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Chapter 12 Boy Meets New Year
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 12 Boy Meets New Year
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There is Jesse’s AI who has not commented on this new situation she may have some ideas too. She knew what Gremlin was and Hughie did not. So glad they got back together and are going to have their first intimate time. Hope they don’t get interrupted…
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Beautiful beach trip. This was the first time they took time with each other to be intimate. Glad Kent has made the decision to stay.
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Good thing they were able to get a flight the next day after the ship left them in port.
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At least Noah and Shiloh know they are going to continue to be a couple. I was right about who as bidding on the cars… Little B continues to surprise.
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Young Theodore revealed he has the flint for the ember casting ritual. Now off to meet the evil wisdom tree… they seem to be getting through his defenses. This is a very interesting illusion, if it’s not time travel. I would think current day Theo would have remembered this pair of wolves from this momentous day. Hopefully they can convince this Theodore to give the flint back to his father to save the pack?
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Sky knew what he wanted and the best positions for what they needed to do on the couch. The name slip up was easily corrected. Editing is going to be interesting. This wasn’t just acting for these guys, and it seems that really will come across in the film. How natural they are together.
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Glad everything is working out for Ray. He was abused and it led to him overreacting to a very out coworker. The company now has a better compliant process and hopefully if anything like this happens in the future, they can get the people help sooner. Martin needed to learn what he didn’t know about sex with a man and who better than the gay couple living in his house to answer, once they got why. Nathan may be in for a good surprise.
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Damn. Will Cian have another portal to possibly come through? Miscreants who desecrate a historic site like that need to be punished…
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Those last comments are worrying, did Daryan have others on his side or was he working with the Queen all along?
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This is so hot… looking forward to part 3
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Big decisions. Can he do something with his education in the family business in Bangkok? That wold make staying and being with Marvin a better decision than just heading back to the US? Would he ask Marvin and Devon to move to the US with him?
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Missing the ship for having sex with a local boy is not a good idea, Caleb. The time must have really passed quickly. If they don’t make it back in time, the family may feel responsible for taking him on the excursion.
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Chapter 177 Stephanie's Secret
VBlew commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 177 Stephanie's Secret
It’s sad Rory is ignoring Robbie. But words can really hurt. Stephanie is really manipulative, getting pregnant over a $50 but was stupid. -
What an excellent ending. Not a happily ever after, an after of a terrible fight brought about by an egomaniac, and ended by a grieving Elven Mage.
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Interesting that the spire returned to the planet. Gremlin is an excellent spy. I’m thinking Mickey needs to capture the spire, and name it Vega Vixen 6, that ship could deter the father from getting Isiah back!
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The body swap is interesting. They are able to speak the necessary languages to communicate with those around them. Wylan being able to see is new, does he retain his ability to hear as well as he did in his own body? Ishan is doing really well being blind. He should still be able to do magic, if Wylan is as powerful as he believes he is. They are learning that people are just people. It’s the stupid religious zealotry that is helping both sides fighting….
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Marvin is very good for Kent. They will make a great couple if they finally decide to go there.
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Chapter 11 Boy Meets Holiday
VBlew commented on Grayson Rose's story chapter in Chapter 11 Boy Meets Holiday
They have a while longer on the train… and time in New York to develop their relationship even more, and another train ride back to school. That’s a lot of time together to really get to know each other. -
I think Malik and Rhaelce are staying in the forest while the others go to the village, they don’t really have anything to trade with, and have been trying not to be found, even if they are so far away from Rhaelce’s home. The similar light and transportation to this world story by Chihiro is interesting, so he’s not the only one traveling, there have to be others from the asylum too… another language to learn. Does Souza speak Japanese? I’m surprised that Malik and Rhaelce are not trying better to teach each other their languages…
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I Think I Secretly Enjoyed It
VBlew commented on Wombat Bill's story chapter in I Think I Secretly Enjoyed It
Gran is full of surprises. Her advice is sound if it feels good try it out, labels about sexuality at a young age are confining, and just because you’re primarily attracted to men, doesn’t mean you can’t like a woman/girl… -
The location with the cabins is amazing. I remember those Northern California lakes with no lights around, the night sky is amazing. You can see so much more than anything near a city. Brant is being very romantic, and hopefully honest about his feelings as Sky is loosing his ability to keep any sense of distance emotionally.
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Johnny seems to be at a turning point in his life and Bruce comes along seeming to offer an opportunity for something new. They are both insightful. Is Bruce a bodybuilder? It doesn’t say, so I’m assuming we will find out. They sure seem attracted to each other. Looking forward to the story.
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They could have warned him about the jump scares in the haunted house, he could have hurt the actor. Chocolate was different from what he had before.
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If the Father pursues, I think he’s going to be in for a rude awakening, if Isiah asks Quar to get rid of him…
