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Glad you're back with another story so quick.Needless to say just by reading the story tags and the beginning of the chapter some serious stuff is going to happen here. I have never come across a female with the name of Jose or is that shorthand for another name?Is it a common name in that part of the world?

We were told the reason why Casper's Dad hit him but surely he couldn't have been so clueless on all the negative impact that would have on Casper.Whatever reason they had not to talk to Casper about having possible powers could not have had any worse effect then what Casper's dad actually did. All those powers in James house and nobody can make a decent meal?Jeez.I would be like.You can cook Casper?GO FOR IT!!!

Maybe Rita visited your town

Pete and Joey are getting to know their new Dad more and more.Excellent Chapter

What the heck can Tyler do to help out around there?I must say G is pretty manipulative either the safe house or work there.G already knows the answer. I think Zeke didn't answer that one question on Tyler's iPad because he has developed some feelings for Tyler and doesn't know how to respond yet. Just for fun you should have identified the boyband screensaver on Tyler's phone as Jasper LOL

Rick you ROCK!!!! That was awesome.I bet afterward it might have given Rick the push he needed to come clean with Jerry.And bravo to Jerry also for being a loyal and supportive friend. I really hated Zoltan after the last chapter but Rita surged back into first place as my most hated character in this story.Heinrich as it turns out just may be a moron.I don't know much about business law but I'm thinking Rita has to give back the money if there is no project perhaps some reader smarter then me(there are a lot of them here)can shed some light on that. Now I'm anxious to see the other stuff resolved .I'm thinking Debbie might have a part in that.What up with her husband's cold response to Rick?Except for the Chapter Rick and Gus got together this is your best chapter Parker

A hell of a time to bring that up on Christmas but they have to leave soon so I guess they have to do that now. I can totally believe Davey forgetting all about that until being in that house under those circumstances triggered the memory will something like that happen again later?I imagine the conversations they are going to have will be a roller coaster ride of emotions with all the different family there.

It sounds like Farmer and his boys have a good impression of Philip do they really know who he is and what he's about.Farmer seems like a dichotomy on one hand he seems to care for people like Doug who has a horrible home life on the other hand he enables bullies on the school grounds.In his own mind does he think he's righteous.

All this stuff going on I'm sure Pete is glad he chose adoption.Jim's boss probably doesn't know about him adopting Pete and Joey I bet they are going to be a hit at the office.

Although I should have already figured it out Natalie saw James because the Doctor is one of them.I went back to chapter one I figured one reason James went to see her is so the Doctor could figure out the stress of the rape could bring out any powers in James but I saw no questions from her that would imply that.So it will be interesting to see if Casper reveals anything that tells Natalie about Casper's and James powers.There is also Casper's abilities will he be able to sense Natalie is like them. In this session it looks like they used Samantha's real name while they used the name David for James I'm guessing it's because he's Peter's son.Forgive this horrible pun but if anybody says Samantha is steamed they better take it seriously

I take it you mean their parents reaction?Or are you thinking Sam and Dave(No not the old R&B duo lol)might be worried about people's reaction and they will act the same way?So far in this story it seems all the parents except for Trevor's are homophobes I'm hoping Sam and David's will balance the scale

Pete usually did all the talking for him and Joey but when Joey did say something it was huge out of the mouths of babes

Well it went smoother than I though I think the military telling the other kids dads that they can't talk about what they know helped in that regard.It's a lot to take in. Davey's Dad had the good sense to realize that David was speaking from experience of two lifetimes and how it went down between them then. Remember Dr.Grayson from the first Do over?Chances are he's just as involved in this lifeline with the disease as he was in the other one.I could see the government sending Davey's Dad to that same place as part of his duties to minister to the sick patiences.You see where I'm going with this?We might see Brian that way if he's there visiting his uncle.Just a thought my guess are usually wrong

I just knew things were too quiet with that psycho Ivy Trent can't really believe his Mom doesn't know about him and Kayden does he?I mean A mother just doesn't buy a wardrobe for one of his friends for no reason.And does Trent really think he made a great save when he told his Mom there was food on his shirt?Although he didn't really lie there you can say that was sort of food😮 There are a lot off obstacles something has to give

The woman Ethan could not save I'm guessing was his Mom and either his Dad or some loser she was seeing was the one who killed her I might have it wrong but it was definitely someone he loved and cared about. While Jonathan was certainly grateful when Ethan came to his aid back then I think there's more maybe he had a boy crush on him and the feelings are still there. Michael showed he's an asset to the shop If I remember right he had a lead part in a school play or something?Well a school play and a costume shop can have a connection this just might be up his alley. The future conversation with his Sister will also be interesting.She's only a year or two older than Michael are you going to have them two....enough you're the writer here LOL.Wow you given us enough to think about good job.

We need to find out more of what Caleb's intentions are.My guess is he's one of the good guys but we don't have enough information yet.What I got out of this confrontation is what James lacks at the moment Casper could probably fill.Along with Tasha if those three could coordinate their powers they would be pretty formidable working together.

The mere fact that Pete and Joey might be separated if they don't agree to guardianship or adoption should make this a no brainer for Pete.It was a good sign that Pete was smiling when Jim read the Tom Sawyer story to them.I get the feeling Pete doesn't smile a lot not that I blame him. Damn you. You had to mention baked omelets now I'm off to go make one now

My first reaction when Farmer said you make them think you're already dead is when the police go to raid his house he will have some kind of timed explosion go off or something like that and make it seem like he was inside. Not knowing what is going to happen when Karl and Carlos meet Philip and his friends at the pizza place and they might hear that Farmer had died will they blame Philip?

It's surprising that Jim being a financial advisor didn't know he owned all that land you would figure he reads stuff like a deed. Somebody in the County has got to see some jail time

Well this was one thing the Davey and the military didn't want to have happen.His three friend clearly heard Davey say Mr. President and his friend David will remember the "joke" phone call from the morning.Trying to come up with a lie on the spot will most likely have too many holes in it.So I think Davey will try to go with a version of the truth but where do you start?In past chapter comments I said they can't account for everything here they couldn't even account for there being two Davids in the hotel room. Veeeery interesting conversation coming up to say the least

I wonder what West motivation is .I would be inclined to think more like Kasper but that's me so it may not be good. It sounds like West is the level headed one of the group

Well they talked but it sounds like there are still issues.The story Jay told Matt about Kelley explains some things.Regardless Matt hanging with that guy for 45 minutes is another sign Matt can be clueless.

Okay chalk this up to me not being able to figure out the obvious.Who was the person that approached Caleb?I thought it could have been Tasha but it wasn't.Caleb called him pretty boy and pretty boy said "my Casper" so there is something I didn't get. Can somebody tell me? Caleb could feel the power coming from James and family at first he didn't think James was one of them.One thing that hasn't been mentioned one way or another is does Sarah have power or is she just a mortal who married into this.

I'm worried that this meeting at the pizza place place will set off a chain of events.There could be a innocent remark made that tells Karl and Carlos they know about Farmer.And the guys Farmer uses a seem to be fiercely loyal to him. The irony is the kids Farmer has would be the kind of kids Philip has had he met them when they were younger.

Pete likes and trust Jim but doesn't want to be adopted.Does he have reason to believe his folks are still alive? Interesting that you made Jim asexual I only seen one other story on GA that talks about that although I'm sure there are more.That's a topic that should be talked about more