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Is is awesome that Matt is now at Andrew’s home, even if he doesn’t know how safe he is. I was wondering about the amount paid at the auction, it didn’t seem like a lot to me, and this delivery by boat took 3 guys and a lot of fuel from where he was held. They have to be making a profit. Glad he had Davis there to keep him calm and teach basic meditation.
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Fun chapter. Gran wants to see them married and living together…
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Touring Ends, Recording Begins
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Touring Ends, Recording Begins
Good ending, and the epilogue let us know what happened in their future. Glad for a HEA fir Kevin and Eric. -
Kai’s chapter is half Megan and Callum, and hilarious. Doc is straight forward about sex between men, even has a gay brother. Kai is a top, but is Adam a total bottom? Could be interesting when they get there. Both being very respectful, wanting this to be a lasting relationship.
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Both men had issues with their fathers, albeit for different reasons, and backgrounds. The fact they are facing and trying to reconcile this for themselves is good for a better future together, I think. With the artwork project completed, what will they work on next?
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Brilliant presented, masterfully written. Looking forward to further adventures.
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Nice flashback to a good time, even if he didn’t want a. Birthday party, he did get a nice present from Ed.
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Ricky seems more bisexual than gay, if he was sleeping with female cast members, and male cast members. Still something of a coming out regardless. He does seem to want to have some stability, and not be traveling like he did before. Larry seems more interested in music production, and money than what Ricky wants.
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Jem stepping in front of Bzup to protect him from an aggressive Azim is proofing his words with action. Hopefully non of the other humans shoot Azim… this chapter has a lot of soul searching and understanding of the two versions of Bzup people.
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Seems like a good place to end this. Business is going well, and there’s a good team of friends working together.
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Dating Apps Were Never Meant for This
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Dating Apps Were Never Meant for This
Love the rabbit boy… first we had a cat boy chasing Rusty…. Have to wonder what this guy, who seems to now be in charge of Xpress is having to prove and for whom?- 18 comments
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Kai loves this man, was afraid of possibly being rejected, but found just the opposite. Seems like soulmates who just had to find each other. The boat seems like an aesthetic to replace the sunken one. Love how they are comfortable around each other and taking time to get to know each other even more.
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Andy did the right thing, even if illegal. He had the means, and will help Matt, as much as he can. There will be a lot of emotional trauma to deal with in addition to his physical condition. Last we heard he was not eating well as a strategy to be less attractive to his owner. Maybe that worked, which is why he was on the marketplace. Here’s to hoping that things get better for both of them. Hopefully Ahmet is still alive. If he got found out, that would be very dangerous.
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This discussion on reproduction is interesting. Some kind of cloning? If Bzup-kind have been there for like 300 years, that’s a long time to remain hidden. What have they learned of the other life forms on the planet. They must have some need of sustenance like the seafood Bzup has gladly been eating. They have not tried giving him any land animals to eat yet… also wondering about that initial message Bzup sent after he was let out… was that an I’m safe made contact message? This is so interesting, being in a first contact situation. Surprised the scientists have not set Bzup up with something like their children’s education system for him to do some self paced learning yet. That would surely speed up the communication learning.
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Beautiful ending, especially after that cliffhanger in the last chapter. It seems they both feel the same way about wanting to stay with the other. Especially after emerging from the rip tide. looking forward to the next story in the series.
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This seems like a much better use of the property. Like the addition of the boat. There’s a lot to keep everyone occupied.
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Leave us hanging here, wanting so much more. Kai finally told his siblings and that seemed to go well. Can’t wait till he gets to the house.
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Last Night Being Thirty-Nine
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Last Night Being Thirty-Nine
It’s awesome to have two people so in love after all that time together, and being so passionate with their celebration. Tickle power is really something special. -
Damn, hot session on the beach, then back to a riptide like how they first met. Scott desperately trying to save Justin again.
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A Minute? A Year? A Century!
VBlew commented on R. Eric's story chapter in A Minute? A Year? A Century!
Glad to have you back with this story. Tampa is a beautiful area to be. I love the interactions, the philosophical discussions, Joel, with the neural link, now able to tap into Athena ‘s sensors to see anywhere on the Ark, got distracted from what he was doing. The FTL travel in the stingers out to Zeus was interesting. The references to movies and TV from our time is interesting. The very open discussions about sexuality. Looking forward to more on the ark, then hopefully planetside. -
Awesome chapter. Sounds like they need to find that old desk. Love that Kai overrode the getting left alone plan. He wants to spend time with Adam.
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So now Bzup has the ability to touch, it extends his ability to learn more faster. And the scanning of Jem’s eye has enabled him to grow his own eye, so he ma be better to interpret the world around him like humans do. Maybe these aliens just interacted with he sea life and had no need for arms or eyes while on the surface of the planet. The ability to grow and use arms with 3 “fingers” surely shows a higher form of intelligence, and hopefully protection under the compact for the bureaucrats coming. Can’t wait to read about the eye and interaction Bzup may have with that ability. Reading? Using the human’s tablets to learn faster?
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Sounds like they are eliminating some enemies and gaining access to some valuable technology. Jamie is sad at losing his very brave brother.
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Bzup proves to be very interesting, greeting the entire crew, asking to go outside. Then going to the ocean and sending out some communication. Being polite and taking the food offered. Going back to his area for the night. I was thinking, maybe some tendril attachment to Jem to gain more access to be able to comment the blobs did with the orx, but that would probably seem too aggressive at this point, like he was attacking Jem, and been cause for violence.
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Emmett needed the time to decompress from what happened, and then learning that Dex is dead, and reliving the experience telling Finley about it. He still doesn’t know what Finley is, but feels safe with him. Then totally breaks down when he gets home. And what was that with the alarm going off there when Finley enters?
