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"And now you want to go and house sit for Ricky's cousin? Where's the adventure in that?" As soon as Kippy said that I knew something is going to happen there.Otherwise this would just a be a boring chapter in a boring story and you don't do those.It's sort of like when I watch a TV series and the main character is in a life and death situation,I know he or she isn't going to die there would be no show next week.As far as this story being Co-vid free all these aliens in Charlie Boone's universe have it all figured out already
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The light attendance at the service told me that maybe the dad's bigotry made itself apparent to his associates.He doesn't seem smart enough to realize that his approach may mean Emily and Gene won't be in his life plus possible future grand kids how pathetic.It was cool that Mr.Cummings could tell Adrian a little about his grandfather.
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5 years ago for me.I think of her everyday and I know you do of yours also.
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At lot of people could not do what Adrian did with his Mom.I think @chris191070 is right that Adrian and his father won't reconcile.But one hope is his dad will realize how much more character his son has then he.
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Had it been me I would have taken the dog home but that's me.Remember last chapter when their Dad told Emily it wasn't her business?Well it wasn't his business either because the grand father funded Adrian's trust fund not him what a hypocrite.I wonder if Gene threaten him with going to the police.I hope we meet the grandfather.Lets all of us go get some of that chicken
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That detail about Adrian having to go to his room when company was visiting is unbelievable.They didn't know he was gay at the time so there were other nonsense issues.Three cheers for the siblings.Sounds like they weren't aware of the dynamics between the parents and Adrian the parents must have really been tight lipped.It's sort of a small cliffhanger here will "Dad" do what Emily asks.Don't worry Emily and Gene Paul's grandparents will be family to you.Adrian's and Paul Parents can have each other.
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Oh I think I have a good idea.But you might have been referring to something else.
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When I was their age I was aware of the concept of course but I had no idea this kind of material existed in a library as it turned out at that time my partner's and I were clueless.
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Paul's Grandparents are awesome. Does Adrian's siblings feel the same way about him that the parents do?
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For me a loan is the last resort and it looks like that's the case here.You mentioned Paul's Grandparents not agreeing with his parents I bet when Adrian was telling them the story they noticed a lot of parrelel's.As far as Adrian being an accident well he didn't cause the accident did he .
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Cleaver misdirection there it was a jealous lover not the killer.Now one has to wonder what does Zeke do that he can't tell anybody about.My first though is Zeke is some kind of serious badass.If I'm Tyler I would stay with Zeke. Given the life and death nature of the situation I think Zeke should come clean a little bit to Tyler about who he is.
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There has been no direct reason why Adrian's parents treat him different then his siblings he hasn't told them he's gay.On one hand maybe the parents are on hard times and they haven't told the kids barring that I can't understand.I've always admired hard working smart students that should be something to be proud of.Maybe there's another person at the college who knows Adrian and they told his folks about Adrian and Paul.Unlike Paul I guess Adrian's grandparents are not in the picture.It sounds like Paul has a solution.
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One thing Kevin said in his narrative before he met Rory he felt like he was being left behind by Kyle and Jason I think that's what Jason is feeling right now and it happened all so suddenly.It doesn't excuse Jason's behavior but maybe Kevin can realize that and maybe even help him who knows. Sounds like Kyle's afraid if the four double date that Rory and Gabriel will hook up.Wow the thoughts that go trough a teenager's head.
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It's always easier to study with a good buddy that's probably the reason why they passed the course.Speaking for myself a big booklet for the final and no true/false or multiple guess questions I would have been hating life
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Chapter 21 - A Mistake's Weight
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 21 - A Mistake's Weight
What to do about Spencer?What if it was your best bud or your Mom?No matter what Jake decides he'll wonder if he did the wrong thing. -
This religion Paul grew up with was that based on somebody you know or some religion you researched .The Amish are partiers compared to these guys.First impressions tell me it was good these two found each other.
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The question I have for his father is how would he know if his son is a talented enough athlete to ever be able to get a scholarship it sounds like being a good student isn"t appreciated.
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Rick needs supervision?Yeesh.I guess despite Rick being an adult and running the business well isn't good enough for Heinrich Sr.And it's interesting he knows all the small town gossip as if he was still living there.It sounds like Rick can't do anything without the whole town and his Dad knowing about it.When Sr. arrives into town it's hard not to see some kind of fireworks happening eventually
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You were in the Boston area? I lived in Revere as a little kid.
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I'm thinking there's going to be one more chapter it would still be a short story .If not tell us what's in the box
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In this story Kevin seems a little dicky.You missed a opportunity for a line if Kevin threatens Tristan with something Tristan can say "Oh yeah you don't have the balls" 😄
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I love how Geno played it forward.Geno and Thomas meeting was great for both their lives
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 10
weinerdog commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 10
Life is great for Jamie.I'm surprised he managed to not tell Silas everything.Jamie better work on possible things to say,I mean "sale on batteries"? Really? -
A lot of times when a long time married couple become separated by death the surviving spouse goes soon after. The fact that she wants to stay home a little longer is not a good sign.But the family is doing their best.
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It's cool Thomas is a grandfather now.I sure hope Thomas and Geno not finding the Captain doesn't mean what I think it might mean.It is part of life but I hope l'm wrong.
