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Fun times whitewater rafting, even the class IV. The boys are bonding, Cliff needed the cuddle time. He was very direct about asking if the were boyfriends, and then wanted to be held. These guys are good role models as well. Everyone is enjoying this vacation.
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Chapter 8 - The Debris Field
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - The Debris Field
So now their mission to get to the library is derailed. Sad that another large city has been destroyed. -
When you get the opportunity to flip the script it can be amazing for both parties… hot.
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Yes, keep going. This was an excellent chapter. But what is Victor up to?
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Dylan Wasn’t Asleep Either
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in Dylan Wasn’t Asleep Either
Damn! Leave them wanting more Dylan. Still want to know if Jake set them up? -
Tony did good with the gift presentation. They love each other. Now about that mansion…
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What If You Like It Complicated?
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What If You Like It Complicated?
I’m starting to think Cassandra was leading Ryder to his death rather than his mated HEA. And with Pembrook seeming to be a crime boss it seems reasonable that he may have pull beyond the city…- 27 comments
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More Pool, A Trip North, and Oops
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Pool, A Trip North, and Oops
Boys being boys, who like boys. Seems like a nice beginning to a deeper relationship. Jeff was being better playing with the younger boys after apologizing for his bad language. He is getting ready for the new school, I hope they just don’t promote homophobia there…- 40 comments
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Act II - He Lives In You
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - He Lives In You
Loved the background lore. The man and daughter called by a dream. There will likely be more. With Ray’s presence will they all be able to shift as easily as Gabriel is now? Such exciting times. With a drywalker by his side and Gabriel, they just need a good witch on the team to be complete… -
This has totally captured my attention. Two boys from different worlds, collided for a night. One wants more , the other hiding his past, seeming to want to protect the other. Looking forward to where this goes.
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Discovering his hosts were vampires didn’t really freak him out that much, he seemed to have already suspected that. The fact he might be related was something he is not sure of…
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Wow, that’s a super intense chapter, can see why you can’t write short stories. I really want to see a HEA for Griffin and Sean, but in just a few chapters, don’t see that happening. This copycat or trainee now murdering parents and abducting the abused children is something special. Hopefully Griffin gets some clues and the find these three, and maybe more children before they are inducted to be serial killers too…
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This chapter shows what an amazing loving family can look like. This family is so amazing. Led by Marc and Adam. Who are always surprising each other. They are raising amazing children to be the next leaders. Love that new leisure ship, as well as what they have planned for the expansion of their leisure division. This story is so incredible in its scope and world building. Enjoy your time off for reflection.
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D'Artagnan & Chapter 4 - FIN
VBlew commented on RedMoon's story chapter in D'Artagnan & Chapter 4 - FIN
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Slow burn on this. The are getting to know each other, working late, side by side. Very intimate. No lines crossed yet.
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So much pride and loving support for the new family member.
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What a great bonding day. I love hiking like that but it’s been a long time since I have. Alex’s questions are good, letting his dad know they are OK and he wants to get to know him better. This whole walking Jon off is just insecurity and he needs to face that, or he’s going to loose it. It also seems like Alex has more of a clue about that. And may be able to help…
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Michael’s fighting is most definitely Psychic abilities. Zorro is still alive to continue fighting. And this is the beginning of Railroad…
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We learn from Caitlin that this behavior of Joe’s has been happening longer that their conversation about Will loving him. Seems like wince he was out of his home he went crazy, but he did set Will up with Aidan, even if he didn’t consciously know they were both gay, their may have been a subconscious recognition. And the anger seems like a lot of internalized homophobia… The big question is who is in the pool? The story seemed to have started with drowned people in a river if I remember correctly, so it may not be Joey.
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Great beginning, something from the ashes is brought forth.
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I Shouldn’t Be Looking at Dylan Like That
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in I Shouldn’t Be Looking at Dylan Like That
Fast pacing, love the characters already. Just the tension between Troy and Dylan… is Dylan gay too, and Jake was setting them up?.. -
This chapter was deep. Connecting emotionally, opening up. Still leaving some things unsaid, but in the end they are comfortable together. Wonder if being around a dragon would prolong the unicorn lifespan? Can’t wait for the dragon to come out and play.
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So I’m wondering more about the missing underwear, the mystery man outside the strange dreams, and the pentagram that Troy wear. Then Ralph’s “accident” are they all connected?
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Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
VBlew commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act II - When You’re Good to Mama
Gabriel forgot that just swallowing Ray’s cum wold be detected by the wolves at the party… We still don’t know what kind of shifter Ray is, he seems to be more than just a wolf. That magic bouncing off him was interesting. Seems like they need to truly bond soon. -
Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Chapter Twenty-Three
Great chapter, Rory is accepted by the Euphon, has a vision and is told it will take them all working together. Ash is going to wear down Desmond, they will be a great couple. Love the joint kings idea… the homophobia has to go… on to dinner, crowning ceremonies in both kingdoms…
