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lawfulneutralmage

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  1. lawfulneutralmage

    Chapter 1

    Honestly, this is really captivating. I feel like in the time and place. I am a nearly-fifty European, I hav no connection to either place nor time. So, I am really fascinated.
  2. lawfulneutralmage

    Chapter 1

    This is really well written and captivating. Please keep writing!
  3. I am looking forward to your reaction on the next chapter...
  4. I see you are enjoying
  5. Welcome back ... Michelle! Yes, you can start training at 18. Nowadays, they try saving on training by taking those who have "studied policing". Colleagues Yes! Works wonders! Leon Kennedy *sigh* ... I hope so.
  6. “You’re really clueless, you know that?” Eleanore, my heroine! I have wanted to say that to Callum for a while now!
  7. My thoughts, too.
  8. Poor naive boy! That was so expected... I am looking forward to how he is rescued from this situation.
  9. I love copper. I still have analytical grains of 99.999% purity sealed in a nitrogen atmosphere. Love looking at that color!
  10. Many thanks! An honour to be featured here Equally important to the story as it is are @Mikiesboy who taught me how to write and @CassieQ who "hit me with the feelings stick" ... hard. The community engaged with the story so much, it was a fantastic experience!
  11. lawfulneutralmage

    Story

    Why forget? This is a master stroke of a one-shot. (Pun intended).
  12. It is ... unspeakable! Love it!
  13. lawfulneutralmage

    Story

    First class, @wildone! What a twist!
  14. True. So far, I have not followed newly posted stories, only read completed ones. I found this one by activity notifications and it is a very good find!
  15. The most relaxing Xmas I have ever had was in Israel during my PhD time. They do not celebrate it, so there was no Xmas song terror. Wonderful!
  16. lawfulneutralmage

    Chapter 17

    A bit commanding our Drew, like a lioness defending her cub... A question to fellow writers, how to indicate thoughts? Here they are like direct speech which confuses me at times.
  17. lawfulneutralmage

    Chapter 1

    Guilty as charged, @ReaderPaul.
  18. Callum needs more information. He should travel with Rym to the refugees and hear what they have to say and also to find allies.
  19. Really good, thank you. I, too, wonder about Callum's past whether to reveal or be revealed and the reaction to it. As I ma lat to the party, I will now be quiet and read on.
  20. Back after reading, I would like to again express my admiration for people writing on prompt! What fantastic ideas came out of these!
  21. Would your really go with your colleagues into a jacuzzi? A bit too close for my comfort... Thx, @Aditus that was a fun read!
  22. lawfulneutralmage

    Chapter 1

    That was a difficult prompt and very well done, congrats! The story reminds me of a joke (the short version): A management consultant dies and the lord judges his should be condemned to hell. A week later, the devil calls heaven: "What have you sent me here? He closed down three ovens and fired 50000 devils!"
  23. lawfulneutralmage

    Chapter 16

    Yeah, I had similar thoughts. But that is a really good idea, @Connectwriter! I am jealous, not only of the idea...
  24. I read it in a dedication in a book. Never heard it before. Yes, I like it, too. Yes, she did. Problem is she would still think she was right. Measure them by their deeds, not their words! Yes, too much death caused by believers. Sounds familiar, right? I am a strong supporter of conversion therapy: you can change religion any time, has been proven to work fine all over the millennia! Btw, I apologize to all Canadians if it comes across as a criminal's heaven!
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