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Chapter 60: Weekend Recovery
VBlew commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 60: Weekend Recovery
This was building up. He was having sex as an escape but also with a purpose, so he could improve an ability. Matter manipulating seems to need some additional component that neither he nor gAI know about yet. -
The interaction with the bird was delightful, can’t help touching where you’ve been warned. It is surely true of parrots, they have once bites and others that would take off a finger. The new clothes sound amazing and make him look amazing. Still trying to imagine what the more human form is like. Does he have a snout, or more human face?
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Are people targeting Shawn for some kind of abduction? His teacher is backing him up and knows about 2 abilities. The director assumes just 2 abilities too, but picked Strength for the 2nd one….
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That was awesome mentoring Billy.
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Nice reconciliation of the brothers.
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This snuck in and captured my attention. Looking forward to how this story plays out.
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This is not just bullying, it’s like stalking. How did they know where to find the guys?
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Preparing to Lose Everything
VBlew commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Preparing to Lose Everything
Ace made a good decision going to the counselor. Now for some other decisions. -
Loved the baking lesson Brian granted. And the exchanging of information to get a little more background on out previously intrepid young men. Now they have something to build on, the initial tension broken, and sleeping in bed.
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Chapter 3: A room full of unlocked doors
VBlew commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 3: A room full of unlocked doors
Very interesting this app. And then is the responder a person or AI? -
Frosted Hearts: The Gay Bar
VBlew commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The Gay Bar
Interesting chapter, Five dressed up his boyfriend like a gay Ken doll… the scene at the gay bar was interesting, Ethan was horny thinking he could get something going, but Percy seems committed to Five now, even if he is flirty… I could imagine the scene on the dance floor, reminded me of my early days in dance clubs. -
Classes Begin, So Does Trouble
VBlew commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Classes Begin, So Does Trouble
Lots of homophobia in this town. The video puts the reformed guy in the self defense category. The swim meet set up a good friendly competition on the team, they both will be better for it. And a personal best for both of them. -
Love this chapter, another kind to ability revealed. They will be glad for this lesson of direct questions in the future.
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Antipathy and Invisible Battles
VBlew commented on Invnarcel's story chapter in Antipathy and Invisible Battles
It seems like someone has the ability to wipe memories, but what is happening to the guides that they need their memories wiped? -
This makes sense, Tabby is like Peter was when Will first moved into Brody’s house. Just took his place and took over the gardening. Love their interactions and the fact that Granny knew both of them so well. I bet Alvin is up for the task of a meal from scratch.
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Charlie & his Aunt Daphne
VBlew commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Charlie & his Aunt Daphne
Aunt Daphne is very full of herself. This may finally give Charlie a way out from their relationship. There are other buildings at Louis’ which Charlie could probably use for his work too, saving them both a lot of money. -
It’s not clear how his father found out he was arrested… having the solicitor there was good for Kieran. This whole hierarchy is interesting to see happening. But with Ben not talking, Kier is bound to make errors, we just found one… Riley.
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CHAPTER 6: THE FIRST DATE - PARKS & RECREATION
VBlew commented on LJCC's story chapter in CHAPTER 6: THE FIRST DATE - PARKS & RECREATION
Very interesting, why did Klebber go on the date in the middle of another date?.. since this seems to be in RomCon territory, they miss each other at the restaurant…. -
loved the geek out scene. Then back at the cottage Tabby did not stand for being objectified. Good on him. Then he tells Alvin what he has to do to be partners. The tension keeps growing they both want each other but Tabby says Alvin needs to ask for what he wants.
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Wow, the coach was anxious, but drew it out to make them both have an enjoyable time.
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Was Tristan the judge? Interesting twist.
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Eitan definitely has something to do with the bullies…. New clothes that fit, and getting out and playing with friends. Nice day.
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Ash and Axel! Hopefully it’s also a sexually compatible match too. We get some insight into Silas finally.
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Nice ending. Leo got enough help to realize that he could try with Jeisa. That’s huge progress.
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Nice, he seems to have healed the Great Dicku. That has to be worth a lot. What powers do the seeds have.
