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I think this is now the longest story I read on this site.In your estimation how far is the story along 50%? 75%? not that it matters I'm liking every bit of it.I hope this isn't it for Cody.BTW he didn't even flinch when James threw out that his Grandparent have been doing this for a couple hundred years

Ah jeez in the government again I was hoping it would be avoided this time.I had a feeling Sean would travel back again is this Sean aware of the one timeline that ended the worst or did the other Davey tell Brian enough about it?That's the main thing is to try avoid Armageddon. I'm curious how they found out not just about Davey and Brian but all 6 of them.

In the spirit of the theme of this chapter...2 chapters in one day??How do we know it's really you writing this chapter? Wait you did say a person with a crazy mind. OK it's probably you.

And ruin his day?

When you say staff I'm guessing former Board members and not teachers.When there is little over site from the Trustees they noticed and took a lot of liberties but under any circumstances that was extreme greed and very arrogant. They have to plan to do something very special for the kids with the expensive cuts of meat.I would say they would not continue to buy that meat. but if they did at least it would be for the kids

Making a report about the board of Trustees meeting is a no brainer.It's good to have a record of what you propose and what was said.I suppose Arlene and co. didn't do that because they had things to hide.A scholarship is a great idea.

Bet Jack is having flashbacks from when it happened to him. BTW We still hate you.

I would love for Daddy dearest to find a passage anywhere in the Bible where Jesus supports the position he has taken.Mr Rightous thinks bullying is OK? Part of Ricky's avoidance of Matt I think stems from the how Matt's parents are .I suspect he believes Matt's feelings mirror those of his parents and that he has crossed an unpardonable line. I sure hope I'm wrong but I see Matt ending up being with Charles under the Pastor's "guidance" to pray the gay away

Well no disaster in this timeline as far as being outed.And Davey's family came around especially Pete and Bev.It looks like Sandy only came around because she needed her business partners oh well it can't all be perfect "'I'm a bit surprised at Trevor and Todd.That stuff about Trevor having to pretend to be straight to play in the NFL isn't accurate as long as he's discreet and is good enough he could play in the NFL.There were a number of gay players that wasn't public about it and had no problems.There were a handful that said something after they retired but only one player came out while still active. There were no mention of Trevor being able t help Davey and Brian with the Russian language.We are closer to the end now then to the beginning of this do over I'm going to miss reading about these guys although I guess it had to end sometime

Somebody has to have a theory on how the spirit got here so in turn they should have a theory on how to get it back home if possible James said "Australians are weird" You wrote that line so I guess it does take one to know one.

If I read any back chapters will the name of the person who's coming back in Tristan's life appear? Because I'm drawing a blank. You said we would hate you by the end of the chapter. Hell we already hated you LOL

I like Marie a lot but I were Adam I would get room with a steel door with three deadbolts so when I wanted a place to meditate I won't get a bucket of water thrown on me.

I guess since they will probably have a roommate you could call it a Timeshare

Wow very good I doubt any readers here saw that coming.I can't make a good case for this but I have a nagging feeling G is the killer.

In spirit it is a little brother or sister but what would be the legal term be in this case? Cousin?

Excellent job building suspense part of me wanted to go AAAH!!!! and part of me loved it .I never knew of any teacher who let go what Zack did.The look on Zack's face must have really indicated to her that something was up.

I can't help thinking about comparing this to the Anna Nicole case there are a lot of differences but the basic thought is the same the family thinks the spouse is evil.I would love to see the faces of Kelly's parents when the star witness at the trial is Matt. As far as Aidan running off as soon as somebody gives him a $20 dollar bill I know a lot of people who do that and they're adults.

You will really impressed with this author's first effort of this length if you didn't know it you would think this was an experienced GA author with a number of stories under her belt. Our main character Ethan has had a couple of very harrowing incidents involving abuse when he was a teenager in the aftermath he has spent half his life worried that one day the law might catch up to him.He find a out of the way place and goes under an assumed name when one day a person who was 12 years old when he last saw him 10 years ago comes looking for him and finds him what follows is a bunch of twist and turns that will keep you riveted with characters that you come to care for.I gave this five stars not because it was a GA first time effort it is 5 stars on merit

Have to admit didn't see that coming E was on the run for no reason all this time.But then if he isn't on the run we wouldn't have met all these great characters.I'm glad thing worked out well for the Jameson family for the most part especially Leah and I love that Sophie is in town and course E and Jonathan riding off into the sunset or the cabin if you will.Good touch with Beebee being in the play.Rayna didn't know what part Micheal was going to play does that mean he took Beebee from the store without her realizing it lol. You would never know this was your first story by reading it congrats.I know how much time a work goes int writing something good I had enough trouble in my creative writing class in HS lol.If you don't mind just a thought from an eager fan.I can see a good follow up story centered around Micheal with all the others making appearances for drama you could use the situation with his dad and since you never really identified Micheal. in any certain way you can have him be Bi and all the drama that comes with that.Just babbling whatever you come up with I'm sure will be great.Thank you again

It went on for two months?I could have seen after a couple of weeks Davey could have realized how wrong this was on so many levels but two months wow that is stubborn.I don't know where the story goes from here but I hope we don't see a repeat of local moron pastor and the TV station going to the school.And then I'm sure Mr. Rule will put his two cents in.In all the timelines some characters died too soon mostly from Davey's family but an a-hole like Mr. Rule is alive in every one of them just venting after all these are fictional characters LOL.I hope Brian remembers any stories about the Pastor the other Davey may have told him and I hope Mr. B hears this and thinks of a plan.

The way we are not sure that somebody in your stories are really dead or not are you sure you know which one you talked to?

Wow from a story that was possibly going on hold to 3 chapters in 3 days.Hunter might end up being the baddest ass yet.

So while all this is going down where the heck is Finch?

The guys from Wildwood tell West and the others to watch their backs doesn't seem like a good strategy and threatening to take the captaincy away from West makes no sense with them being new.It sounds they are being directed what to do by an older outside source

So none of the staff knew that were being charged for their rooms?That means it wasn't itemized on the paycheck. That certainly violates something another thing Arlene and the board had to hide.And another thing the trustees missed because they never asked for an accounting.