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I’m thinking that was some device that triggered the tree growing, and not Daeran’s ability..
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As a Sci-Fi lover myself, the premise of having these colonies in place is very interesting basis for the world the characters inhabit. Looking forward to where this goes.
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Great start with the introduction of these two guys with very different experiences so far.
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Glad they got the evidence that Meg had been cheating on Jake…. Now getting his Sister’s stuff back was interesting. Coming out to his sister was a big step. Dealing with their father in person will be interesting. Looking forward to where this goes.
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It’s good to see Jonathan being able to open up and talk honestly about his past. I still think Rusty is a little jealous. Will see what happens there. Glad they’re talking more.
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Ok, so the soul color corresponds to the planet’s color. Earth being blue, and the green planet in the other galaxy. So the question is the green soul trying to build the tech to get back to the green planet or bring the beings from that planet to earth? Interesting premise, looking forward to where it leads.
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Great Story. Glad you picked it back up. It looks like it could be the beginning of an interesting friendship. Curious about what the green soul represents.
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Hopefully that is the end of Burt. These guys just keep having all kinds of needs to go to the hospital. Hope it calms down and they can enjoy life a little.
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Very true. So many lives given for our country to be.
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Such a wonderful chapter, starting with a loving and accepting family, and then the nervous young men being safe enough to be vulnerable and open with each other. Loving where this story is going.
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The cliffhanger from last week was worth the wait. Now on to the next level of their relationship.
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Great beginning to this next adventure.
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Interesting fight. Rafe found out that his opponent was stronger than he looked, and Andre was not hurt like he could have been.
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This story has started off really well. Looks like it will be a fun journey.
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Maybe Andre can get to Rafe before he gets into too much trouble. Sounds like meeting Lindsay is a very good thing.
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2. Step by step (I'll get to know you)
VBlew commented on gor mu's story chapter in 2. Step by step (I'll get to know you)
Great chapter, it’s nice to see how supportive and encouraging Lauti is. The backstory of his love of motorcycles was nice too. -
1. (Facing the Sea, waiting for you)
VBlew commented on gor mu's story chapter in 1. (Facing the Sea, waiting for you)
With this posted I went and read Southward, before reading this like you suggested. Looking forward to where you take the boys now. -
So glad that Robbie was not seriously harmed by the OD. What a strong character to show so much forgiveness and compassion as well. Loving this story. The world would be a much better place with families like this.
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Donovan is in big trouble, attempted murder….poisoning someone just to give your son a way up, when they’re not qualified. That’s going to devastate the son too. Hopefully the medics have what they need to counteract the allergic reaction.
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Great chapter, out exploring the campus, finding some interesting characters, and a party. Wonder what kind of party it will be?
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Great chapter, looking forward to the wedding.
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What an amazing story of two people looking for love, and finding it in a very remote place. Loved the two spirit part. It’s such a shame that the old was were so repressed by the new religion. I traveled to Alaska a few years ago and learning that the children had been taken from their homes to be educated with no sense of their ancestors histories was very disturbing. They now have projects to recapture some of that, but a lot of damage was done.
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Some good development. The boys are getting along, but maybe not progressing as fast as one wants. Opening up is sometimes difficult.
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I like the way your continuing on with brothers raising brothers. That Brandon and Rhett relationship is different from the prior version too. Looking forward to where you take this. The whole family is so loving and support each other, that makes this so good, even with the challenges they encounter.
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That was an extremely emotional chapter. That kind of abuse to deal with while raising children and protecting them from it must have been very hard. Glad they are back together and things move along better in their lives.
