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    Chapter 4

    lawfulneutralmage commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 4

    There is one problem learning another language from English: it has no serious grammar. I started learning Norwegian with my husband from English, and I wondered about certain grammatical constructs. But then I realized that in German we have the same constructs. Suddenly, all fell into place. Did not see that from English.
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    Updated tags. From: middle-aged (cannot remember having selected that - if 25 is middle aged, what am I, a mummy?) contemporary europe gay ghosts police To: young adult contemporary europe gay ghosts mystery to solve police suspense
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    The Fit

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in The Fit

    I got a fit ... of laughter. You got me fair and square. Well done!
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    Chapter 1

    lawfulneutralmage commented on drsawzall's story chapter in Chapter 1

    No. In order to do so, our leaders would need to be able to admit mistakes. Fat chance!
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    Chapter 1

    lawfulneutralmage commented on drsawzall's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Actually, there is not much to say to that. It speaks for itself.
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    Chapter 1

    lawfulneutralmage commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Good work! They had some unresolved issues. I have been invited to our 30 years school leaving do... no, thanks. I had to endure people long enough, I have no need to see any of them again... Can you guys explain more about how the cowriting was done in practice? Thx!
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    Garlic! Garlic! Garlic! Working from home has its advantages... That is rather powerful. I hope I get you right. Sometimes, one must clear out! Arg! I have commented on poetry! @Mikiesboy, what are you doing to me?!?
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    The Path Home

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in The Path Home

    Wow, you make even me read poetry!
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    That is a deep question ... which can trigger a lot ... and may not be necessary to ask. If you can find what made you ask that question, maybe you can break it down into a smaller question which is easier to answer, if you get my gist. All the best!
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    Congrats!
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    I am tired ... "promo materials"...
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    Thanks. That was a morale boost. I write for fun, and when I do not feel like it, I don't. No reason comparing. I get enough stress at work, and there I get paid. Do what you do best!
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    Chapter 2

    lawfulneutralmage commented on CassieQ's story chapter in Chapter 2

    No, not Chicago. If I were Malik, I would worry a lot now. Very simple chemistry: molten fat plus ash from a fire gives soap. Add some lime and you have a business!
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    I am surprised what AI can do nowadays, and it gets better every every year. It is a tool. It can help a lot, especially breaking ties or helping describing scenes.
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    I am sorry, that was not my intent. I take your word for it. It is curiosity. I use AI daily in my job. However, for writing, I cannot get it right. I was after some advice. Please do not get offended. That is the internet. There will always comments one does not like. I cannot modify it anymore, because people have quoted.
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    Thank you, that is a very good story, @Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro! Can you explain your working with the AI a bit more in detail? Which model/service did you use? How did you get it to deal with the sex scenes? For me, the US offerings get ... difficult in that situation.
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    "Pure Love"

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Pure Love"

    Why would she do what she feared most, damage her investment's image?
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    Excellently written. Thank you.
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    Not healthy... Well written, thx.
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    "Nobody"

    lawfulneutralmage commented on Nuno R.F.C.R's story chapter in "Nobody"

    Beautifully written. Totally expected and brutally honest. Stars are investments. Many people have a vested interest in keeping them profitable. Image is everything. Dalliances distract. Poor Liam, but Hudson needs to keep away, or both get hurt.
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    Thanks!
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    Sure the daemon told the truth? But I cannot see any advantage it ciuld gain by lying at the moment.
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    Yes, that was a good one.
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    Fantastic writing, great characters, humor! This is excellent!
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    Me, too! Excellent overview, thank you!
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