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Chapter 56 Epic-log Part Three
VBlew commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 56 Epic-log Part Three
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Lovely short story with a very happy ending.
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Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Goodbye Denial, Hello Acceptance
Dylan did a great job of being honest with himself about his feelings for Colton, and the therapy session helped clear any doubts about the guilt. Now to see where they go together. -
This idea of being in stasis and saving an android body running around is very interesting. Would the all have to have the filament implants for the neural link to work? Does the android body go to sleep when the human comes out of stasis? How do you tell if one is human or android? Some of this is like the interface used in Avatar movies. But they weren’t androids they were like living puppets. Plus huge social dynamics to address. looking forward to what they decide.
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Axel had his hands full in this makeshift ER. He definitely cares for Jena. Now for some answers that will maybe, let them explore their relationship.
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Keith, is at least putting himself out there, even if he has to travel a ways to meet others, besides the married guys he hangs out with.
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Very interesting beginning, the confession. Is Adam just that naive? Then the fun with his best friend Thomas, the almost rape, and then him healing the love of his life. Will Thomas recognize that Adam saved him? Will their love continue to grow, will Adam leave this small town?
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Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
VBlew commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
What a chapter, and a huge cliffhanger! What is happening to Mark? The chambers with the markings on the floor for each of them. Seemed kind of like the teleportation in the original StarTrek. Was Mark beamed somewhere else, or being put back to just human? Can’t wait to find out. -
Chapter 23: “Plan all the way to the end.”
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 23: “Plan all the way to the end.”
It seem the planning and development of superior weapons was beneficial in the defeat, with a seemingly small loss of people. -
Let the games begin, lovely reunion for Henry with his friends. Looking forward to seeing where this goes
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Frances proved herself with ingenuity, and got the support of 5he townspeople to achieve their objectives.
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That was a sad ending, even though we knew it was coming. Thanks for the journey.
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That assistant headmaster was very harsh… they need to talk, and hopefully Dad will be able to help…
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Wow, so much drama. My guess is that Michael is Ben and David’s son, and now they’re going to have another one. That twist with the blood type at the end. Very dramatic cliffhanger.
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Suit for the dance acquired. Soren realizes he wants sex with Connor. Neither of them have any knowledge of what they are doing and the discomfort halts the joining, for now. And they both love each other.
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Great start to the story.
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Micro got the wolves to safety. Still wondering what is this long ears, one of the wolves show him an image… if it’s still out there is it a threat to them? This cliffhanger in the middle of Martina’s story leaves me really wanting to know more. Excellent chapter.
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Chapter 22: “Create compelling spectacles”
VBlew commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 22: “Create compelling spectacles”
Such a cleaver theft of the orbs, now to build something to counter the papal Flying Fortress… so many lives lost in political machinations. -
That was a very weird scene. Older people wanting to play games with student, of consenting age.
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That shadows scene with them battling reminded me of the first chapter… Maybe love alone isn’t enough, in this story…
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Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
The awkward moment at the baths was dealt with really well. The boys spying was also handled really well.- 23 comments
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Very good, now they both know they like each other. Hopefully their interactions are less awkward going forward.
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You’re Not Okay And That’s Okay
VBlew commented on frozenphenix's story chapter in You’re Not Okay And That’s Okay
This is an important message. Especially now. -
Maks missing the concert may come back to bite him. Will his father cut him off? We’re the drugs Aleks too something habit forming? Hopefully not and he doesn’t do something he’ll regret.
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Wow, what is this magical force that started in Grey’s dreams and is now manifesting. And Dave seems to be creating something to protect his mate. Anxiously awaiting what happens next.
