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  1. lawfulneutralmage
    Every change resubmits to the queue. Also, there is no response time guaranteed, all administration are volunteers and will getto it when they can. Have some patience.
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    Many thanks for your work, guys!
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    All the best! May ask how you know it was Covid?
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    Chapter 1

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Yes, and it makes my blood boil.
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    Chapter 1

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Small town mentality can explain they don't like diversity. However, nothing can explain to me, except for self defense, laying hands on other people. Violent people are dangerous psychopaths. Lucas needs therapy and/or medication.
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    Chapter 1

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I did not know how to react to that post. It is a homage to our master of teenage angst, @Ronyx, at the same time, it is so awful Neil is being forced down that route.
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    A good ending and very well described action. Great story, thx!
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    Excellent chapter, thank you. Very good descriptions and interactions. Feels like being there. I am surprised none of the others share, if not the hate, at least the sentiment.
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    Chapter 23

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Chapter 23

    4 hours ago, peter rietbergen said: Do adult, gay American men really call each other "babe"? On this side of the ocean, it isn't a term of endearment, but felt to be both sexist and belittling...Cultural differences, I suppose... I really dislike it too.
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    Good story! It made me angry. Therefore, I will end it here. I am angry/sad enough now.
  11. lawfulneutralmage
    This is the fascinating and captivating tale of sixteen-year old Mateo who has to spend the summer on the farm of his mother's cousin, mother of Jericho. Both boys are in for a hot summer. Never before have the American South and life on a farm be so tangible for me. All characters have a distinct and memorable personality. It is not only the romance between the two boys, but also the whole world around that will want you to read more. I binge read it as far as my time allowed. Just as a side note, the Epilogue and the first chapters seem to have nothing to do with each other, but the relationship will become clear later.
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    That was my first thought, too! Strategically, this move is a temporary relief only.
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    Chapter 20

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Connectwriter's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Yes, my thoughts, too. He should have gone for that. I wonder a bit what Mickey expects complaining about the law firms. When he started studying corporate law, he should have known what to expect afterwards.
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    Chapter 1

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Rusty Slocum's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Honestly, this is really captivating. I feel like in the time and place. I am a nearly-fifty European, I hav no connection to either place nor time. So, I am really fascinated.
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    Chapter 1

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Rusty Slocum's story chapter in Chapter 1

    This is really well written and captivating. Please keep writing!
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    I am looking forward to your reaction on the next chapter...
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    I see you are enjoying
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    Welcome back ... Michelle! Yes, you can start training at 18. Nowadays, they try saving on training by taking those who have "studied policing". Colleagues Yes! Works wonders! Leon Kennedy *sigh* ... I hope so.
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    “You’re really clueless, you know that?” Eleanore, my heroine! I have wanted to say that to Callum for a while now!
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    My thoughts, too.
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    Poor naive boy! That was so expected... I am looking forward to how he is rescued from this situation.
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    I love copper. I still have analytical grains of 99.999% purity sealed in a nitrogen atmosphere. Love looking at that color!
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    Many thanks! An honour to be featured here Equally important to the story as it is are @Mikiesboy who taught me how to write and @CassieQ who "hit me with the feelings stick" ... hard. The community engaged with the story so much, it was a fantastic experience!
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    Story

    lawfulneutralmage commented on wildone's story chapter in Story

    Why forget? This is a master stroke of a one-shot. (Pun intended).
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