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Know when to stand your ground and when to retreat, to live another day. Beautiful piece.
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Bringing Up Himbo, Part Two of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bringing Up Himbo, Part Two of Three
Finn isn’t what he’s pretending to be. The ability to hack a computer, get access to the competing books, background research on the community, there is something much more going on there. Was he a plant? Did someone want the winner of the fellowship to have a companion? So many options. -
Adam was finally able to say goodbye to Jamie, that was a beautiful ritual.
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It’s very interesting that the spell book has deliberate mistranslations so that if they are cast will bring ancient evil beings into the present… wonder where she got the book from? And is what she is trying to do with the goddess ascension an error too?
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Ain would be a good Herald. But it’s not something he is ready for. And he doesn’t want Fenn killed.
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Interesting historical perspective. The subset of individuals we get to see in the story played out in the background of a tragic history. Wylan is very endearing and charming center, his ability with animals will be very valuable.
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Louis is learning more and more how to avoid being injured. The ability to sew well is a great skill and they are making money with that skill now.
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Loving these characters. Daredevil is blind and can fight quite well. Wylan is very good and eager to learn. Val is enthusiastic in her encouragement of this couple.
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Bringing Up Himbo, Part One of Three
VBlew commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Bringing Up Himbo, Part One of Three
Finn is quite the character, apparently just what Ian needs but doesn’t want to admit to. -
Jacey was very helpful, especially on the bike ride. The antiques dealer seems shady.
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Yes, teleported to another world! Is this where all of the people in the asylum went? Is time different here, and these people are descendants? It looked like one of them mentioned a myth?
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Malik has a little trauma after finding his friends kissing. The blue light kind of reminded me of a transporter beam in StarTrek, but it left the flashlight?
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Chapter 3: Blessings In Paradise
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 3: Blessings In Paradise
Very curious that Jamie mentions the tools they will need and they show up. Fresh water, tools for making it safe to drink and hunt. Then the big reveal Connor wanted Jamie and Jamie had freaked out on him. Maybe they both wanted it but were afraid of the social pressure… time to find out. -
Beautiful ending. Gold Album is huge. Shaun’s decision to make it all official was perfect.
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The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
VBlew commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
Big step for Kitt, agreeing to go for the GED. He is smart, he’ll do fine. His confidence is coming back. Is Mateo going to reach out to ask Matt to get Kitt’s ID? -
Very fun chapter. Especially loved the marriage proposal at the end.
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This was a good celebration for Sam as he departs his hometown. Ser Graham is very cautious about his facial appearance. It may have been something in his youth he was teased about, which may no longer be an issue, or it could be something. He is willing to show Sam at some point in the future. I have a feeling that Sam’s imagination is not wrong about the affection either.
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Nora got what she had wanted for her birthday, Daniel is coming apart looking for Malik, if that’s even his name.
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Chapter 10 - Our Story
VBlew commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Our Story
Beautiful ending. James had to be first to admit his feeling and push the issue of them being more than friends. Glad that Marcus was able to agree this time. They really are a great couple. -
Killian does need to figure out if he wants a relationship or not, and with whom. The nightmare is disturbing, and his history with them being prophetic is even more. He needs to ask someone, like maybe Jace about it.
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Seems like the queen may have done something to the Herald for him to be acting this strangely out of character if the people around him are noticing he’s not what he normally is.
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Awesome, they won runner up and Fan Favorite… which was the non fixed part of the show. Then to get a contract with management, that’s huge. Will Gretchen and Ben still leave? Or just take a break for the baby? The $10K will help everybody. Sad to see this story winding down, but looking forward to whatever you do next.
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Finally back together, and cleared out the mess they created. Now to fix the situation, and get back home.
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Fenn is torn by what he is being forced to do now, but truly seems intent on pleasing his master so much that he can’t see how wrong it is. Fortunately Ain was able to get his family to a safe house.
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Justin was amazing. Brooding, then active in getting Tim to bed… wondered about the Adult content being broadcast. Could be an issue for the “sponsors”. We didn’t gather any drama with Ben at the debate…
