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Seth has changed, being more dominant. And seems to have remembered personal hygiene.
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Is it medication the Ryan should be taking, that caused the fainting. That was a lot of stress for a seeming introvert.
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With Henry being in the same area as Teyshawn and Devon, when police arrive they will likely find him. Maybe he’ll make his way to Liberty Academy? Devon is going to need medical attention for his wounded shoulder. Will the gang let them get away?
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Awesome reunion for the brothers. They will now be able to stay in touch. Excellent news that the police acted in a coordinated effort and arrested a lot of people.
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Liam is hooked now.
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Loved this quiet inquiry path, finding out more about the housemates. Found a Way to what? Great cliffhanger.
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First Touch, First Hunger
VBlew commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in First Touch, First Hunger
Anticipation is what the end of this chapter is. Delicious. -
That is going to make going on a date with Jordan awkward… they really need to talk about their relationship more. Has Cal told Alan he is not willing to do the semi porn yet? This was a very hot shower scene, and Cal is being much more dominant than before.
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Ash was so willing to let Desmond go back to the priesthood, then it all turned around. He had to carry Desmond once again out of a bad situation. They make an awesome couple, and maybe with their combined power will make a difference getting Rory and Kieran out of the Fae castle.
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The interview went really well. Tony handled it like a professional. Reading the final part of the book with Aaron in the room was really touching.
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The True Touch of a Lover
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The True Touch of a Lover
Ryder if fighting what he thinks he knows from the first clairvoyant, but either he heard wrong or their message was not clear. He found Danny who seems to really be his fated mate. Where as Theodore wanted to kill him when they met. The incense may have been masking something, but not a mate attraction. Tonight may further the mate connection. -
Nice dinner, Troy is all worked up.
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Back in London, Reggie is now doing his duty at the House of Lords. They defeat the Lady in Black. Reggie is coming into his own using magic.
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Party time at Philpott Towers
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Party time at Philpott Towers
Great casual party. There probably used to be complete matching sets of crockery, before everything was sold off and the guys inherited the place. Vince does seem more comfortable being in this environment with Peter, and has finally accepted and is going to let the other important people in his life know? -
The vampires are hundreds of years old, there are stories to tell, and since Aaven is brand new to learning all about this. If they’re willing to share, it would be very interesting, and maybe give him some perspective to move forward with.
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This chapter has many things going on. Getting the able soldiers to find their compatriots, Kirian and Ash having a serious talk, Rory being fussed over as a pregnant person. I did wonder what effect the portal travel would have on the unborn child. The Fae healers will let him know. Meeting Ash’s cousin Virelle who is delightful. On to business of being crowned. New clothes, meetings…
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Easter Luncheon Confessions
VBlew commented on DanXWrites's story chapter in Easter Luncheon Confessions
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"The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
VBlew commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in "The Sorrowful Tale Of The Reckless Prince"
There is so much to unpack in this chapter, I loved the interaction with Professor Thorne. Nick is getting his students ready for the world. The interplay between Nick and Bobby in this chapter caring and nurturing. So different than Adrian’s almost dismissive attitude. -
The house party was a mess. Victor definitely did something to Will, and if he loves him like was potentially described, then why would you do something to hurt someone you love unless you’re trying to get them back or some twisted sense of morals. I hope Will is OK. Victor is definitely a piece of work trying to get some kind of retribution against Jonah. North Carolina is not an option, they will figure something out. Looking for the next chapter.
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Jon is the strong one here, getting Jim out of his head and spiraling thoughts of endless what if scenarios. He had a bad break up, coming out. His son Alex gave up a relationship that would not honor his father, so, give the boy some credit…he wants Jim to be happy…
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So maybe Toby isn’t the scum Fabian’s father initially thought he was. The young men really have an attraction to each other.
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This is something like I was thinking with all of the missing items and the pentagram. A gay boy brought up on fictional ideals and now wanting to have the masculine boyfriend. Led him to some pretty dark places. The question is are the daemons real or imagined, and if the spell breaks what will happen with their relationship?
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Interesting beginning! Liam may just be enough interested in Tommy, may be bi, if we’re going to label it… Tommy could be projecting his desire onto his hot friend. This also has the potential to ruin their cozy three person relationship. Has Tommy been around Liam longer than Paige? Did Tommy date girls before? This starts with just having come out as gay.
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Was his mother trying to protect him from whoever she got the venom from, abandoning him like that? Interesting that the Vampire DNA is there but dormant. Interesting that they seem to possibly be daywalkers. And have long lives, don’t necessarily need blood to survive. Curious twist on typical vampire lives…
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Wow, slow burn. So sexy.
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