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A Lifechanging Encounter
VBlew commented on lawfulneutralmage's story chapter in A Lifechanging Encounter
Interesting chapter, was the large man a Ghost? Or something else? Also where is his hunger and super speed coming from. Very interesting twist in the story here.- 39 comments
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Damn, another body. Whoever the murder is they are crafty. All of the remaining alive people having been interviewed. Unless they got Barry to murder Abel, then killed him…
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Very interesting perspective, first the birds, then the human?
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Thomas is being a great friend.
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The Visit, The Wedding, and The Future
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Visit, The Wedding, and The Future
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Brutal honesty is a great way to start a relationship. Mike was in charge not letting Jamie derail the line of interrogation. And they both understand their work will interfere with social planning. It looks like they will be good for each other.
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Lovely chapter, Keith recognized that he was being flirted with not Stan, then a fun day out with Thomas. Fresh air and exercise, and some fun sex that reconfirmed his desire for men.
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Great start to what looks to be a great murder mystery.
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My hope is that Angel does not inject Otis with the drug he had for Jasper. I’m thinking the gun target practice that Otis did is going to come in handy and surprise Hudson. There is some very dark history with the perps in this story.
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This is an awesome start to what looks to be an interesting story. I definitely want to know more about Abbie.
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Great chapter, lots of calls. I’m not sure I read anything from Mike’s conversations that would indicate he was gay other than the late night texting.
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In the second section is this: ”“I'm glad you abandoned us,” Bryan said.” I think “he” should replace “you” in that line… As for Kenny having his own room and space, This is a great option. Hopefully Caleb doesn’t feel left out wit Bryan staying at Billy’s for 2 weeks.
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Great short with a happy ending.
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It is a police story, so the details of the job they are doing important to the storyline. Mike seems to know more about police work than a typical special. And is for sure flirting… he did get Jamie’s personal number pretty quickly, and is using it. Looking forward to where this goes.
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This is a great start to what looks to be an interesting story. I do have a question as to why Jamie did not seem to be hones and up front with Mike, and just went to the boss and asked not to be paired up again. Seems like this could be something for Mike to be upset about as it seemed like they worked well together this day.
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Great chapter, and looking forward to the story of Jamie and Andre…. They have a history together too.
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Chapter 57 Epic-Log Part Four
VBlew commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 57 Epic-Log Part Four
Lovely. A marriage proposal. And hopefully the college years and the long distance relationship do work out. -
So this was all as a result of Chris’s dad trying to exert some kind of control over him…. That’s so messed up.
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Maks, what have you gotten yourself into? That kidnapping was a big cliffhanger.
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Wow, amazing conclusion to this amazing story. The guys are connected the way they were destined to be. Kane being reincarnated is awesome addition. thanks for sharing this tumultuous, journey.
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Good news that Chris is back and seems willing to explain why he messed up. The way that Mr. Mazibuko, called and supported Cal was a very good level of support. Hopefully it will make some difference at school.
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I’m wondering about the LongEars, is it just a manifestation of anger and hatred, is it a shapeshifter?
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Great chapter and starting some closure. Here’s hoping the council is wise and provides funds for the shelter.
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Wow, another dramatic chapter to end this amazingly challenging story. Thanks for the ride.
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Chapter 56 Epic-log Part Three
VBlew commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 56 Epic-log Part Three
Baby steps yet again.
