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Fairies do have interesting was of working. This was a very enjoyable tale.
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Quick ending to book one, which has been an interesting adventure. Looking forward to book 2.
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Chapter 33 - Coming Through The Otherside
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Coming Through The Otherside
I like the way you wrapped this story up. Some could say it was a quick sprint to the finish. I found the whole thing very insightful to the mental health issues and the way you dealt with a very dysfunctional family. Excellent job. Looking forward to more stories from you. -
Good decision to keep the dialog about what happened on earth with the children, as they too need to learn from the mistakes made on their home planet. Fun having Robot, and plans for robotic pets. That will be good for morale.
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This is an interesting twist. Kyle needs to be honest about his needs to his two companions. I’m also wondering if he may be an ideal jockey for racing horses with his ability to communicate with them so well.
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Very nice chapter, it’s nice to have someone be forthcoming about how they feel and what they want. Makes the sex so much better.
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This is a great story, loving the use of Robbie. Interesting that there are not advanced androids, or maybe they don exist in this worldview. Seems like Athena could be sentient, given enough time. Great seeing that sexuality is a non issue on the Ark, at least in these families.
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Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 30 - More Fate: Leander's Secret
That was a crazy end of this chapter. So did anyone else at the fair know? Could it be that is why the fair woman who we thought was his mother had him beaten? Mystery inside of a mystery…. Your writing is so captivating. Can hardly wait for more. -
Sad thing to happen to such a good lad. The boys justice was not as strong as would have been liked, but the did get caught and had some punishment.
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Good initial character setup. Looking forward to where you take the story. Love magic in stories.
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Chapter 28 - It's Good To Talk
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 28 - It's Good To Talk
Hopefully Bear doesn’t try to push Luke away after this news. Getting talking to his dad and coming clean was good too. -
Awesome chapter, and a very happy time around the dinner table with lots of laughter after the interrogation was done. I think the two shifters will be ok at the cliff/ beach but what about Tyler? Don’t way too see him hurt or kidnapped.
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Chapter 27 - It All Comes Out In The End
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 27 - It All Comes Out In The End
That was an unexpected turn of events, maybe the mother is the crazy ringleader… that would not be good for the boys. If both Bear and Duke go in on a property together they may be able to get something nice….- 16 comments
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Crazy foreigners stealing a yacht, then assaulted a police officer to then wreck it. How did they escape? Or did they? Hopefully get caught and pay up. Still no help with recovering the hard work on the ship project. Hope that does not sour the boys relationship.
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The suspense of the last chapter is now a little better. At least they got Leander to the hospital for treatment. And Luke does have anger issues, but part of them seem justified.
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Chapter 6 On the Bonny, Bonny Shores...
VBlew commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Chapter 6 On the Bonny, Bonny Shores...
Sad state where a Vicar, without any explanation can be that powerful in a town.. no matter how ignorant he is being. Colin knew what he was talking about, and the Vicar had no rebuttal other than threatening them. I’m not that’s surprised that the Vicar thought his congregation would just take his word for what he said without question. So many people still do that today. -
Andre is a lot like I try to be. A peacemaker, but will fight to defend myself an pd my friends. It I’ll be interesting to see what he gets to do in combat training.
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So much to process, it looks like Alec made a breakthrough on his journey to mental healing. Thawing responsibility that he can create the life he wants to live. And especially loved Finn “Are you kidding? If it gets your cute ass here faster, my family will make all kinds of adjustments.”
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Chapter 5 Roots and Rebellion
VBlew commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Chapter 5 Roots and Rebellion
This is a very interesting tale in what is was like in a feudal society, and some of that has not changed much, with people being more economic slaves today. -
Chapter 23 - Starting Some Resolutions
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Starting Some Resolutions
Very good talk with his Dad. Getting to a therapist is a good idea. Finding out what Leander wants to talk with him so bad about is something he should do, even if it’s just closure. Hopefully it is something more. Looking forward to more. -
It’s a good thing for them both that Zach found the Yacht. Typically people that dock at a marina have to pay and intensify themselves, so maybe that will help the police apprehend the thieves.
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Chapter 22 - Don't Ask, Don't Watch and Don't Think About It
VBlew commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 22 - Don't Ask, Don't Watch and Don't Think About It
It was very fortunate that Bear saw someone and came back or it looks like Ben would have killed him. The fact he was in the closet and lost his boyfriend was not Luke’s fault. But revenge has a nasty habit, in stories, of making people very irrational. -
What a reaction from Meg. That clandestine “art” installation went well. And it seems like Nic is still wanting to take it to the next level.
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Cliffie wow, short but intriguing chapter. We know bouncer will keep them safe. Hopefully Garjah is ok. If these intruders have his transport, something happened for sure.
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If he has figured out Josh correctly then what he has done is right, but it seems he’s angered his father in the process. With the introduction to most of Bear’s family h may be able to join them helping operate the fair rather than Bear staying in town with him??
