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So there are more powers that Mattie may have, and were being suppressed. Hopefully now he will be able to use them and possibly stay out of harms way. Was the suppression part of why he got hurt so much in the past? Why didn’t the healers come to help him? Why did they leave him in a coma for so long? So many questions…. Looking forward to catching some bad people again, and taking their powers away, again.
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Wukong is a fast learner, quickly taking his lessons and performing matter manipulation with just his mind. Science vs Magic is just a matter of the particular audience.
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Thank you for this story and the courage in your own life to live and love. It’s amazing to me that as a society we seem to be regressing. We are all human beings, each of us individual creations of God, yet that seems so hidden by outward appearance for some and for those of us who are gay or otherwise different sexually that is not necessarily visible, but still a difference that some Hate for whatever reason. This story is something that deserves a much broader audience.
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Lots of layers in this chapter. Getting some historical perspective on how they are all related, blood/turning or oath. Hopefully Konstantin and Katherine are not setup to where they have to fight each other.
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So Yashuki found his calling in a bathhouse? Interesting ending. Seems hat everyone is moving forward with their lives.
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Chapter 37: Endearing Epilogue
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 37: Endearing Epilogue
Great ending to this trilogy. Looking forward to the next stories. It’s been an emotional ride that was thoroughly enjoyable throughout. Your world-building with this pack and everyone they encounter has been an amazing adventure. Bravo. -
Dogs are amazing at so many things. And Rebel seems to have special training to work with people who need his level of just being. Looks like the therapy is making progress of getting the story of abuse out. Dominic seems to want to improve which is really important.
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Chapter 3 "Normal" Life
VBlew commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in Chapter 3 "Normal" Life
Tobi is a saint to work through all of this with Dominic. There is so much going on with Dominic when someone treats him badly, like the Boss who would not listen about him being in hospital, that he goes into a state where he is mostly unaware of his surroundings. This seems pretty dangerous. A least a little progress at the end. Maybe finish his schooling? -
2 Resurrection and Hospital
VBlew commented on Georgie DHainaut's story chapter in 2 Resurrection and Hospital
It seemed like he was making progress with Tobi listening to him. And maybe with Tobi telling the Dr what he’s learned they can make some progress together. This condition of being broken seems like it’s going to take a lot of work for him to trust anyone again. -
Devlin did say “I like Marc very much but all of this luxury is just a bit too much for me, I just don’t like… well you know how I feel,” So it is possible that there is a relationship possibly, but he has to get used to the wealth. Back to the parents estate which his siblings may be hiding from him. That could change his net worth and maybe make it easier. Seems like he wants to make his own way in the world.
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Damn. He blew his life apart, for what? A little power on campus? Corbin has been a tornado this entire story, and Pete still wants him to find himself. Peace is powerful.
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Parker’s last comments are so true of someone in a lot of emotional pain, just wanting to shut down. Fortunately ha has a great support system with friends and family around him. This was a sad time, but may be the beginning of healing a lot of things for the community.
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The training to become a fighter is important, even if to just defend himself. Wouldn’t want to loose a head! That shadow gift is a great one and maybe the rarer form. We know of two other gifts now. Plus he seems to know when to avoid things, like shaking Oriole’s hand…
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Strange interaction with the security on LHI, this island was in another story, and maybe they were being protective of some VIPs on the island, but maybe not? Looks like Dev is getting happy with being on the yacht with Marc.
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So, Matt has some of the family abilities, are there more coming? That is a handy ability, but it seemed to need touch to initiate, and he seemed to be out while it happened, so would need someone protective around him while it happens in the future.
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Travel plans in the future, but Thomas did not bring that up at his meeting with Jonathan and Lachlan, curious?
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Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
@astone2292 first you are an amazing author, I’ve read all of your wok here on GA and your story telling, world creation is superb. I had to step back for a minute to process my feelings with what happened to Vincent in this chapter. At the end of this one he gets to come back from the dead and be with his mate, whom in itself is amazing. If the choice is between being dead or being alive without magic… I’m choosing being alive. It’s disappointing to lose something that is a part of you, but he still has love in his life, and that is worth a lot. It’s your story to tell and please keep writing. -
Interesting twist on the plot with Marc’s sister needing to be rescued. And the need for acting undercover.
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I Didn’t Want To See It As Love
VBlew commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in I Didn’t Want To See It As Love
This was an interesting chapter. Yes they need to discuss what all three of them want in the relationship, we don’t know what Yashuki is thinking or feeling yet, but his actions show that he is interested in both of them. I met some guys who were in a 3 way relationship when I was really young, and it seemed like an open relationship. I slept with one of them, at a beach, then again back at their home in the city. It seemed like they had worked on the rules and boundaries of their relationship. Hopefully if the guys in this story want this polyamorous relationship, they can work it out. -
Very interesting the meeting with Jesus, and the transgender beings. The cruelty perpetrator had a long punishment, but will they come out of it any different?
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Glad you are back writing. This chapter covered a lot of ground. It would be really good if Tala can reverse the wolf spirit damage. I have no doubt that they will get the land situation sorted out. And maybe find out who else’s been bad actors in this whole situation.
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Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
VBlew commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
So you said you left us a clue, Terik said she was thinking of him as her assistant. So would that include some upgrades to his powers? What a cliffhanger you left us with. -
Xiwang changes what he wants to do now that he has more information about the gods and what they want.
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I’m still suspicious of Yashuki’s motivation with Thomas…especially if he was going with Thomas to his flat.
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Finn is such an amazing guy to love Alec so much and help him go through everything emotionally. Plus getting Alec in shape by running has positive side effects for their time making love. It’s sad to know that there is just one more chapter, but all good things eventually end. Looking forward to where this goes.
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