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Great conclusion to this section of their story. With new identities, and the wealth from the keep, they are starting a new life, and seem really keen on each other. No more questions about their relationship status… looking forward to more adventures with them.
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Loved this story. Looking forward to further adventures with this new team. All kinds of possibilities. I definitely see how having others with powers to talk to relieves the stress of needing to hide that from loved ones.
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Excellent conclusion to the mysterious ritual. We have an explanation for who was the cause. And the minister is chastised. Hopefully Jamie’s new role with this special squad will be more to his liking, and he can learn more about his powers and how to control them. The minister was not going to willingly create another monster. I do see him as a potential threat to the country with his mind reading powers.
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To The Medical Center We Go
VBlew commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in To The Medical Center We Go
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More interesting developments. Since Ken and the boys have not spoken yet they don’t know they are working on the same case…seems like the perps left the apartment in a hurry…
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The House at the End of the Road
VBlew commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in The House at the End of the Road
So Connor encounters something strange in the abandoned house, goes unconscious and is rescued by M. Then sees an Orb… unconscious again and wakes up back home. M must have some serious strength or can levitate things… then Connor hears M talking to someone, but there is no one there…. Very mysterious. Sunday with Hannah will be interesting, He needs to tell Hannah about his feelings, but is afraid.- 12 comments
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Good time getting high, and explaining to M why he was not wanting to kiss M. Lousy experience in school, being bullied by his father and people at school. Was Hannah around, then? Then getting the dog and making M happy. Waking up with M in bed was too much, and he gave in to the Kiss. But like we know from the first food. M does not know what to do, and he bit Connor’s tongue… Connor runs into the man in black who calls him by name. Then escapes into the swamp. Hopefully M is safe with Jack to protect him…
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This story is so touching. Looking forward to this revised version. It does seem to flow better. Great intro to the major characters.
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The soul stones may contain good people from the past it sounds like. And maybe they match the dragon eggs? Gordech can now communicate with them in a spoken language. That is very helpful. Great Cliffhanger with the dead walkers coming into the area they need to cleat the stuck gate mechanism…
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This was a difficult chapter. He was a killer, but not a torturer. I still have some hope that maybe Brohm is not dead…
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Interesting mystery caller who knew about Michael, and the mystery man again…. Hannah has some serious issues taking M away from Connor. Maybe Connor will be honest about his feelings for M now too, he’s on his way to save him.
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Connor is beginning to like having M around. The attention is disturbing him some because of some past experience. Is Hannah jealous, or possibly coming to understand Connor more?
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Great chapter, the suspense is palpable. They have the building plans, and there are 3 levels, so maybe they can go under this shield to access where the ritual is happening??
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New story to me. I love the beginning. A boy appears out of nowhere in a swamp. He has a Mother figure. Goddess, maybe. Nice he has no memory of who he is now, it seems like possibly Fae? Or angel, “Michael” definitely caused a reaction. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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Loved the games to subjugate the nobles around Birmingham.
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River seems to be able to physically take care of the stupid client, hopefully the threat is just intimidation, and won’t result in something bad. The smile and feelings for Kenji seem to be sneaking up on River. And now we have a date to look forward to.
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Now that the secret Thomas has been keeping from Zack is out, maybe the can address if. If he doesn’t run away again.
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Simon is getting a new teacher, even if he’s a necromancer and will not feed Yidian desire.
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Awesome chapter, checking out the neural interface connected to the other “bodies” going to the planet surface, space walk on the exterior.. Being vegan myself, the explanation and support for Ian not wanting to eat animals any longer was very nice to read.
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Glad the are going on a quick holiday. The flashback to the past is pretty traumatic, good on Keith for seeming to get over his harsh experience with his father.
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They escaped the cave with the help of something luminescent. Now back in the daylight a Daemon appears. Hopefully like the rest, this is just a dream. Possibly a premonition of unfinished business with Helmsley. Good cliffhanger.
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They all fought together, and we got the first glimpse of a shadow slayer. And the huge potential gift of sand dragon? Does that mean that they could become sand dragons, then transform into their current form? Love how all of these stories are converging.
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It looked like they got completely lost in the cave system under the keep. This is fresh water so it has to lead somewhere. Maybe after some sleep they will be able to get the light going again.
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Chapter 7: The confrontation.
VBlew commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: The confrontation.
So much emotion in this chapter. The the cliffhanger with the question at the end. Mateo needs to figure out who he really wants to be with. Henry also had some soul searching to do, he is the one who out Mateo in the gilded cage, then left him alone… -
Great chapter, both bodies discovered, and some possible clues from their background in High School. From the scene of the crime, blunt force trauma and both being shot, so possible ballistics reports too. I agree that something is off with the principal’s reactions…
