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Breaking the Chains (Part 2)
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Breaking the Chains (Part 2)
Yes, the get free, and torture their tormentors. Back to the manor and time to heal. And maybe some magic for the hand to be attached to Jacques? -
Very interesting that the American Anenerbe are of the same thoughts as these Norwegian boys.
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Zdain’s father is a pompous ass, and meeting with anyone in power may not be a good idea. His mother’s thoughts about his being gay are not enlightened at all… his brother still cares for him. i thought that Josel had feelings for Zdain, beyond just friendship, so why is he so insistent he’s only into girls? At least he is comforting to Zdain, still being his friend.
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Chapter 10 - Cirrus clouds 10.5 - FIN
VBlew commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Cirrus clouds 10.5 - FIN
Loved the clothes changing room scene. Richter is still not comfortable around crowds. Lovely ending to this book. Looking forward to reading the rest of the series. -
Great start to a new book in one of my favorite series.
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Wow, the way you led up to them going up to the Ark, it just felt like something ominous was going to happen.. then it did. What were the “bullets”? And why weren’t they detected by the defense systems in place? Had they been sent by the crazy dictator? Huge cliffhanger. Those 3 individuals are going to be severely missed.
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Goodbyes, Boat Rides and More Goodbyes
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Goodbyes, Boat Rides and More Goodbyes
Great ending to a story that dealt with a lot of issues teens face. The fast forward to how everyone’s lives turned out was great. -
Great chapter, moving things forward. The reason for the interview sounds really good.
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Thursday, February 27, 2025 (IV)
VBlew commented on Celian's story chapter in Thursday, February 27, 2025 (IV)
Interesting discussion about possible causes for this magic bomb. There is definitely something underground, but pesky bureaucracy is keeping them from records, briefly. Dust’s obsession with Kellen needs to be sated soon… -
This was a powerful chapter. The Fae elders seem like total cowards. It took the 3 guys fighting together to beat off the soldiers and get to Lachlan. He had to kill Kerian for Rory to unleash some next level magic, that he didn’t have any problem directing. The whole resurrection scene here was different than Kerian’s vision. Parts were similar, but different. This ancient tablet, did someone else discover it first to unleash this mind control? I think Ash and Desmond may have some kind of bond which will let Ash rescue him from the possession. Then to some passion like the princes have been having?
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Chapter 10 - Cirrus clouds 10.3
VBlew commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Cirrus clouds 10.3
So Qana is his father? Interestingly he chooses the 2nd dragon as a mentor before meeting with his last choice. -
Chapter 21 - Burned Village
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Burned Village
Through their travels they keep running into people they either know or who are willing to help in some way. This may be why they were so easily duped at the labyrinth hotel. Glad they found out Violeta is ok. -
Tom Meets the Men Who Connected Him to Geoff
VBlew commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in Tom Meets the Men Who Connected Him to Geoff
If I remember correctly David Sr was the guy Grampa Geoff wanted to reconnect with that he had played around with in his youth, but the guy wanted nothing to do with those memories and tried to sell Geoff insurance… it really is a small world. -
After much Tim prepping the passage for safe entry, they find some possible treasure near the entrance. Maybe there will be more further in. Dev changing to a small dog to accommodate his metal plates worked out. I was wondering if they could change just their eyes to something that has better low light vision? They seem to be able to change arms and legs for strength. Hopefully what they find will set the boys up financially for their lifetime.
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Great chapter. You did get Kerian and Ash to finally play nice. This Fae court is mostly bickering people, without any backbone. If Lachlan is only a few hours behind, could they portal back to the half Fae village and get behind them? These Fae elders do deem to know a lot about what’s happening in Arcum, do they know as much about Helmsfirth? Or about what is causing the possession of the puppet soldiers?
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Great chapter. Josh gets a new look, and it’s approved all around. Now he’s agreed to go to the police…. He has the supporters to help him through.
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Surprise beginning. Needing to evacuate from a dying sun.
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Great chapter, Ryder is his normal awesome self. Very direct. Love their interplay and getting the inner dialogue as well.
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Love the American Idol twist. From homeless to superstar.
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Beautiful ending to a summer of love.
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Back at Serenity base with a genetic engineer. Adam has been hurt in the past, and wants a child as soon as possible. At least they discussed why, and were clear about that. Marc loves Adam, and told him that he thought his behavior toward him was enough to show he was going to be around long term. Maybe after the bonding ceremony Adam will feel better?
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Act I - Into The Unknown (revised)
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act I - Into The Unknown (revised)
Such funny banter. Then into an area he should not have walked into apparently. Now a vampire? Nice cliffhanger. -
Oh Dillian, where art thou?
VBlew commented on garfwiz's story chapter in Oh Dillian, where art thou?
Glad to have you back continuing this story. Lots of things falling into place for Tala, not so much for others. Sounds like Tala is going to be fighting with his grandfather… -
Richter is learning inter species etiquette, and more about the academy.
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Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
It seems like Tyler is being honest with himself about his feelings, and was able to open up to new girl in town, Christine. I think it will be harder to tell his best friend.
