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It takes a spirit to show him what being in the closet can do to a person. Truly wreck them emotionally.
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Who is the red haired woman? Is this a good thing? Or are we in for surprise antagonist?
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Who is the red haired woman? Is this a good thing? Or are we in for surprise antagonist?
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Another interesting chapter. I vote that you continue this work after you take the pause on it. It is a very different type of story to the others here on GA, and as historical fiction is very interesting.
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So, Mike shows up. Was not expecting that with all of the self loathing Corbin was going through.
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Great chapter. Interesting developments in non gender stereotypes. And the wealth that Marcus apparently grew up with.
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A very fun Uncle Joey, love this guy.
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Awesome, another tickle story. Great introduction to the main characters. Looking forward to reading where you go with this one.
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This is interesting. Being vegan for over 10 years, this youthful approach to making people more aware is a very aggressive approach. The guys are having fin, and with the washable paint not as aggressive as some other tactics. It will be interesting to see where this goes.
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An interesting beginning. A promising product designer, and a mysterious person rescuing raccoons.
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The mate call of the twins sen Elijah and Tyler running to their Mates, so just the proximity is starting to have an effect. The got to spend some time with them, and will be bringing dinner later. Possibly sleeping in the same space? I can’t see them wanting to be separated very much now. Zev and Ben coming may help to bring the twins out some more.
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Looking forward to this story. Rusty is such an enigma. We start off the story similarly with the main characters bumping into each other in the cafeteria. I love the tutor angle. Hopefully Matty has enough pressure to enter the contest. With that then we know who Rusty will pick to work with.
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Thanks for an insightful story. The ending is tragic, but the idea that he was able to love even briefly was beautiful.
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So there are more powers that Mattie may have, and were being suppressed. Hopefully now he will be able to use them and possibly stay out of harms way. Was the suppression part of why he got hurt so much in the past? Why didn’t the healers come to help him? Why did they leave him in a coma for so long? So many questions…. Looking forward to catching some bad people again, and taking their powers away, again.
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Wukong is a fast learner, quickly taking his lessons and performing matter manipulation with just his mind. Science vs Magic is just a matter of the particular audience.
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Thank you for this story and the courage in your own life to live and love. It’s amazing to me that as a society we seem to be regressing. We are all human beings, each of us individual creations of God, yet that seems so hidden by outward appearance for some and for those of us who are gay or otherwise different sexually that is not necessarily visible, but still a difference that some Hate for whatever reason. This story is something that deserves a much broader audience.
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Lots of layers in this chapter. Getting some historical perspective on how they are all related, blood/turning or oath. Hopefully Konstantin and Katherine are not setup to where they have to fight each other.
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So Yashuki found his calling in a bathhouse? Interesting ending. Seems hat everyone is moving forward with their lives.
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Chapter 37: Endearing Epilogue
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 37: Endearing Epilogue
Great ending to this trilogy. Looking forward to the next stories. It’s been an emotional ride that was thoroughly enjoyable throughout. Your world-building with this pack and everyone they encounter has been an amazing adventure. Bravo. -
Dogs are amazing at so many things. And Rebel seems to have special training to work with people who need his level of just being. Looks like the therapy is making progress of getting the story of abuse out. Dominic seems to want to improve which is really important.
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Chapter 3 "Normal" Life
VBlew commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Chapter 3 "Normal" Life
Tobi is a saint to work through all of this with Dominic. There is so much going on with Dominic when someone treats him badly, like the Boss who would not listen about him being in hospital, that he goes into a state where he is mostly unaware of his surroundings. This seems pretty dangerous. A least a little progress at the end. Maybe finish his schooling? -
2 Resurrection and Hospital
VBlew commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in 2 Resurrection and Hospital
It seemed like he was making progress with Tobi listening to him. And maybe with Tobi telling the Dr what he’s learned they can make some progress together. This condition of being broken seems like it’s going to take a lot of work for him to trust anyone again. -
Devlin did say “I like Marc very much but all of this luxury is just a bit too much for me, I just don’t like… well you know how I feel,” So it is possible that there is a relationship possibly, but he has to get used to the wealth. Back to the parents estate which his siblings may be hiding from him. That could change his net worth and maybe make it easier. Seems like he wants to make his own way in the world.
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Damn. He blew his life apart, for what? A little power on campus? Corbin has been a tornado this entire story, and Pete still wants him to find himself. Peace is powerful.
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Parker’s last comments are so true of someone in a lot of emotional pain, just wanting to shut down. Fortunately ha has a great support system with friends and family around him. This was a sad time, but may be the beginning of healing a lot of things for the community.
