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VBlew

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  1. Glad to see Corbin standing up to his abuser.
  2. I was thinking that was where this was going, there were clues that Vinicius didn’t kill himself.
  3. Great conversation, they are making progress.
  4. VBlew

    Chapter 24

    Great story, love the sci-fi aspect, you did a great job with setting the framework for that. Sad this part is at an end. Like others have commented, there is much more that this could evolve into for sequels.
  5. VBlew

    Chapter 22

    Adam is doing a fantastic job in his situation. Will be interesting to see if hypnosis will override the memory wipe.
  6. VBlew

    Chapter 39

    Good to see another chapter, and Jason standing up for himself. Hopefully Devin will be able to soon.
  7. Another incredible story in this series. Very well written. The caring and loving growing relationship between two people who really want to be with each other. The self doubt from Jenny is understandable give her being hurt in the past. Would like to see that hopefully evolve into self confidence in the future.
  8. Glad the are talking to each other better. Reinhard still needs to be more direct with what he wants. Less passive aggressive.
  9. VBlew

    Chapter 31

    Very well done for a speed writing contest. Sad it’s the end, but very enjoyable reading.
  10. This is a very interesting series. I’m glad you’re continuing to write these segments. It’s people having to work through what they conceived their sexuality to be. And that can be more fluid than they first imagine. Great work.
  11. VBlew

    Chapter 29

    That was a lot of Drama. I do hope they got to him in time. At least he now knows he may be able to integrate the personalities
  12. Another great chapter. Been missing this storyline. Looking forward to Cyrus’s performance. That was a pretty traumatic time on his first shift. Glad he shared that with Kaplan.
  13. VBlew

    Chapter 27

    Making up was good. Hopefully Erith seeing someone will help him.
  14. VBlew

    Chapter 100

    Looking forward to his choice. I’m thinking he’s going to touch the stone, then we’ll see what kind of power he gains.
  15. VBlew

    Chapter 25

    Yes, lots of dysfunction going on in this story.
  16. Glad you’re back. Great chapter, new progress with the American pack
  17. VBlew

    Chapter 20

    Hopefully Erith gets to connect with Blake before he leaves the store. And the figure out why Blake has not been getting his messages. This is an interesting twist, and may help Blake heal some.
  18. VBlew

    Chapter 17

    Seems like they need to talk more to each other. I get Erith being new to knowing about the additional alters. That would be frightening enough to have to deal with.
  19. Glad to see they are actually communicating with each other.
  20. VBlew

    Chapter 14

    More excellent work. Crazy plot twists and all.
  21. VBlew

    Chapter 9

    Been missing this story. They are so interesting. If your on a roll with the ideas. Please continue.
  22. This just gets more interesting. The American pack, unturned American Matthew.
  23. VBlew

    A Flppant Guard

    Looking forward to where this goes.
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