he says they don't care that he's out this late are they getting drunk? Forgive my ignorance what's the significance of Artem and Ares? I'm thinking name of a movie or greek mythology.I would google it but they point me to the wrong direction many times.
