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Love this chapter. They finally came out to each other. It’s been building for a while. Now spending the night together…
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Great ending to this interesting story. Everyone seems to be happy with their lives now.
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Friday, February 28, 2025 (II)
VBlew commented on Celian's story chapter in Friday, February 28, 2025 (II)
Oh, a secret passage, sealed with arcane magic. Leading to a room under the park…and a secret group meeting in this space. They must have unleashed the magic age bomb. Hopefully more will be found in the room and maybe Dust can undo it? -
I’m thinking 100 Fae soldiers are like 1000 human ones, and there never really was a count of the others. Just skirmishes before. Seems more like a magic fight anyhow. Loved this chapter. She is all on board to save Desmond. Then maybe he can help undo the Helmsforth dark magic. Sorry to hear about your personal challenge.
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Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
The title says Book 1 so I’m going out on a limb here and thinking there will be a book 2?? I was so angry at the way this ended, thinking it was the final ending. Had to take some time out to come back and comment. -
Building a Relationship, But With Speed Bumps
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Building a Relationship, But With Speed Bumps
Realistic chapter about whether to go to the funeral or not. Mom and Sis approve of Noah. -
Beautiful day having fun with friends exploring the house, and gardens. Getting measured for new clothes. Looking forward to the visit to the parents home.
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Awesome sex in zero-g.
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Part One: My First Trip To Mars
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: My First Trip To Mars
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Great ending to this section. I’m curious about why they didn’t try to go deeper into the cave, or was that really the extent of the cave? I guess I’m more used to the caves in the south, where they seem to have multiple connected caverns, many with large spaces. looking forward to seeing more of the inventory of the three bags. If one was gold coins, that would be quite valuable.
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Chapter 5 The Pale Blue Dot
VBlew commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 5 The Pale Blue Dot
Wow, truly riveting. Richter and Luther’s relationship was epic. Luther had no idea he was a psychic. What was the entity that he encountered on their space walk? -
So the question is, does anyone else have video at that party? And it’s not like they can prove what was in the cup, like he said.
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Act I - Live And Let Die
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Live And Let Die
Seems like Ray should have killed the vampire, it’s going to be after him after tasting his blood… maybe some answers for Ray about who and what he is? And why he’s been chased so much? -
A very positive coming out for Calvin. Now onto making fast money??
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Mr. Mancini came along at exactly the right time to help Damian, and gave him some good advice, and support that he needed. Those jocks should get some punishment for being bullies, at least James stood up to them.
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Chapter 10: On the Other Side (Nari Perspective)
VBlew commented on The Radish Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 10: On the Other Side (Nari Perspective)
Nari hobbling around the castle looking for Ben, and found him with his father. Father joked with his son, and admonished him to heal, just as his Mother had. What adventures will they get up to after the healing? And wondering if Beynar has any ideas about Ben’s traversing worlds through the spring? -
Oh no, tickle torture. This magic place is very mysterious, and a spring step trap, thankfully is was just a cage to trap him and not an explosive.
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Wolf meets wolf, but there is definitely something wrong with Pembroke. That he felt he had to lash out at the new wolf… and was it just the incense or was that to dull his senses in working with humans? And the mystery fortune teller… who truly seems like something else entirely. Will he be helpful or not?
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Nice getting to know you chapter. And a slow build to a friendship, which could lead to more. yes, helping people move was something that I volunteered for when I was young, but after a move from a 3rd floor walk up to another 3rd floor walk up, I called it quits.
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Tony arrives safely at the place he thinks of as home. Matt is the first one to arrive, and is pleasantly surprised to see him. Looking forward to more.
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Great ending, everyone of the guys did well, and they stay in touch. Nice reunion with one Mother.
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Friday, February 28, 2025 (I)
VBlew commented on Celian's story chapter in Friday, February 28, 2025 (I)
Fun banter over breakfast. Interesting tea with the former Robert Durham, whose identity was stolen…. No luck with the sewer people. Tiny clues.. looking forward to the next chapter. -
The work experience is like unpaid interns, on the job training, but the employers really don’t know how to utilize them best. Inflation at work, 5 pounds 10 years later is not as much as it used to be. Liam does get some insight to his family from his Aunt’s visit. Ed points out he may be getting out soon.
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I caught that in the beginning where he had never had alcohol before, and ordered a Long Island Iced Tea…. Thinking this is going to be interesting… then he kept drinking them. Interesting how it was mentioned the Storm Wolf died in an accident, was it that fight with his protege? The jumping around in time and characters is taking a little getting used to. The first guy trying to pick him up was very interesting. Loved the visual of the different pedestrian levels, and the parkour tour.
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Under the Hollywood Stars
VBlew commented on chris191070's story chapter in Under the Hollywood Stars
Awesome chapter. Alec and Rick are good for each other. With Rick looking to go into law, maybe entertainment law? He could help steer not only Alec’s career but other aspiring young talent as well.
