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Funny trying to remember Lewis earlier appearance in the story yeah he and James never saw each other although they crossed the same paths.I'm surprised Casper never mentioned him to James.When Lewis finds Charlie(I say when because if he doesn't find him the story stops here LOL) what is he exactly suppose to do then?

They think it was the front of the temple what if it is the back? Ignore me.But it will be interesting to see how they identify what kind of temple it was anyhow different certain peopled build Thiet temples

I really don't know what to say about this without giving too much away I'm doing this review so it will have 5 stars and might get some attention from some readers.The tags tell you a lot about this story I'll only add that there are a lot of twist and turns and suspense to go along with a good old fashion love story between two gay teens and the tribulations that brings along with the supernatural elements. As if not to be obvious please read season one first.

So much to absorb.Forgive me if I'm asking the obvious I'm slow Alex"s Dad and that big cat/human were after Owen because he and Alex got together I guess.What I don't remember is back in the first season did we see the cat before or after Owen and Alex got together? I guess the cat would have been around anyway because of Ryan's family. A lot of interesting questions to be answered .I guess Ryan and his sisters were e born foxes and transformed into humans.So maybe which way did it happen with Alex's Dad and does Alex brother have the same condition?We know damn well Owen isn't just going to accept what Alex said and move on I imagine he's going to have a confrontation with Alex and maybe Ryan also and he's sure to find out the secret I'm guessing.Season 3 can't come soon enough

Jake's mother sure gave him a lot to think about it will be interesting to see if changes his feeling toward this situation.I know Jake is young but what his mother said he should have been able to realize himself.I wonder if it's significant that Kit's name got brought up

That last sentence has really bummed me out I can think of only two things one is something happened and Shaun had to leave town with his Dad that would be bad but Shaun is still around if it's the other thing which I won't say but all the readers know what I'm referring to OMG that would suck

For a very brief moment while reading this chapter I had this thought some of you might remember in Ron's previous story there was a Stephanie in that one also when the Stephanie in this story said “I want to thank you, Matt. I have a gay brother who means the world to me." I thought OMG is this Jack's older sister?But then she said he was 14 and Jack was 16 so it's not her would have been cool though.Her statement explains why she wants to do the story it's for all the right reasons. I'm glad Evan is getting a nice family to live with I mentioned in a previous chapter about what may happen to Hayden and it got brought up again so it looks like this will be an issue . I hope he ends up in a place where he can stay in touch with Evan as they were getting close So Trent asked Matt out to dinner is this two buds hanging out or a date? Seeing that Trent asked after Matt got tested I'm thinking date when it comes to dating Matt is still that 16 year old boy so I hope Trent is careful. Stephanie said earlier “After what I heard this morning, I could write a book about you." Or she could write a story on GA about him ..Oh wait Ronyx is already doing that LOL

Jake is sooooooooo!!! mixed up right now.Remember when Ethen forgave Jake back in Neveda? Would he this time?There a really old song called 'Torn Between Two Lovers" and there's a lyric in it "feeling like a fool" that's Jake right now. But even discounting all that say If the Cody issue didn't exist this is still being reckless get some more facts first. Will being with Ethen mean being on the run 24/7?Depending on how serious Ethen's situation might be it might even mean death if things go wrong

This reads like a statement of some kind.I can think of only a few things either a newspaper story or somebody writing a book or a police statement.The one thing we know more then ever is Javier is bad news

Well Ethen is going to be in the UK for 3 months a lot of things can happen and change in 3 months.I'm pretty sure Colin can figure out where Ethen went and I'm sure somebody will be coming.I'm wondering how complicated would it be for Colin to go there since he's not even supposed to exist and maybe because of his assignment he may not be able to.If Ethen just stayed holed up at the hostel could they track him down? I also imagine Jake being followed everywhere he goes.Perhaps Alan has some ideas on how Ethen can avoid being found. As far as the Jake/Ethen/Cody situation goes I mentioned this before Jake loves Cody more like a best friend while Ethen has Jake's heart.Even if it ends up Ethen going back to the U.S. Cody will know he'll always be number two would anybody want to stay around in those circumstances?The name of the story is Everything You Were now is the title referring to Jake and Cody's relationship or Jake and Ethen's?

It sounds like whatever was Alan's part in this he was never told any details just that it's top secret and Alan accepted it and went Aye,Aye. What if what happened to Ethen isn't a CIA thing at all ,what if it's all Colin's doing and he pretended like it was a CIA plan? After Ethen cleaned out the accounts I think the CIA would know immediately and most likely have intercepted Ethen at the airport but if it's just Colin it might take him a little bit longer to realize what happened.Colin doesn't exist officially now that may be because once Ethen took off from home they were afraid Colin's cover would be blown. As far as Alan knows he's taking a huge risk but he must believe he's taking a bigger risk by doing nothing the deleted files has him spooked. Alan can't really have a plan in his head yet but he does have a skill set where he might be able to come up with something but what?

I hope you're right but it would be a way where Salvatore is out of Kyle's life.

There is still a lot to figure out about Colin was he putting on an act all this time?Maybe something happened to his mind after his wife,Ethen's mother died.He had a file on Luke's family. Why? Well Luke did have a crush on Ethen perhaps it really is about Ethen being gay Colin also might have been upset at the way Ethen was living his life sleeping around like he was. I still don't how Jake dad fits into this I guess we'll find out next chapter. After all this though I can't see how Ethen can stay around without things ending badly.

Awesome story it's late where I am I'll try to write a review tomorrow unless some other reader writes a great one before I get to it which will probably happen. I learned something I never heard of a pumise before.

Stay away from all parties etc. until after Districts. Cindy was really crossing a line I suspect we might see Henry getting more involved in this

Oh jeez you just HAD to drag it out another chapter didn't you LOL. Nothing really new to comment on yet except Alan being who he is and what he knows may have put a GPS on Jakes phone or in his bag or kit in anticipation of something like this.When the dust clears I hope things end up being OK for Cody

This sounds like the lost city of Atlantis except its sand instead of water I have to ask we know Atlantis is fictional ( but some people are still looking for it)has there been a place like this found before?Also would there be a historian back then somebody like Josephus that wrote about this?

I'm thinking about what Colin said to Ethen that this is some top-secret position that he's taking and they have to leave their old identities behind.This is very unfair to insist Ethen to give up literally everything because Colin wants a promotion that sound so selfish to me.Ethen is 17 you can't tell me they cannot come up with another cover story and other arrangements so Ethen doesn't have to do this.With that in mind maybe Colin isn't telling the whole story he might have done something or gotten into something too deep where he has no choice and maybe he's being ordered to do it this way.Alan involvement in this(if true) is also troubling and I can see that causing an unbelievable amount of tension with Jake again the situation whatever it is might be so severe that Alan had to cooperate I don't he would do this without good reason knowing what it means for Jake,Cody and everyone else affected there is more then what Colin is saying I think.

My God I must have gained 5 pounds just reading about what they ate and Shaun after all that cheesecake wanted Krispy Kreme???ARE YOU SERIOUS. I'm surprised J.J. with all the reading he has done didn't know about passover. It interesting for them to meet Kevin I hope they left him a good tip

Jake told Ethen that he is so in love with him and never got over him.Cody is absolutely right to react the way he did.Jake knows this is unfair to Cody he also loves Cody but not the same way he loves Jake The combination of Colin all of a sudden not existing and Jake getting the letter and then the phone Alan knows how the business he is in works and he has to consider that Jake DID speak to Ethen. So why is he being so dismissive about that?Maybe Alan knows more then he is letting on he would have been in a position to know some things and put 2+2 together

"Anyway, I chickened out and slipped an IOU under the door marked “Pastor’s Office,” with a note saying I’m sorry for having been a thief. If I ever get any money, I’ll have to try and send them enough to cover what I stole." I read this chapter again after @BlueWindBoy posted his message and I remembered that passage.I don't think you mentioned it later in the story but Stephan/ Eric did just that right?

I haven't read it yet and I'm not going to until it's posted here but there is no doubt in my mind you are accurate

Here's what doesn't add up to me why does Salvatore think they could do the job? I was mentioned that these people have money and that would include a good security system. How much younger is Hudson? I'm worried Salvatore might want him to get involved.That might be enough for Matias to the take a BIG risk with Salvatore

I usually have a thought where this is going even if I'm wrong (more often than not) But I really don't here. One thought is his Dad did this but why this way? Also the light was out I think that was planned so the person would not be easily seen so the next logical person would be be Ryan maybe he somehow knows about what almost happened in the restaurant.But that would mean he would have knocked out his dad also pretty risky. So season finale?You make this sound like a TV show(BTW I think this would be a good TV show know any connections in the industry to pitch this I do know some scenes would have to be implied and not shown)

I didn't know this myself until just recently but for you non Brits such as myself a courgette is a zucchini. So as far as Ben and Jake know Ben's Mom doesn't know about them but it may be in the back of her mind(even if she doesn't find the courgette)So Ben offering to do his own laundry might be a red flag to his mom