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Chapter 26 Be My Valentine
VBlew commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 26 Be My Valentine
If you imagine the qualities of the one you really want. They will show up when you’re not expecting it. That’s how I met my husband. -
It’s good Zafiro made the team!
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Thanks for an awesome story. And the coming out was very dramatic. And well accepted by their families. Nice ending on the roof looking at the stars. It is truly amazing what can be seen without the light pollution. Kind of a metaphor within the story.
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Was the box not showing Zafiro what the others were seeing? He was seeing blue sparks, and the others were seeing red blood? Or was it his augmentation showing him something different. Those voices are really annoying him too. Hopefully they can get something to get that fixed soon.
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It’s good to have you back with this story. Not that rough. I think you’re being hard on yourself. You did cover a lot of things going on simultaneously. Looks like Duane will get his wolf back, and that’s a good thing. Hopefully Greyson will git his head straightened out… Tala is getting close to the source of the problems again.
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Good for Dad. Hopefully everything was recorded and that will be enough for a hate crime defense. Maybe Dwight’s not dead, but that could be worse. Only one more chapter? Bring it on, this was a huge cliffhanger!
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Loved this chapter, a mysterious man looking. For Dante, Tani telling most of the truth about his past. Their love is sure and true in this incarnation. As to the trigger warnings question, that was very subtle the way you wove in the thoughts, but it does not seem obvious enough to warrant a warning, but I’m not a moderator either.
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Tonight’s Not About Bubbles
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Tonight’s Not About Bubbles
The beginning of this chapter has some interesting interactions with Maddox and Jonathan.. do they have an idea of what's happening with Rusty, and are just helping him along.. Getting all dressed up and cologne is unusual so revealing that something else is going on in this relationship with Matty, not just mentor and mentee.. especially after they get to the party and he's anxious for Matty to arrive -
You got me on this one, glad that it was Lucas that he was to save, and that Macy was ok. Now to know more about who Jace was, and now that he has had this experience what will he do with his life. There is a definite attraction to Lucas. I did miss the earbuds…😊
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Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
VBlew commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
This world you’ve created and the stories you’re telling are most engaging. Looking forward to the next books. -
The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
VBlew commented on Jwolf's story chapter in The Interrogation of Michael Anthony Loggerman, Cadet
Corbin mostly killed 2 relationships in this farce of a trial. I feel for Mike. He is a good guy, and maybe this will push him back to only being with women, and never speaking with Corbin again. That was brutal. Are they going to bring Pete in next? A this point all Corbin has done is sow doubt for the charges… -
Was this a trap that Garjah new was coming? Bouncer will be all over whoever has Essell. He never leaves his side. Which is curious how the got separated in the first place unless these traitors planned it in advance.
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Loose Ends Tied & Culprits Caught
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Loose Ends Tied & Culprits Caught
Janice is caught again. So bad that she was able to bribe officers. -
Finally some real training. Maybe that will help with the voices in his head.
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You handled this life transition of Nona beautifully. She was a big part of Armand’s life and accepted him as another son. It can be hard to let go, but when it’s time to go, people leave. She had a very long life.
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I agree that someone able to change people’s memories got there first, and I still suspect the Detective, but this could be a red herring. Looking forward to more of this mystery. Then what will happen once Jase heals Macy?
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It’s All Nothing But A… Fairytail
VBlew commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in It’s All Nothing But A… Fairytail
I'm agreeing with those saying Matty needs to come clean about his alter ego.. the sooner the better. Rusty still needs to come to terms with his attraction to Matty. The plot is moving along, and the anticipation of what it going to happen is kept up this chapter, looking forward to the party... -
Great story, such imagination to create these characters. They are entirely believable and entertaining. The interaction of the overbearing mother, and the emancipation. The ghost helping as a friend. Very well done.
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This was a hard chapter to read, emotionally... The Guards messing with him. The hope of getting back with Ray, learning that he has been reset back to close to the beginning of his arrival at the icebox... not clear if the chip was actually removed or not.. that piece of the conversation made it sound like it may have been the first go round, or possibly not. As for money to get things fixed, back on earth, it's been 2 years, but is there possibly money left at Piggy's place? Probably not, but worth checking. I was all excited about the team and the potential to earn his way out of being incarcerated. Maybe now that he knows and can move forward he will find a purpose again.. sounded like he was losing hope to go on.
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Funny comment by Mom after he just has a conversation with his gay “old” friend. Not like they can’t all get along. Tyler needs to do some soul searching and figure out what he wants, and not just someone to get off with. Rufus being himself is good. Not hiding any longer.
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The Talented Tristan von Aschenbach
VBlew commented on Lenny Bruce's story chapter in The Talented Tristan von Aschenbach
The beginning of what appears to be a love story with a ghost. Very well executed. With Tristian being so sheltered about anything sexual, he is very excited about this dream interlude with Furio. -
Great backstory to why he is so upset that someone got Macy when she seemed to be safe with them in the apartment…
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Bitches & Bad Guys Always Return
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in Bitches & Bad Guys Always Return
Ooooh, Janice is back, hopefully people only get tickled and nobody dies. These guys are so loving of each other. -
It seems like his friends may be ok with him if he will be honest with them. But his fear of being rejected by his parents is worse. His mother is being the worst, dad sounds like he may be ok with it.
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At least they are getting Jordan back, but what about the skipper? Sin the identity of the kidnapper is known, once they get Jordan back, the police can reach out to the parents again. Hopefully they won’t wreck this yacht… and get caught and put in jail for the kidnapping.
