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JJ got some good advice from the girls, and seemed to follow it. Having a friend turn on you like Matt did hurts, maybe he will come around, maybe not, but his other friends are there for him.
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Through The Mud, On Our Way To The Stars
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Through The Mud, On Our Way To The Stars
So glad that Rusty finally took action, but waiting 4 days to do it? Seems like the bold romantic gesture was enough to get Matty back. Very glad that Jamie was a gentleman, and we’ll see if Matty tells him so?- 38 comments
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Why Chase left 3 weeks later after his confession has not been explained. What happened during those 3 weeks? Why did they not stay in touch if they had been such good friends? seems like they both still have feelings for each other and a bond too. Danny may not know what he saw, but he was jealous of Michael’s relationship with Sam. We still have no real motive for the Murder, it’s usually money, or jealousy.
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Won’t Giles figure out the Mate Connection? I thought that was something that Alphas could detect, but maybe they have to connect first.
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Demeter is going to wish she never messed with him. Travis is getting stronger and learning more about using his powers. There is an implication that he is going to be stuck here for years. Is this the same timeline that Josh is living in?
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Great chapter with the trip to do some site seeing, and learning more of the local tribe, the petroglyphs were very interesting.
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Great chapter, they’re both awkward around each other. Soren needs to tell Conner what he is. It may make better not being a werewolf.
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Interesting chapter with Zenial telling about their similar past. The connection with Soullen. Although with him no longer accessible, that relationship will change. Who is this new person? Is it Q in disguise? looking forward to more.
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JJ is trying to find himself. On the other hand Travis did try to get back to him, just was in a different timeline… and I don’t think he could text from where he is either….
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Great story. The ending felt like riding a rocket, and then it was very suddenly over.
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This is a great shifter story. With the hints I was thinking dragon was what Drake was before Connor guessed. This will be a very progressive pack. Looking forward to more.
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Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Boys Like You Don’t End Up With The King
Seems like Rusty was getting a little jealous hearing about Jamie being around Matty, but not enough to quit sulking… whoever got Francine to step in should be congratulated, making Rusty go low, and then to the high of singing about his love Matty. Now with Xpress spilling the T about their relationship, Rusty hopefully will man up and go get Matty, and apologize.- 49 comments
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It seems like these demons all want something from Travis, but I expect that Oblivion will have something to say if he suspects he is being manipulated.
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Interesting that he teleported to a different version of his earth. And his ignorance of things is concerning with their consequences.
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Wow, what a way to start. Glad you’re back at this story. I’ve missed these characters, and am looking forward to finding out how they save the pups caught in transition.
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Interesting twist to end this book. They’re both fighting in different arenas to get back to what they know on Earth.
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Powerful chapter, Travis still has a lot of anger, and Oblivion keep nudging him in that direction. Glad that JJ is taking care of himself. Hopefully there is not a jealous Travis when they get back together.
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Great beginning. Looking forward to the rest of the story. I like the positive interaction between father and son. And Brian’s wanting to have an honest relationship with his son. Hopefully not too much drama with the ex and her bigoted boyfriend. Toby deserves a loving supportive home environment.
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Great beginning to what looks to be an interesting adventure. The boys are getting along, at least from James’ perspective.
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Very lovely short story. Thanks for posting it.
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So sad they messed him up with the imaginary Tin Can visits that he doesn’t believe that this visit from his mother was real.
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What did Lothar gain by this action with Edward, getting him to see Fran’s plight? Maybe it was for Edward to kill Gustave?
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Nice to get a little background into the intervening years. And more on how Tom became a singer. Interesting that he’s more famous outside the US.
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Aiden’s therapy session went well, and now to get down to some phone sex…
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Good for JJ putting himself out there, he needed some friends who had something else in common. And he learned that his poetry was good, and well received.
