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Chapter 67 - "Burden Of Truth"
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 67 - "Burden Of Truth"
Randy was worried his Mom was going to start acting different.But wait she's not acting different OMG something must must be really wrong now.Yeesh only in a teenager's mind I remember it well. -
That's as extreme as you can get .Some very serious corruption seems to be going on.Those conditions were only marginally less worse than the scumbags that got arrested had those kids in. Thankfully Brad and Tony came along when they did.
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Good Chapter.I think Trent might actually love Kayden on some level but he's definitely going to stray you don't just stop that.Maybe the threat of losing Kayden might change him but I think that's down the road.If Kayden can't talk to Audrey I think he should try Lucas he seems to be a good guy. Loved Emma's comment to Mark "Don't be Lame" I'm curious I had a few Korean friends in my life I never came across "Aya" Is that a Korean thing?
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Chapter 2 - Trout Fishing in Europe
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Trout Fishing in Europe
Kevin's Dad sounds pretty cool.I hope Kevin lets the alcohol wear off before speaking to Torry.Based On what I read so far I would be convinced Kevin isn't gay but this is a gay male fiction story so it will be interesting how this develops. -
I bet I know what the problem is with the other state's version of Sanctuary. Brad's motivation is to help the kids while the other place took government bids and they might be in it to make a buck. What is needed is other Brad's not so easy to find.I hope Brad and Tony can make the right recommendations
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The "How about a kiss" comment was a little bit of a surprise.What I was expecting was Tyler asking Zeke to sleep in his bed just to sleep of course.It could still happen and maybe one thing could lead to another.I do believe Zeke cares for Tyler and perhaps its more.As far as the help Tyler needs I wonder if Zeke could provide that I think the doctor has to visit again
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What a trip I read this story a few days after you did after all these years this first appeared.I'll tell you one thing Comsie's stories never disappoint
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Another excellent chapter.Is Father Christmas a Brit thing?Is he dressed like Santa Clause?Funny I thought I would have heard about this before now.
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Or all the readers collectively got a case of Deja Vu. Excellent chapter
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A couple of really awesome things.The kids making homemade wedding gifts and Adam coming back to cook.I wonder what kind of animals were at the Halloween party.
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Glad to see another story from you.While Kevin may have some homophobic type insecurities It sounds like he has a legitimate interest in girls.Too bad you described him as hottie lol.At least Torry was honest enough to tell Kevin how he feels about him at the same time Kevin couldn't say that to Sarah I'm sure things are going to happen to change Kevin's attitude and it will be interesting to see how it happens.For time being I'm afraid the next time Torry and Kevin cross paths it won't go well because Kevin is all upset about Sarah.
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Brad doesn't mess around a trip to Italy for a honeymoon gift whoa.About the halloween party I wonder how many of the kids given where they came from understand the concept of halloween.For example one of the more popular costumes every year is a Spiderman or Batman costumes.A lot of those kids may not ever know who they are because being on the streets they never could experience that.That goes for Thanksgiving and Christmas also for that matter.Sanctuary has been going for a couple of years now so some of them know now I guess
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So is the Captain going to move into Sanctuary?What would he do when thier not using the boat?And would Steve and Tom live on the boat?
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It amazing how you can design the liner to have so much cool stuff in it.Everybody's pumped.I hope we hear more about Bubba and Pat talking to Nick. I realize I'm asking an obvious question here but this landlubber don't know about these things.I assume they check to see if some storm might be on their route how far in advance can a weather report warn about that?
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The chapter ended on a minor cliffhanger although I'm sure Nick will stay.I thought I asked this in an earlier chapter maybe I didn't but the official rule is the kids can't leave the building?I get it if that's the rule it's probably for the best.Maybe there can can be some kind of system after school and chores are done they can go out for a short time.But there might be something I'm not thinking about.For one thing the evil men may have grabbed a kid.
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When I heard the Governor was coming with people I was thinking it would be great if he brought this president along.You might have seen him with this 13 year old boy who has a stuttering problem he would be perfect to see this. You make a good point that Sanctuary only works because it headed by somebody like Brad.There could be another person every bit as dedicated as Brad but if he or she is not competent it won't work despite good intentions.It would be very hard to duplicate.
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You know that's pretty much how I pictured Maggie.This was an excellent chapter especially considering you totally changed direction from what you originally planned. My only worry for Maggie now is the old sour coot will be angry at the settlement and maybe show up in Barnstable to do harm to Maggie similar to what that Dad did at the pool in one of your other stories.Lets hope not.
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I really liked Sarah this chapter until we found out she made a date with Vince.I don't think she'll say anything to compromise Trent though. Trent has a class called Intro to Conflict?I figured he would be a natural at that.I'm thinking Ethan will accuse Trent of cheating. I too also thought Emma was awesome.It was an enjoyable scene Trent meeting Emma and Cho but I think based on Cho's long look at Trent before they left that Cho might have put 2 and 2 together concerning Trent and Kayden. The best way to describe Kayden would be he's an innocent sweetheart and a perv at the same time
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That's a tremendous gesture Brad wanting to take low-income family kids on cruises.The only possible downside I see is Brad spreading himself out too thin but he has great advisers so I'm sure there will be a good plan going forward.
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Sounds like it's going to be an awesome ship.When Brad said to Tony that it smelled like something died there that broke my heart.
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Nice to have a Heinrich and Rita free chapter.I found the "Takacs tyrants" comment by Gus interesting.Gus has been doing this since he was 11?It sounds like Zoltan and Magda has been exploiting Gus.The back story of Gus makes me wonder if Gus feels a sense of obligation to them.He also doesn't seem have much affection for Helene not even as a friend the fact that Gus cut this line of conversation off with Rick off tells me Gus may be unhappy. Okay after Rick a having a nice time now it's off to the dark cloud named Heinrich. Heinrich last chapter said Rick will regret canceling out on him but I bet no matter what Heinrich does Rick will not regret going on this trip.
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Hmm I wonder what letters @@ represent oh I think I know Ashhole I thought it might have been something dirty LOL
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I'm so glad they got the bad guys but I wouldn't be so sure it's over like Brad said I could see somebody trying to do to Sanctuary what they did to the church.Maybe O'shea knows some good security people. Will Bubba and Corky go on the long trip?
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Would anything change legally if he adopted all the kids?Just curious. I don't know if that would be approved.But it would be an awesome gesture
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If that article was a paid ad I was under the impression it was supposed to state that somewhere since they mistook for a real article that could be something else the newspaper could be liable for.Chartering the boat when they are not using it sounds like a great idea unless there is something I'm not thinking of.
