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That dream that brought us to this story was a real nightmare. I’m sorry that Joey is going to die, but we’re going through the background to find the killer. Will also seems to not know the answer to the question Laura asked him about his feelings for Joey. Looking forward to this book.
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Wow, what an amazing ending. Dante’s love and the power that Tani’s bond with him gave him the power to get through the gates to the Ekho realm. The wedding was beautiful. Now they have all eternity together.
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Very fun chapter, gift giving in advance of the actual wedding. I’ve been wondering about their relationship and if the seeming openness with Russ would change after they get married, but this seems to be them let him come for a visit on their honeymoon.
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Amazing time on the mountain finishing up the holovid for their last public goodbye. then turning to making part of their home sanctuary a mountain resort. Multi seasonal. Will be very interesting. And needing 3 new yachts… Marc is always planning far into the future. It was sad seeing him retreat into business mode after being so carefree for a few days.
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Part One: I Have My Own Alexa?
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: I Have My Own Alexa?
Tyler has a great relationship with his mother. Interesting after learning the florist is gay, he asks questions of him. Was Jake flirting? Tyler was oblivious if he was. But there’s also an age gap there. -
It took a shove from their friends, and once they had some good alone time to talk, they worked out that they each still wanted to be together. Their imagination of what was best for the other really wasn’t. Now about that house?.. they do need to talk about finances as it seems like a huge disparity, but that can be handled with honest communication.
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Great ending to this story. Sorry to read how badly Lucas was injured, but he seems to have turned his life around. The very end with Chandler arriving was perfect. Seems like he may be openly gay too.
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Great start to this next book. Cataloging the treasure. Fun time with family. Devin really needs to get the hardware removed now that the bones are healed. He missed out on flying as a bird. Hopefully that goes well and he can convince the Dr to do it.
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Saturday, March 1, 2025 (I)
VBlew commented on Celian's story chapter in Saturday, March 1, 2025 (I)
After a nightmare, for Kellen, he wakes up horney and they have great wake up sex. No disappearing in the night this time. Wonder if it’s possible to get his magic back? -
Interesting chapter, the weather seemed to mirror his attitude. 105 and no AC is brutal. Maybe a pool, or is the beach close?
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Joshua is really playing the nasty pirate captain role hard in this chapter, almost making pet uncertain of what was really happening. Hopefully after these other scoundrels are dealt with, their life can be something better.
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So, the truth then???
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Gray’s heart is in the right place. Wanting Vince and Peter to be happy. I’m thinking Vince doesn’t know about Peter looking for other work, most likely out of town… Seems like a good idea, dinner at the Grange. Not out in public, that would be pushing too far.
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It’s nice to have a friend that owns the planet to keep the newsies away. They still got to enjoy their day, the racing with one skiing and the other hang gliding was amazing. Marc is going to learn to ski so they can do that together. beautiful time together on their honeymoon. Can’t wait to see what else they do.
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I still say Alan is not straight… Good times with Dad.
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The healed vampire has extraordinary strength and silver does not seem to affect him any longer… did the graze of Gabriel’s fang on Ray’s neck cause something to happen? Or was his healing something inherent in him? Seems he may already be some kind of shifter, just had not shifted before? At the end of this he still wants answers. Will he change with this full moon? can’t wait to see what happens next.
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Interesting that he needed to get up and write. Sometimes I believe that’s our subconscious bringing out ideas an it’s good to capture them. The morning walk was interesting. This house keeps coming up. Seems like foreshadowing to me. The introduction by Scott of the guys was brilliant.
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Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
Gael is very different now. He is much stronger after the trials he’s been through. -
I had to go look. I haven’t seen any story of Joshua Thatcher here on GA. So am I right to assume this is a story coming soon? Loved the Blue Whale analogy. And we know from Eric’s story he is a billionaire.
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Chapter 6: The Distance Between Us
VBlew commented on Hikaru29's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Distance Between Us
Oh hell, Adrian help save Aelios from his nemesis Kaelen, who tells him that Lord Theron is still alive. So he is going to have to kill him all over again. Bit maybe with Adrian at his side, he will be able to. Will Aelios have to make Adrian a vampire for them to be together forever? -
Such a beautiful love story. Meeting with Steven the coffee roaster, who genuinely wanted to know about them, now a cheerleader for them. The time at home getting more into a rhythm, and realizing they belong together. Now breaking the news to the sons…
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So, I’m wondering if this “phantom” empires heart is from the future? As we have no knowledge that in this timeline the ship can open wormholes… this seemingly is the time when Luther and Richter were in the throes of passionate lovemaking if I remember from the other story where Luther’s memory was hidden from him by Richter. So much more to uncover. Fantastic storytelling.
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Some progress, a good shower, showing the food replicator, although not quite right. But getting there.
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Chapter 2: Christian isn't giving up.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Christian isn't giving up.
Smoldering tension between Miguel and Christian…hopefully they will overcome their differences, get Christian’s father freed, and find common ground. -
Luther saved a stunned Abel from the phantom, then the abandon ship and speed away. 2 Empire’s Heart ships? Who or what is controlling the drones from the other ship? Someone with Richter’s level of psychic abilities?
