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Oh Leo...deserved better even though he was an asshole...I am wishing for Ian Sandoval to get Ramsey Bolton sort of ending. You know a slow painful death ..He does not get to live after the carnage he has wrought. Like he needs to be wiped off the face of the earth .haha. Thank you !

I also have a feeling Adam is going to be a high energy sibling😂...You know the kind that you can only handle in small doses and yet cannot do without

Oh dear....must you do that ?😂...Now am going to be more antsy than I am waiting for you introduce him😂...I better stock up on my anxiety meds😂

Exactly!..that's why it's just so compelling!. I hope when the love Interest comes he is Like Nathan Harris😉😂.. angsty yet adorable..

Personally am invested....doesn't matter whether it's random or constant😉..I always look forward to the 'Jeff Burton has added a chapter' notifications in my email... I know have said this before and it's almost becoming a chorus....but this story is just something else...Usually stories here are about the human condition(relationships, flawed,broken characters and family dynamics)..Your story is a combination of spices so to speak..Its world building so far is phenomenal and am inclined to believe it is going to become better and more complex!. A compelling and adorable young protagonist in Josh. Don't even get me started on the supporting characters(Rodney,Natalie, the Kincaids)😉.The cloak and dagger aspect..the sci-fi elements. All mashing together to form one marvelous literary soup. What I like most however is the structure of the story ..Giving us different POVs(Josh and the other characters). It grounds us.Makes us feel as though we are privy to what is happening in this world.Like we are on the periphery and yet still part of the action. Thank you!

Hello no......then we would lose such creations

And pray tell how on earth did you come in possession of this information?😂😂

God...can we blow Ian Sandoval to smithereens already😂...He is starting to grate on my already taut nerves....How on earth do you come up with such unhinged villains @vanalas....There was Brandon from Echoes of the Past...and now this Ian.. Thanks for the update!

No way!..that's something else. Liar is a long multi chapter story..whoa

I have already started a mental petition😂😂😂...for CasJak😂

You are not alone...but some of us are cautiously optimistic..😂....It's a CasualWanderer82 tale after all.

This chapter,especially the hospital encounter,had Bourne Identity vibes all over it and I for one immensely loved it 😉...Do I have permission to think our young hero is a mix of Jason Bourne and Alex Rider?😂😂.. Seriously this story is proving to be something else....I have to re-read each chapter just so to get it better.Thank you!

It has been long since we got an update was starting to get antsy😂... Just a quick question...how do you do it?...I mean writing three stories at the same time?..You are kinda a superhero😂😂. Jamie is being a git in these last two chapters eh .. Thanks for the update!

I can relate...😂

I can imagine..Personally I would keep it hidden away😂.Like the rest of my Historical Romance Novels and my Lord of the Rings hard copy .Treasures to cherish😂😂

Good thing you can only find Koalas in Australia then..haha

I was mostly referring to Danae's mindset ...I come from Uganda,East Africa . My country is riddled with corruption and nepotism but even then we do not have it as bad. When was still in school(Primary to Secondary/High), school uniform was and is still mandatory countrywide so there was/is a semblance of equality. You only got to know one was from a wealthy family(the cars) during visitation days for those of us who were in boarding schools. Then at University it was only academic merit that got you into the Public Universities ,with the academically astute ones having full government sponsorship. I think have got off point😂. what was expressing in my earlier comment was that it must be soul sapping to be dismissed just on the basis of race and wealth . The most ironic is most of those folks from the supposedly 'high class' are mostly docile and inept people.

Just as was warming up to Danae....she goes and pulls that snobbish attitude 😂..I know she was raised that way but you would think that after what she has been through so far with the group she would be a little open minded. Reading stories like yours makes me wonder how people who were not of aristocratic stock endured such treatment in places(Europe and the like) where there was aristocracy. It has to suck pretty bad to be dismissed on the basis of your lineage. Thank you for the offering as usual...can't wait long enough till next Thursday.haha

And very slow 😂

This was a long chapter ..and it was worth it..My most favourite was the Last trial ..the introspection Keiran had. it's nice having a character admit they can be pricks some time .. Thank you for the update!...Now I really need Zereth's ass to be kicked to kingdom come😂

What a tongue twister! 😂

It's my type of dish actually...that's why am loving it....it has all the right ingredients for me

Me too....Once saw that was like am I dropping into a Jason Bourne hole .hihi

Reading this chapter was nostalgic for me...It transported me back to University when was going through Robert Ludlum novels like crazy ..This is just so meta😉... In this chapter you have subtly given us more about Josh's background...added a cloak and dagger aspect . Now the title makes all the more sense . I am going to be antsy till the next chapter drops😆.. Thank you for the update!! Blessed Day to you!

Just know...I had made a promise to myself(which have broken already😆)that would emotionally invest myself anymore in our Maestro's characters but here I am already.I am just hoping that Daisy and Jackson are okay. That Jackson and Blake don't do the nasty. But we all know passion is always a beast that gets what it wants in CasualWanderer82 's universe😆😆..I sometimes feel like he likes living dangerously in real life because how on earth does he always come up with such stories.Where characters lose their heads to passion.Moreover characters who are smart to begin with.😉...Anyway will just keep living dangerously through these stories...oh will always look forward to your chapter analyses😉😉😆