lawfulneutralmage
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What about looking at modern livestock's situation? The difference between bio-farming and factory farming where the animal never see the sunlight is enormous. Try getting some material about cows are treated and replace "cow" with "chattel" and use that as descriptive text. There maybe "chattel" rights people. The chattel doesn't know it should be treated differently. I would not like to life forever. Imagine working forever ... ugh...
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I get that, but does it need to be a love story between chattel and owner? Could it not be a father/son one and a love relationship where the MC needs to convince a fellow of the righteousness of his actions? I ca not relate to characters that young.
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Why should the MC be so young? Add ten years and let him have experience in "the business".
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Same here. For me it was a Robert A Heinlein book, the Martian or something like that. A Human child who was raised by Martians returns to Earth as young adult. Because they have no water, their most holy ritual is the "sharing of the water". In the book, a character explained that the Martian would probably try homosexual acts, but never share the ritual with those people as they were not worthy or something like that. Anyway, at that point, the book ended up in pieces.
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Most likely it is. He gave it up for medical reasons... And there go their dreams down the drain. The medical bills will be ... prohibitively expensive.
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I love this!
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Many thanks! I really like your world building, I can feel with Callum. Looking forward to read more, next chapter maybe tonight.
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Same. This is a good start. I must remember this: My reading list just becomes longer and longer.
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potassium - Word of the Day - Fri Nov 29, 2024
lawfulneutralmage commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Will we really go through the whole periodic table? -
Exactly my thoughts! A bit gotten carried away.
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Weekly Wrap Up (Nov. 17 - Nov. 23)
lawfulneutralmage commented on wildone's blog entry in Gay Authors News
First snow in Oslo today. Then rain washed it all away... -
Yes!
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Yes, my thoughts too. She laughed... Anyway, I can not see a happy end with Drew's family in the mix. Maybe, I will be surprised, but my advice to Mickey would be: run, mate, run, as fast as you can.
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GA's Newest Signature Author: kbois
lawfulneutralmage commented on Graeme's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Congratulations, this is well deserved, oh my Queen ... !- 36 comments
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November Signature Excerpt: Save Tonight by CassieQ
lawfulneutralmage commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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Very good, thx. El of the desert and his wife Ashera...
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October Signature Feature: ID by CarlHoliday
lawfulneutralmage commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Yes, that is a really good one. -
Sorry for the screwed formatting. Writing from a phone.
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That is exactly why do not seem to get this story.It seems to promote the "wait with sex" narrative and "virginity " whichsurprised me.
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Painful! However, you can be very proud if yourself.
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Trying something different
lawfulneutralmage commented on methodwriter85's blog entry in Methodwriter85's Blog
Good that you can follow your dream! -
Wonderfully written. An engaging story. Tom was luckily very mature. I just wonder why sex is so much of an issue.
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Weekly Wrap Up (Sept. 29 - Oct. 5)
lawfulneutralmage commented on wildone's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Oslo has no snow in October. Nice around 10C / 50F. Last week was very sunny. This will will be a lot of rain. While there are no hurricanes nor snow storms here, it is getting darker earlier. -
Do Readers Prefer Happy or Sad Ending
lawfulneutralmage replied to Jason Rimbaud's topic in The Lounge
Yes, I wondered about that. @Jason RimbaudIs the story your are telling not leading to its natural conclusion? Can you elaborate on the dilemma you are facing? -
Yes, and that is good.
